SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#761

I liked dt sentence 'in ur arm i feel home' hey dm plz now no misunderstanding Asr z not d unbeatable king like he z said love u arshi

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-MIMOSA-

@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#762

Brilliant, beautiful...loved it totally...👏

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Gim

@SansShyam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#763

wow...cant wait to read about fiery kushi...she might refuse to talk,arnav turns her and give her a piece of his mind as well..kushi outshouts him...another kiss and make up...

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Prasanna_dhanu

@Prasanna_dhanu

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#764

Great update, most interesting pieces were Devi Maiyya's monologue

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Sanchita

@Sanchitaarshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#765

Wow... Superb... Waiting for the next... Thanx for PM

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libbyferns

@libbyferns

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Posted: 12 years ago

#766

Beautiful chapter. Loved the ramp scene. So familiar yet so different. Please continue...

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#767

That was a great chapter! Loved how his eyes only searched for her!!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#768

Loved the chapters I missed...tooo good! Your writing...amazes me always...

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#769

one word BEAUTIFUL...
Loved Devi Maiya's thought he is the king of screw ups and she is no less so true, god when will they decipher the thing properly always misunderstanding eachother.
Now i am so sure more misunderstandings are coming up, but i truly love the way they make up specially Arnav so i love their fights.
Devi Maiya's remark for meddy was too good 'gloating fool' lol.
will wait for next update thanks for pm.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#770

I am now kind of not understanding what Arnav wants. He is confusing me and i guess its high time he clears up his mind and decides. But but..That he wont do. I guess there is still a final trigger remaining, something that will happen to push him and get Khushi.

For now, Arnav ji is in trouble. ;)

very well written. I loved the ramg scene.