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**All page numbers (except for Page 1) are hyper-linked**
[OS] The dramatic return of... *NEW*
#1 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 1-3
#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11
#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18
#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22
*Name changed to D3 Revisited*
#5 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 23-26
#6 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 27-33

New Teaser OS [OS] Savior *New*
Part 34 - Page 1
Part 35 - Page 25
Part 36 - Page 32
Part 37 - Page 62
Part 38 - Page 76
Part 39 -
Edited by *Khushii* - 11 years ago
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(This all begins during the time when Kriya has to leave and she makes the decision of choosing her friends over her love.)

*Pink part added from this thread*

What happens when the person you loved from the bottom of your hearts betrays you? Or so you think that. The secrets are kept hidden thinking it will save others the heart break. Instead, what happens? More hearts are broken as a result! The chapters that were to remain closed, reopens with the new twists in their lives. Whether they like it or not, it the life's 'Guzarish' that they have to accept and live with while striving the find the end of the rainbow. How can one keep going knowing they can't have what they truly yearn for? What all will they have to go through in order to reach that? Keep on reading to find out!


All the characters are same as the show. It is just the events of my imagination that shape them differently from what they are in the show. Imagine them all like they were in February time before the real creative messed it up. Not that hard right? As it is, we all are yearning to see the real characters we fell in love with.

But, whenever a new character comes or I feel as if a CS for an already existing character needs to be given, I will add it here and also let you all know =)


Just a list of characters:

Girls: Kriya Ghai, Sharon Raiprakash, Neha, Vishakha, Rinni, Simmi, Taani, Naina.

Boys: Reyansh Singhania, Swayam Shekhavat, Vicky, Bharat, Amar, Nilesh and Shivam.

Professors: RDX and Karan Mallik (Yup, he's there) 😉 along with Nicole. At times, the principal + VP.

Others: Smriti Ghai


Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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g u z a r i s h .

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**Do read the background/Introduction above this post... Something new has been added**

Part 34


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ovoaNyWKAFQ[/YOUTUBE]

**video just for reference**

"Sharon, tum yahan?" Swayam asked, shocked and immediately worrying. "Did something happen? Are you alright?"

She nodded, walking up to him hiding her shyness. "I needed to talk to you. face to face."

He waited for her to continue. Gulping, she asked, "Do you still love me?"

Seeing the surprised look on his face, she prayed silently. Please say yes. Please say yes! She heard him clearing his throat.

"Achanak se ye question?" he asked.

"Do you?" she asked, refusing to reply to his question. "After everything? After the way I behave with you, do you still..?"

He took a step closer to her, his voice pleading. "Sharon!" He remained silent for a second. Then he blinked, softly held her cheeks in his palm. Looking her in the eye and holding it firm, he continued. "I will always love you; no matter what. And I know. I know you don't feel the same way. But that won't stop me from loving you."

Tears brewed up in her eyes. "Why? Why are you like this?" He could but only shrug his shoulders at her question. "I'm scared. I'm afraid that I won't be able to ever feel the same way for you." It stole Swayam's breath for a second. "I won't be able to love you with the same intensity. I like you but..."

He shook his head. "Please. Don't say it! Please!" His voice begged. He lightly brought his forehead closer to her, both of them feeling content in the moment and grasping in the beauty of the words, the silence.

Minutes later, Swayam asked, "Say it once more? I need to believe it."

She let out a laugh amidst the flowing tears. She sniffed before saying, "I like you."

He looked at her. "So Ms. Sharon Gaurav Raiprakash, will you go out with me, Swayam Shekhawat and bless his life with your magnificent presence."

She once again laughed and blushed at the same time. Still her face in his palms, she nodded stiffly. "I'd be delighted to." She replied, just as cheekily.

Even when she didn't say anything else, he knew what was troubling her. "I'll change myself. You won't have to feel as if I deserve someone else." He assured her.

She asked innocently, "You'd change for me?"

"I'd do anything for you Sharon!" he replied.

Slowly, she shook her head. "No, you've done a lot for me, not asking for anything in return. For once, let me do something. You stay the way you are. I like you that way only. I need to make myself a better person."

Now, he shook his head. "No you don't; you already are: the one and only."

She smiled at the compliment. "You don't understand. I need to."

He finally said, "I'll make you fall in love with me Sharon."

