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Posted: 12 years ago
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The opening paragraphs were blissful. Arnav, somewhere expected Khushi to confess that she reciprocated his feelings. A few chapters ago, he was afraid to think that what if Khushi reciprocated his feelings. Now, like any quintessential Lover, he wished it, too. Great!

Khushi was surrounded by "over-courteous 'men' " like dogs encircling their feast.. And Arnav got enraged, while very conveniently forgetting that he also did something of that sort in the Past..

Arnav's efforts to make Rohan see sense i.e. make him see that how random guys were ogling at his Bachchi, were great. But he failed to notice the fact that, as Payal and his Di were married, they were
off-limits to the 'men'.

Rohan's line, where he talked about the significance of sindoor and Mangalsutra, I felt that it was very much necessary..

I suppose, Arnav understood that how the signs of a married woman makes them out of bounds to ogling 'men'.. And then he might understand that marrying Khushi is the best possible solution to ward off any unneccessary and unabashed attention from 'men'.

I felt that this was a very crucial chapter , for Arnav.. He can't move on from the memories of his Past and the deeply ingrained idea that he might break his Promises.. On the other hand, every other person present were busy thinking about Khushi's marriage.

He is just going through a turmoil.

The demons of his Past do not let him move forward.

Anjali. What's wrong with her? She wants to go to that place which holds bad memories.. I've nothing to say about her.. She always spells Trouble.

The Kaleere had to fall on Khushi. Hehe!
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sheeshmahal really took away many things rather most of the good things from Arnav and Anjali. But one of the most important things, it snatched away from Arnav is the power to live a normal life, welcoming all the good things like Love, Promises , Marriage, etc.

Sheeshmahal only left the nefarious memories of his cheating father and a deep anguish within him, in its wake.

The descriptions of the study , attic and garden with all its wonderful and gruesome memories , both, were extremely well written.
Edited by greenMoss - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
oh dear !! What turmoils ahead for Arnav Singh Raizada - the possibiliy of khushi of beng married not to him, his pastmaking its way back in full force, his muse being in the one place he does not want her to be !! hmm rocky time ahead now - will this hurtle him towards that inevitable conclusion that Love does conquer all!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
it was too good to say anything about it..!!
it was a khushi update..!!
n arnav's insecurities ...
n he even thought about whether he is ready going to that zone...
that's definitely a big thing..!!
n the way you described about the favorites spots of arnav in seeshmahal...
the places he liked most n how they turned out later in his memories...
that was too good!!!

w8ng for next!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u so much for update Awesome chapter ...i so wanted to see that Kaleere thing n restless arnav...so honeymoon in Lucknow hmm interesting 😉...i wonder what khushi gonna do over there 😛...hope Arnav will give her company...Rohan is really sweet...hope everything goes well in Lucknow...cant wait to read more n some romance in all the couples 😳so update soon
n congrats on new thread..thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I wonder why you left Sami out of this mrg thing .. Only she left out 😆
Awesome part. I really felt bad for Arnav at some point.. First Khusi conveniently forgot to tell him that she loves him too out loud, then he has to endure the flirting boys around Khusi and top of that Rohan came along and started speaking about Khusi n her impending mrg... I really has to give to Arnav for not lashing out and showed such calm. But the worst yet to come .. Khusi is going to SeeshMahal.. The place where he lost everything in life and i am sure Khusi is aware of this.
Is Khusi thinking that Arnav is gonna accompany them coz i am sure everyone knows Arnav never go to that place , then how come she didn't think about the impact of her going there.
I feel it's time that place returns the happiness in Arnav's life ...

Congrats for the new thread...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update loved reading arnavs thought wonder how he is going to stop khushi from going to lucknow
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great update Farah
Lol arnav getting annoyed by boys
Wonder when khushi will say ILY
How will arnav stop khushi or will he go with her
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg...so khushi's marrisge talks...already damaging his brain! :P
Great update! You dont need to apologise life can sometimes come in the way...its ok:)
Great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww poor arnav...

so many things happened to him during the wedding...

first khushi dint word her feelings... then those leering boys... khushi's wedding in 2 months... n last bt not the least, khushi visitng Sheeshmahal... ufff.. and more over he has been trying to talk to her and she is busy.. god i hope he doesnt loose it...

awesome update...

thanks for pm..

please continue soon dear..

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