SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19) - Page 80

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: arshi-pooja

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A big applause for u for sticking to arnavs character...
ASR was an exceptional character wid many trust issues...nd not a person who describes his emotions...
So the way u made arnav react was truly nd strictly to his character...nd i lovd it...
Khushi on the other hand is heartbroken...but m sure ASR will defintely do damage repair soon..

Thank you sweetie!! 🤗
I love ASR for the complicated character he is .. and I would never dare to change him in this story because this story is all about the two as they were .. just under different circumstances. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
another brilliant update of a superbly crafted SS. You have portrayed their dilemmas so sensitively - I can actually feel their emotions.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: faffy

another brilliant update of a superbly crafted SS. You have portrayed their dilemmas so sensitively - I can actually feel their emotions.

Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
wht hppnd aftr tht incident tht arnav has been this way?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww... cant wait for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swati-89

Iam so in love with ur Devi Maiya...

Such a rollar coaster emotional update.

But one line stood out in this whole mess for me, that even after she misunderstood Arnav's round abt way of his unique style of explanation...(which noone in their right minds could have added up to make 2 and 2 make 4 and understand why what she thinks matters to him!!!!!)... even after she is so hurt and is crying her heart out, yet in its midst, she understood this one fact that Arnav did care for her.


Loved the update.

Continue soon...

Swati

@bold & black: Bingo!! She understands of course .. but he needs to say it man!
Thanks for reading! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasanna_dhanu

Heartbreakingly beautiful and dangerously lovable note on tears, thanks for the update dear

About tears .. Just something I believe in. 😊
Thanks for always being there .. and the PM after every chapter. I look forward to it. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sruthiif.1710

You've written the update so beautifully...

Now Arnav Singh Raizada, brace yourself for more restlessness, more confused feelings... because you will see Khushi Kumari Gupta all not affected and professional... when you are shaken completely...

Go Khuhsi, just take this pain and he'll come back to you...

Here is someone who understands these two at my level! 😆😆
Loved your comment and thanks! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
BWAHAHAHAHA!!! Devi Maiyya deserves a pay rise! :P She's been working non-stop for the lovely mess that is ArHi!! HAHAHA! I'm so enjoying this!! Well...Arnav is definitely not the most articulate person when it comes to Khushi! *smacks head* I LOVED this update!! Brilliant!! :) I can't wait for more!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: N0306

Awesome.. One misunderstanding cleared and other clouded.. Now Arnav meant she was not his type not because of his status or any other thing.. Only because he is not into marriage or long term relationship and he surely is aware that Khushi is not in for sexual relationship with no commitment..

Poor girl.. Loved the update..

Hey! You got my and his perspective right! 😊 But he should have explained more .. man of few words .. doesnt really help always, does it?
Thanks for reading! 🤗

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