SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#661

n this time when i fall, i fell really hard in love with u...

arnav is a man of less words but his sometimes his words do "wonders" khushi is really hurt man...n maddy smirk all u can coz as soon as he got to know all this u're gone...loved the update...

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Nimie207

@Nimie207

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#662

That was really a treat...nvr thought it will turn up like this...first epi ki yaad dila di yaar..lovd it..n the way Khushi gonna react,dunno wassup nxt...impatiently waiting...

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#663

I was not expecting you to update and you did it! Grinning from ear to ear like a fool!

What a way to incorporate the ramp walk into this chapter, I have no words it was perfecto! And Khushi's interpretation of not being his type was so spot on! That statement has shattered her self esteem and I am sure Arnie boy is going to find out about the gravity of his mistake soon enough! I can't believe he did it again and that too unintentionally in the hopes of saving the fashion show, "An average traditional indian woman! You called your forbidden fruit average o boy! Loved, loved, loved how you described their emotions! I am practically dying to know what happens next😳

In the meantime how about a round of applause?

And thank you's for the good news about the next chappie coming our way by this Wednesday and the one after by the weekend, life can't get any better ::D

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#664

great update
poor arnav is confused and khushi is hurt
but liked his speech and how he saved the show
continue soon

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AbdulloveIPKKND

@AbdulloveIPKKND

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#665

The whole update was do good but you made me apprehensive. Now what should I do? It was awesome but I am still scared. Sigh lets see what happens.i hope everything will be fine.

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#666

Superb! absolutely adored it

Hats off to DM

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sree_dey

@sree_dey

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#667

Hayeee what an update. 😳.😳.😳.😳.😳

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simran

@crazymg.04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#668

awesome update... loved it!!!😉

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dilectus

@dilectus

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#669

NOT FAIR!!! NOT FAIR!!! MAIN ISKA BADLA ZAROOR LOONGI!!!

kahan jaake latkaya hai yaar!!!

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#670

loved the way you described arnav's feelings for khushi. his yearning, his wait ... the way she felt in his arms ... her lemony scent taking away his apprehensions