SS: Of Lemons & Limes #4 (Chapter 17 - 19)

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TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#671

hahaha maddy dear u have just been used that too very badly :P
oh god! what will khushi do now!
the usual screaming-blaming or is it massive this time!

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Viji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#672

Res..

Unres...

I Loved Loved this update Farah di🤗🤗
Arnav's eyes searching for her and khushi's inner turmoils abt their differences👏Awesome one...
The moment khushi came to stage,the smell in the air changes for Arnav😳😳And their eye lock was
The trip and fall was written so beautifully...And she,his forbidden fruit was in his arms,her home...Loved it❤️
So all thanks to maddy for starting it and devi maiyaan for completing in full style😉😆
Now waiting to kno wats gonna take place in the dressing room😛

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#673

Loved it:) Can't wait for part 2 :)

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tsultana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#674

Omggg beautiful update again!!! Arnieee took ova the disaster!! That what makes him ASR!!! loved how he held her hand.
Now Maddy the fool! Hope Arnav kicks him out!!

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rati123

@rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#675

Amazing update !! What drama !

Cant wait for the next update.

Thanks.

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bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#676

omggg

goddd at d end moment u had to stop ...?? ohh just y y did u stop

i was at d end of d seat so engrossed in reading n u had to stop...aaarghh...yyy

dare u delay d next chp...

yy dis zulm to ur ..ardent fans

bt plsss cont sooon plsss

cant wait to read more

Edited by massu91 - 12 years ago

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devsum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#677

Lucknow scene revisited... i liked it...

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#678

Brilliant , loved it...his words have affected her so deeply that now anything he says or does she will connect to his earlier words...I loved how he is just consumed by thoughts of her...he sees her and wants to see her everywhere...loved the scene where she falls into his lap and knows its him as in his arms is the only place where she feels at home...her resolve to stay away from him when in reality she is as affected by him as he is with her...DM it time to intervene ! ...

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cool_tweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#679

loved loved the update. I would defi want Arnav to ask khushi what deo/perfume does she use before the story ends😆😆

I felt it was too short😭, but happy that u will be updating on Wed. I am going on a vacation hence wont be able to check it. Will see it on sunday n will comment on it.

So it was all Maddy's plan??😲
"Gloating fool," Devi Maiya exclaimed, "You are only a tool when I do the master plan."🤣🤣🤣
I love the role of Devi mayya!! 😆
She shifted her attention from Maddy to the crazy duo. If Arnav was the king of screw-ups, Khushi was no less. With these two together, it was impossible to relax.
So very true n thats wat makes it even more special!!
Felt bad after reading that this SS is ending soon. Give us some good romance before ending it😃. Bye for now.