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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter will be posted tonight. 😊
Precap

"Chotey."

She asked tentatively.

"Yes, Di?"


Arnav replied without looking at her as he took his bag from Hari Prakash.

"Akash told me that the show was a success."

"Yes, Di."

"Congratulations, Chotey."

"Thanks, Di."

"Akash also told me that some accident happened .. some girl fell .. and you caught her .."

Anjali watched her brother freeze. She was not sure what it was but his body language seemed very unfamiliar to her. And then his brother looked up. The very next instant, she knew, he was not angry. But there was something altogether different in his countenance. He seemed intense, grave.. a bit brooding?

"I just wanted to say, Chotey .. I mean .. be easy on her .. "

Anjali watched her brother closing his restless eyes. When he looked at her again, he was back to his regular self. Unreadable.

"It was an accident, Di. It was not her fault."

Anjali stared at him as if he had grown two horns. Not her fault? Since when had he learnt to let go of mistakes? Then she concluded, perhaps he had already lashed out on her.

"Did you scold her a lot?'

Anajali could clearly see frustration rising in his eyes.

"No, Di. Can I go now?"

Anjali blinked. He did not scold her?

"Haan Chotey. Go. Tum theek to hona?"

Anjali noticed the torrent of emotions suddenly inundating his impassive face and then subsiding at quickly as it came.

"Yes, Di. I am fine."

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Posted: 12 years ago
I felt so sorry for Khushi in the last update... Poor girl...you had written it really very nicely and it left a great impact... Words can be sharper than knife... But I felt sorry for Arnav too... He dint use those words deliberately though... They were used to handle a situation... But it stabbed her right on her freshly wounded heart again...

Hey Devi maiyya please make these both understand the truth and bless Arnav to talk sense n not transit his confusions to her...

Teaser got me excited... Now can't wait to read further
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Posted: 12 years ago
can,t wait..update soon 😉
n yeah super nice teaser 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Anjali doesn't know what has hit her chotay now, does she?

Lol! Waiting for more of Arnav and Khushi! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anjs

waiting...please dont delay it

Will be up before 10 pm IST tonight. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
interesting precap cant wait to read update...continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh Arnav! He's not going to come to a realization easily is he? But he is affected...

Now I cannot wait to see what Khushi and he talk about! Thanks for the precap.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haila! You posted precap for the next chapter and I realized that I still haven't commented on the last one..

I read it the day you posted but I had no words to tell you how awesome it was! and then I was caught with exams..

Arnav's longing to see her..and his irritation was so beautifully written..I could imagine it all!!

And then the ramp walk..It was just WOW!

Khushi falling into his arms...*speechless*

Arnav took control of the situation and handled it. But Mandy is a dead meat if Arnav comes to know that he did it all!

Maddy smirked as he witnessed ASR storming after Chamkili. She was dead meat. His plan was successful. He was frustrated that he could not push her harder so that she fell on the stage at the very onset. Well, this was not bad either. And ASR saved the show too.

"Gloating fool," Devi Maiya exclaimed, "You are only a tool when I do the master plan."


@bold- Waiting for devi maiyaa's master plan!


Devi Maiyya Rocks!..and so do you!!


But how will Khushi react to it now..


And the precap..Anjali!..Is she going to play cupid for these two crazy people? ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bs_deeps

res 😉 cant stop writing this much..

"Here for you, ladies and gentleman, is a traditional Indian woman."

and I am thinking "in the arms of her man" 😳

I hope this is not all you end up writing on the chapter. 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: iritz

Happy Birthday Dips !!!

Farha...

Lovely update !!! Since I have read it beforehand... 😉 and have already told u I loved it... Do I need to repeat it !?!😆

Arnav's candid confession and Khushi's final realization that he, in fact, does care about her... was beautifully depicted... the play of emotions... was brilliant !

I know it's coming to an end soon... but as I've told u many a times before... it's better to end it on a high, rather than stretch it just for the heck of it !!!

👏

What would I do without you?? 🤗
The writer part of me is indebted to you in so many ways. 😊

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