VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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Amy Budhrani

@Fairy-Ami

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Posted: 12 years ago

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nia-holic

@nia-holic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

omggg

u stopped at such a bad place 😡

i cant wait now 😭

btw the update was awsummm 👏

i felt each and every word u wrote

your writing gave an actull feel to the reader

seriously u are a amazing writer

thumbs up 👍🏼

nd PLX DO PM ME THE NEXT UPDATE

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Sheetal

@serialfreak

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

I just read all the parts now. The story is heart wrenching reading about Manvi's pain. Finally Virat is back. Can't wait to read how Manvi is going to react seeing Virat.

Sheetal

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jayanthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Nice update. Virat is back. Eager to know how Manvi is going to react on seeing him.
Pm me.

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Aenna

@Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

Nisha plzzz update it
now i cant wait plzz

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itsfate

@itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

plz update soon

can't wait to read more

Edited by nisha_virman - 12 years ago

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

wow part 3 and 4 were just amazing,
your writing is great , you make us easto imagine the scene ..
manvis pain, how she wait for him to come back ...
im soo happy that he is back , at last true love will win 😊

fabulous work

wish you best luck for your exams

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bluebolt

@bluebolt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

Nisha, when I started reading break my heart a million times, the pain, the emotions, the extent of Manvi's hurt, man! the way she was trying to deal with it by cutting herself, it was just heart wrenching. I mean it was so so intense and passionate; reflecting such pure and unconditional love.

now in here, again, you have portrayed Manvi's pain, in so much more depth - what are u doing? u r literally causing my heart to bleed. Reminded me this show called Homeland on a war prisoner - it was very moving for me when I first started watching it, but this is so much more deeper. u really have a golden heart, u take us into an ideal, perfect, fantasy world where such magical people exist.

please continue and pm me ur next update..Luv Anu ❤️

Edited by bluebolt - 12 years ago