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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

this was a tremendously mind blowing update..
Pta nahii why did you tpe so long with hurt finger..
Swaron relationship was all good..
The confession tats unsaidly done seemed great..
Swayam way of understanding her looks superb.
I just love that forehead touch and cono that followed..
Kriyaansh the way Kriya did not dance for team was great cause she knows hy her mom stops her somewhere.
VP's meting them up seemed nice.
Rey acting trying to make her jealous and she trusting him beyond words.
I'll still say hope he keeps up her trust always,,
Fab update

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

aweee that was an awesome update

loved it very much

kriyansh are sooo cute

waiting eagerly for next update

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

awsome update...
Swaron was sweet
nd my kriyansh again together
i m soo happy
they r too cute...
Update soon

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Monal

@littleflaws

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Oh and forgot to mention, though I should not be. Keep me in the PM list! You should already know this.

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

That was such a lovely dovely update for me.. I just loved it to the core. Now i can see all the way Swaron and Kriyansh at same level so i am really happy.. 😆

The start with Swaron was fab.. their confession was the most needed one for me actually.. because their trial in show was a disaster which was meant to be a disaster because Palki had planned to be a disaster in end unlike you.. 😎 who are in angel here, my KSKS! Love you.. ❤️

Even the KR scene was so adorable and i can actually see kria making cute and weird faces and that crept and a huge grin on my face while in SS scene my heart was jumping like a monkey who gets enough of his favorite bananas! 🤣

Aww, the end in which Sharon learned that she has to build the trust was so lovely.. 🤗

Hey, if the finger isn't fell perfectly right then take some rest of a week or so because too much typing can turn your finger bad.. OK?

P - S : Of course do PM me ALWAYS as i am very much satisfied with the story now.. 😳

-Marium

Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

firstly congras for the thread...👏

awesome part...

loved it ❤️

finally swaron are together... nicely written...

so simple yet so BEAUTIFUL...

still Kriya cnt dance... why????

really want to see kriyaansh romantic DANCE...😳

Kriyaansh scene... awww

so finally they are together... hope to see some cute scene between them...

update asap😊

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rubykriyansh

@rubykriyansh

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Awesome update ..!
Loved it !
Thanks 4 d pm !

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Mera aaj ka midnite update...yyaaayyy...*dancing* 😃
ok nw enough of dancing..back to update...Swaron part..haaye loved it sooo much... Its a Real Relationship...eepppsss... 😃 ...honestly der confession scene is one of my mostt favv swaron scene...thanx for keeping a real relationship...showing der Love..der understanding towards each other... 😳

coming to VP sir scene...haha..it ws fun...even aftr tht whn Rey said tht he's thinking to propose Taani...and Kria's reaction... KHABARDAAR... 😆

Morover tht entire convo... "kaisi gf ho..tmhare boyfrnd tmhare kisi aur k sath relation mei aane ki bat kr rha hai aur tum ho ki" ... "bcz i knw i stay in ur heart..u love me as much as i love u"... Aawww... I jst loved this whole dialogue a lottt... 😳

Nw m waiting for Kriyaansh and Swaron Love Track to come haan... Dissapoint mat krna...

Beautiful chappy... Update soon... 😊

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

P.S.- WARNING : IF YOU EVEN DARED TO REMOVE ME FROM YOUR PM LIST NA... THEN I SWEAR... I WONT LEAVE YOU EASILY... TAKE IT AS A DHAMKI... BUT I WANT REGILAR PM's BY YOU..!!!

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Anddd... One more thing i forgot... Grrr... Silly me...

Congrats for your new Thread... 🤗 ... 7th thread...haha... This will seriusly break Ishq Junnon Deewangi's recoreds... Though i personally DONT want to break it... 😉 ... Congrts anyways... 😃