ArHi FF: Finding Solace-#6 *Completed*

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#911

second time i'm typing this, first time IF ate my post😡

anywho, yay update!🥳

let me enjoy this for a minute

loved the play of emotions between arnav-khushi, they've come a long way from first few chapters😳

and really arya, interrupting mummy and daddy again! u haven't been taking lessons from ur anjali bua have you? although i like her more in FS than ipkknd😉

and payal--the tease😆 i loved that scene, u made me remember the show

keep up the great work S!

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Monasha

@monasha

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#912

OMG!! Finally the truth is out...
Thank God Arnav didn't get any comment to accuse Khushi as she was clearly defending herself with powerful comments...
And now Arnav n Shyam will be face to face
Update soon
I really wanna know If Shyam is good or evil as usual..

Edited by monasha - 12 years ago

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#913

Haww...hitting myself on the head.

So i have this special dedication by you and i arrive so late on the scene.😒

Me the stalking queen 😲 when it comes to all of my favourite stories and here i come 13-14 pages after the actual update..🥺

Wish life had not called me out so loudly this weekend, then i would have caught this chapter 12 pages before definitely.

Chalo koi nahi, so thanks for the special mention..

Now let me go and enjoy mera chapter...

Aur Res for the comments will come back to this...and edit.

*Edited*

Oh my Good lord the sexual chemistry/attraction between arnav and khushi has really started to heat up and sizzle as the days of their marriage is coming closer and closer.😳 And considering that both of them are suffering from a case of sexual frustration due to the earlier near misses here's me wondering if they to would indulge finally in some *ahem ahem* just before they plunge into the bonds of holy matrimony..☺️ like our original couple.

Anyways whatever be the case i am all geared and waiting for it.

Let me applaud Arnav here for doing a fine job of balancing both his role of a father and that of a fiancee. I loved the way he held khushi back and let anjali try and explain to little arya the dynamics which will be at play once her dear papa marries her mamma.

Let me give a big warm hug to the little darling Arya. 🤗, she is such a sweetheart, who would do anything for her papa and mamma, such matured child if i may call her that.

Loved the entire Anjali khushi interaction...and payal baap re baap was too good to be true. Was laughing my head off the way you penned the entire First time hurt question.🤣

Its a proof of the how good a writer you are by penning 2 extreme conversations one after the other. One extremely hilarious and the other a poignant tale of arnav's past the way anjali sees it.

What a sad state of affair for arnav, la and NK. So many lives affected by the single minded selfishness of Lavanya. And ya let me bask again in the glory of being the 1st one to guess why ArYa was called so. 😳

So i hear thunder Aman has spilled the beans finally and now ASR will unleash his wrath.

Unless yes khushi rushes to calm her to be better half with a tight big hug and the little rub at ASRs back 😉

I thought the entire khushi, Arnav and Anjali conversation was beautifully penned and i am glad that as you stated also the fact that Arnav is in love and the factor called khushi is in his life he is willing to atleast meet shyam.

So thanks for this update and really you can't be sorry for the length of the update. Keep it as long as you want, we have all the time in the world to read your lovely story. 😉 In fact the longer the better.

Thanks for the PM and will wait for the next one with lot of anticipation.

Liza

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#914

That was simply an awesome update, too good
Loved it til the end and don't worry about the update being long
I dint find it long as u wrote so beautifully that it didn't feel for a moment that it was being dragged or any part was irrelevant.
My fav part was the way khushi made arnav realize anjalis love for Shyam
Too good
Pls continue soon
Thanx

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Dimz13

@Dimz13

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#915

Arnav my man...you are so in LOVE...! Wanting to hear from Kushi that she loves him...oh...how the mighty fall..! So glad Kushi was able to let him know exactly how she felt when he did not say it to her...! At least now they are on even ground.

Anjali is doing a good job setting the stage for the future by laying down some ground rules for Arya...! Is it a man thing or just Arnav being Arnav...that he does not think to help out when the Boo-e Bubbly convo is going on..? And then very conveniently he slides in and says of course have I ever said no to you darling...humph...!

Kushi went to Anjali for a convo...why did she have to open with a question about SR...that is something that is not a very comfortable topic of discussion with ones SIL...and how did Kushi assume that Anjali is already accomplished in it...? Kushi and Arnav are also close only they haven't gone all the way...! Makes me curious...how and why Kushi guessed...?

this Anjali is so level headed...so reasonable...I really love this Anjali...but I wish she had left out the Arya part to Kushi...now she will always connect Remember LA when she calls the name Arya...! she could have been spared this torture...!

Arnav and Shyam showdown next...! Arnav has become a more reasonable man...thanks to Kushi...so I think he will give Shyam the benefit of the doubt...and seeing how Anajli is so besotted with him...can we look forward to a double wedding...?

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#916

finally the secret is out...
this is going to interesting
arnav and shaym meeting...

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#917

Arnav didn't name Arya keeping Arnav and lavanya's name in mind.. Anji did it to keep her words to a dying mother.. She shouldn't have shared that bit to Khushi.. It is going to be so hard in coming future Arnav call her with that name all the time and to come face to face with the fact that Arya is not hers..

Loved the update saiyu.. I can see you are leaving hints of upcoming chapters..

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tanvia

@tanvia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#918

awesome part and great reaction from arnav and khushi on their part

wow

loved it

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#919

That was a wonderful update.

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#920

Saiyu, I really loved this update, much more so than your previous one...

I loved the way Anjali handled Arya regarding barging into Arnav's & Khushi's room in the future, that was done really nicely... So also was the sleeping part... Challenging Arya to do something Aditya can was really smart of her... Arnav holding Khushi's hand to prevent her from letting Arya into their room was so romantic... This was the first time I saw him take Khushi's side over his own daughter, really a nice touch...

I loved the way Khushi found out more info regarding Shyam from Anjali... She wanted to hear both sides of the story before arriving at a conclusion. Nice!!

I loved Payal teasing Khushi about the wedding night pain/pleasure, really adorable... She is suddenly acting the "experienced" big sister very cute... Arnav getting mad at Aakash over his smug look at being married and not him was really hilarious... Payal spending time away from Aakash made Arnav really happy was so funny...

Loved the way Arya has smoothly started calling Khushi mamma. That is so sweet of her. She knew instinctively that only her mamma can now pacify her irate dad, especially when Boo-e was the person he was mad at...

Loved the way Khushi soothed Arnav's anger by hugging him tight & rubbing his back to calm him down... Loved the way she tried to make Arnav understand why hi Di had never sought his permission about falling in love with Shyam... Why he should give their love a chance just like they were given a chance by her family...

All in all an awesome chapter, even though it was long it didn't feel like it so, because it was very nicely broken into sections... And I completely agree with your footnote, that only because of the fact that Arnav is now a man in love he is able to understand what the emotion called love is.

Great chapter Saiyu, waiting for the next one to see Arnav & Shyam duel it out...

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago