VirmanOS Tonight I'm Getting Over You part6,7 PG64

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prathe

@prathe

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

very well written hats off looking forward to read your nxt update pls do pm the nxt update
once again awesome update!!HATS OFF!!

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Anagha

@anu1989

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

Eeekkks Finally Viraat is back I am cho happie shappie

Oh man it was so heart breaking for Viraat to listen to what Mannu went thru without him 😭

I don't know how long but I do know that without you I would lose both my head and my heart." My Mannu she so meant it & that's exactly what she went thru !!!

Btw in the current storyline of the show there is a similar kind of track coming up maybe, I so wish the track wud be as awesome as ur OS !!!

Can't wait for VirMan Meeting At last😊

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preetipc

@preetipc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

Finally , commenting after a long time in IF.Finally finished reading all the updates .Loved it .Felt bad for me as I am so late😭😆.Loved the updates nisha . Love the way u portrayed the pain of Manvi so well and now as Virat is back, he could see for real see wat she is through and she meant wat she said .Loved her so much .Greates suffering than one's own is seeing or hearing the suffering or state of suffering the person whom u love the most is,which Virat is now going through.More than wat he suffered physically and mentally , he now hears how his beloved suffer.

I'm very sorry for all the updates I didn't comment

P.S: Dont kill me😆 , as I know this comment would have made no sense , as I am reading a update and commenting after long.wat I wrote here would have been stupid😆🤣

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Nandita

@Nandita217

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Yes!! Yes!! Yes!! I just knew that Virat will be back!

God! He has to go through so much in hostage camp😭

But now everything will be back in place😃

Manvi will recover & will be back to normal!!! And virman will live happy ever after!!!!!

Please update soon!!!! Will be waiting!!!😃

All the best for your exams!!!!👍🏼

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

This st0ry is damn awes0me dear. I mean seri0usly amazing. Felt bad 4 maanvi. 0MG virat came back. Wa0. N0w waiting 4 next part when virman will meet. Plz d0 pm me the next part.

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Krupaa

@forever_young

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Nishaaa! 🤗

OhMyGosh. I am SO latee, and i am so sorry for that!

But Dudeee. Your flair in writing keeps improving in every single chapter. I have absolutely no words to describe your work.

Read it all in one go, and boy. I am dumbstruck.

The last two updates especially, brought tears to my eyes! <3

I lovee the way you showed the flashbacks...

This is just out of this world!

My poor Maanu! <3

And! Virat. I knew he was alivee! Oh Gosh! ❤️

This is just amazinggg!

The songs. Each and every one of them were absolutely perfect. Just perfect.

Just a Dream and Bleeding Love! Gosh! <3

And the other two songs too <3

Fabtastic! xD

Sorry for the delay in reply, please add me to the PM list... :'D

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X_Life

@X_Life

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#277

finally he returned home all alive but with wounds thats fine only for the promises he had made to his love
the way he got to know abt her state through his parents,the pain or sufferings she went through he himself blaming for all that she went through, his helplessness you presented it very well
now looking for them to come face to face
too excited for next part
update soon and pm me

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pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#278

he is back he read all mail which she send for him he gone through lot of torture and came to met her he alive think about her what happen when he will see her in such a bad condition and how she will react to see him again front of eye

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ekta_ice

@ekta_ice

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#279

hey u write amazingly well. the emotions portrayed in your story are so vivid and real. love all your works, be it perfect life, break my heart,trust and every other story of yours. it would be great if you could pm your updates I've already sent a buddy request to you

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

Both updates were amazing. .the way u show how manvi is suffering badly widout virat is nice. .its so good finaly virat is back. .n all d best 4 ur exams. .

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