SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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sruthiif

@sruthiif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#681

What a smart as ASR is!!
Yeah I am still pissed off at him...at his inability to put his feelings in words... at hus ability to turn the unplanned mishap to his advantage...
Khushi is so affected with his words that she is undermining herself...
He himself is letting her be his 'forbidden fruit'...
Even I am too tensed along with Devi Maiyya..
DO upadte soon...

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bea_rom

@bea_rom

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#682

Loved this update
You described both their emptions so well
Arnav's eagerness to see her
Feel so sorry for Khushi
She thinks she is not beautiful enough for Arnav but his statement did not mean only that
Hope they clear this thing soon enough
Loved how you adapted her walking the ramp
His reaction when seeing her, having her in his arms
Just perfect
Hope h realizes what that means
Can't wait for the next update

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#683

Awesome chapter

Loved it

Arnav totally saved the show

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#684

res 😉 cant stop writing this much..

"Here for you, ladies and gentleman, is a traditional Indian woman."

and I am thinking "in the arms of her man" 😳

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An epic chapter 👏
How will Arnav make Khushi feel that she belong with him?
Hmmm

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cheval

@cheval

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#685

Fantastic uodate very very nice I love it cant wait for part b

Ayyye asr im feel so sad he didnt try to do this bt he did hurt her by his words pooor kushi tooo.. awww both of them suffeting I hope no more sadness sooon.

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samarablog

@samarablog

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#686

It is WOW.
(I am not going to write anything, but can not wait more :))
It is WOW..

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@ihtruda

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#687

Oh MY GODDD... DIDuuu... u r awesssooommmeee...👏😳

"Gloating fool," Devi Maiya exclaimed, "You are only a tool when I do the master plan."😛😉

I Just love youuu for this dialogue... Devi Maiya ke krupa hamesha aap par ho 😃

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Dreamcatcher

@Dreamcatcher

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#688

Very enjoyable chapter. Love your jaunty writing style. Looking forward to next update. Thanks!

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Nisha

@NishaAP

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#689

Awesome. Arnav covered up hole mess. Maddy did this. If ASR finds about this he will be dead meat. Poor Kushi already feeling low about her class and beauty. Arnav increased this by saying average woman.