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The next morning, the gang was in the rehearsal room, up to no good. Swayam announced, "So now that Kriya's back, I resign from the captaincy post. It goes back to her."

Kriya objected, "Please... No. Mom did bring me back but I still have promised her I won't dance."

Rey was silently listening from his place, knowing now was not the time for him to speak.

"But you without dance..." Neha objected.

"I know Neha. But a promise is a promise. I won't dance ever again till Mom tells me to. And she gave me my friends... my life back. I can't ask for anything more."

Swayam reluctantly smiled. Kriya turned her head to look at Sharon, wondering how to go about it. Was it the right time to tell her? How would she react? She didn't want Sharon to think wrong. Sharon did after all live with their father for her whole life. She won't just hear anything against him like that.

Rey interrupted her thoughts, VP has called us."

"Everyone?" Sharon asked.

"No.. Just me, you, Swayam and Kriya." he replied. the four nodded, got up and left. The rest got back to the gossips.

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In VP's office:

VP said, "So welcome back Kriya."

Kriya smiled. "Thank you sir."

VP turned his attention to Rey, "Have you reached a decision about who the AGS will be?"

Rey nodded. "I was thinking that since Kriya is back, she can just resume her duties. Will save everyone lots of time."

VP nodded. "I was thinking the same." He turned to Kriya. "Kriya, are you alright with that?"

Kriya turned her attention to Rey. "You could have asked me first!" She gritted.

He smirked, "You were hell-bent on ignoring me. And besides, you'll no longer be in the dance team. So I'm sure you can at least handle AGS responsibilities."

Kriya didn't know why Rey was so firm on irritating her. Knowing this wasn't the right place, she turned back to VP and replied stiffly, "Sure sir. I have no problem with it."

"Good then." VP replied and then turned to look at Swayam. "Congratulations on winning the Foot Loose."

"Thank you sir." he replied.

VP continued, "And now, I'd like the CS and ACS to focus on the Charity event coming up in a month. And Rey and Kriya, you are to help them in any way they need being GS and AGS."

Everyone replied together, "Yes sir."

"That's all. You may carry on now."

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After exiting the VP's office, Rey said, "Sharon, why don't you tell Taani to help? She's been helping you lately. And Kriya just got back. I'm sure she's forgotten things."

Kriya fumed. "I haven't forgotten anything!! That's your problem. And please, no one can do a better job than me."

"Jealous?" Rey instigated.


"Grr! I don't need to be jealous of anyone Reyansh Singhania." Kriya replied back.

Swayam and Sharon tried their best to hide their smirks. Rey continued his job. "Oh yea, I forgot. Why would you be jealous?" He walked over to Swayam and kept his hand around his shoulder.

"You know Swayam, I was thinking... Taani and I are good friends. We get along quite well too, unlike someone here." He said indirectly pointing at Kriya. Kriya was silently listening while still fuming. "We'd make a great couple, no?"

Kriya's mouth gaped open. How dare he?!! "Khabardar." she threatened turning around. "Aisa socha bhi toh mujse bura koi nai hoga."

"Kyu? Why do you care?" Rey asked back.

She shrugged. "I don't. I'm just thinking about poor Taani and what she'll have to bear." She pouted making a sad, sympathetic face for Taani.

It was now Rey's turn to gap. Is she for real?! "Kaisi girl friend ho tum? Your boyfriend is talking in front of you to propose someone else and you're letting him?!" He asked, shocked.

She grinned as she had figured it out. "You're just acting. I know you'd never even think about it even in your imaginations." She replied back calmly.

All three were taken aback in a state of awe. Rey, though, felt a bit guilty. That perk would never completely leave him. "How can you still trust me?" He asked out loud without even realizing it.

She was taken aback at the sudden question. still, she answered. "Because I know you. Because I still hold your heart, right here." She pointed towards her heart. "Because I know, no matter what the misunderstanding, you'll always love me the same way I love you. No matter how hurt I am by your actions, it'll always be there in my conscious."

Rey was mesmerized by the answer, and not able to hold himself back, forgetting all the acting he was to do, he took her in a giant, tight hug. "I'm sorry." he kept on repeating. Kriya smiled, hugging him back, for finally she had everything that truly belonged to her.

Seeing them, Swayam and Sharon looked at each other. After their confession yesterday, they will still working their way around the awkwardness that remained silently. Seeing the trust Kriya had for Rey, Sharon knew she had to build upon that same thing.

