VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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virumanu

@virumanu

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#481

awww atlast u updated..loved it...it was fab..u made me cry yaar,and atlast virumanu cnfessd their love...and manu's misunderstanding is also cleard ..waiting 4 the next ..plz cntinue sooonn

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

finally heres an update from nisha ...thanx alott ya for updating this one 😃

and the update damn really emotional one specially both of thems POV soo well written and you have taken the whole manvi getting back to normal thing in the right flow...just tooo goood...and virat's love , care and the thing of keep trying and never giving up on her just brought her lost self esteem bke...and both bke together ...😃
waiting for the next one

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Syed695

@Syed695

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Awesome Nisha👏..!!u have nailed it with right words and complete emotional ride...Loved it...they are insanely love with each other...the huge contrast in the same person..which was clearly written in the FB and present...and the pain both has gone through with each others absence..Simply SUperb👍🏼..Eagerly waiting for next..Please update soon...😃!

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Huma

@Huma0301

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

Omg heart touching update
emotions amazingly portrayed n written
virmans pain n guilt aaawww!!
dnt want them to seperate nw after this hardship

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

amazing update

it wa so emotional

loved virat amd maanvi's pov

they loves eachother so much

maanvi felt insecure

at last they confessed their feelings

plz cont soon

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roshreb

@roshreb

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

awesome emotional update...the way u have portrayed their pain, guilt, fear is just outstanding...she mistook his love for pity..finally they confessed...their lives and happiness depend upon each other..waiting for next part

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Rashina

@Rashina

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#487

Wow awesome update.
Their emotions r nicely potraited

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itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#488

awesome updates

manvi insecurities

and virat trying to bring her old self

loved both the updates

really emotional

update soon

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bluebolt

@bluebolt

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#489

Nisha, it was heartbreaking - Virat and Manvi's pain. But, I am glad they both communicated and things are all in open. Your writing is awesome as anyways. It is so simple and the same time full of emotions. I want to see good laughs and old Manvi in the next few updates. I always love your characterization of Manvi -in each and every story of yours. But, I think that is because you bring a little bit of your own spunkyness into it :p

ignore the typos - my laptop broke down and I am on phone. love the update and eargerly waiting for next. can you please update break my heart a million times???? i miss it sooo much!!!!!