Swayam blinked in assurance, in a way to let her know that they'll work it all out.

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There's the next update 😃 SwaRon are starting and all's well in Kriyansh land. So happy times ahead? I'll let you guys make that decision 😛


Note below!

Love,

-Khushi.


Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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Congrats to you and me for the new thread 😃 Please keep loving me and the FF the same way 😳

As I said in the first post, I'll be re-vamping the PM id soon. But if you want to continue getting PMz, make sure you comment!!


Next, for SwaRon story line- I am NOT keeping 'Trial' Relationship. Their like/love relationship is way above something as childish as 'trial'. I may not have expressed before but I did not appreciate that move by Palki and the creatives. I will NOT be doing the same as that. Therefore, it's a 'real' relationship.

KriyAnsh- well... for now, all's going well for them. Now, slowly, I'm going to be changing focus from just Kriya-Rey as individuals to Kriyansh as couple...

Taani- I'll just say... Read the OS when it's posted. Remember, I'm no Palki. 😃

I think I've said all that I needed to... Oh and yes, My finger is getting better now. In 2-3 days, t should be all back to normal 😳

85+ likes? And I always encourage as many comments as possible!

Love, Khushi.
Edited by *Khushii* - 12 years ago
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N since after a/n u dont do more posts

RESWAAA
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congrats 4 d new thread
update soon
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Congrats 4 d New Thread...Plzzz Update Soon 😊
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congragulation for the new thread... update soon and pm me...
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Res 😛
Unres 😊

M so sowie Khushi.. I hvnt been regular on commenting,Right..?!! Thts coz,me quiet no hell busy wid my college.. Under tonns of assignments But I do read ur evry update n wud love to continue readin "Guzarish".. Do not throw me out of d pm list 😆 😳

Cumin to d update..

Do I need to tell,How much I loved it??? If not thn also m gonna say it 😛 I freakin loved it lik anything..

B it swaron's Or Kriyaansh's part.. Throughout d update,I was jus smiling along wid tears flowin out makin my friends think tht I'v gone Nuts.. 😆 Ab they dun kno na.. Who r swaron n kriyaansh??? Mad ppl 😳

Thanks fr not makin Swaron's relationship a trial one.. Ur Right.. Thr Lik/Love is way above dis "trial" tag 😃

Poor swayam.. Shockd.. Sharon came to him.. Haha.. Evn was out of breath when she said I cnt feel d same way fr u.. 😆 but got contentment from sharon's I lik u !

I loved whn she askd.. Do u still love me aftr all wht I had done to u?? N he said.. Ur d one.. One n only.. 😃
N d way swayam askd her out.. Haye.. *Perfect*

Yay.. Kriya is d AGS.. Of GS Reyaansh singhania.. She's right.. No one cn do a better job thn her.. Eee.. Loved it !

Irritated Kriya.. I use to love her expressions thn.. Super cute expressions ! 😳

Shirtless wonder ka wonder.. He again used Jealousy.. 😆
I loved d one on one game of kriyaansh :)

Kriya.. She trusts Reyaansh more thn herself.. I wish Reyaansh would now keep d same trust on her ! She deserves it :) Reyaansh still is guilty.. It has to b re.. He failed to trust kriya n this surely would remain in his heart.. Only Kriya can get him out of it..
N m sure She ll..
D sweetest moment has to b whn.. Reyaansh says.. How cn u let ur boyfrn propose someone elz in front of u.. Poor Reyaansh 😆😆

"She was taken aback at the sudden question. still, she answered. "Because I know you. Because I still hold your heart, right here." She pointed towards her heart. "Because I know, no matter what the misunderstanding, you'll always love me the same way I love you. No matter how hurt I am by your actions, it'll always be there in my conscious." I read dis particular para for lik 10 times.. Its so real.. Khushi.. Hats off.. How easily u showed us.. What true love is ❤️❤️

Ur an extraordinary writer Khushi.. U know how to hold d interest of a reader n how to play wid d words.. N thts best about u :)

Arey wah.. Sharon trying to learn from Kriya.. Behen behen se nhi seekhegi toh kisse sikhegi.. 😛

m jus wonderin.. How wud u disclose d truth in fron of sharon?! Plz let Gautam Raiprakash tell her..
Waitin to c an amazin bond of Krisha !

Update real soon.. Waitin :)
Edited by Pihu.k11 - 12 years ago

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