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Sakina

@arshi_sunshine

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

~Unres~
Nyc Update...
That was a narrow Escape...
Update Soon...

Edited by arshi_sunshine - 12 years ago

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

I loved the way you have written this chapter. Are you by any chance native to Darjeeling or stay there. Loved the way you have described the surroundings and the travel from darjeeling. It has always been my wish to go to darjeeling and enjoy the beauty of the hills there. Someday I wish I will be able to go with my family. Lovely update and loved the way Arnav and Khushi traveled on the scooty. Can't wait for them to talk to each other now.

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

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(missed being on the same page as the update by a comment :x)
Edited:
Firstly, I'm really sorry but I couldn't find a suitable tea quote for this one :S

But I loved this update. It was very written and I literally want to 👏👏
And how could you think that this does not contribute the story? It totally, totally does! Arnav agreeing on sitting behind a girl (on a SCOOTY!), Arnav touching her hair, Arnav touching her dupatta, Arnav saying his first words to her - 'Tum theek ho?'

Matlab...dil Tea Garden Garden ho gaya!

And did I mention how wonderfully written this update was? The way you described the Darjeeling roads...damn, I felt like packing my and being off.
Not to mention the subtle humour you put in places. I literally had LOL moments @

'OBJECTS IN THE MIRROR ARE CLOSER THAN THEY APPEAR.'

and

"The woman sitting in front of him waved back at both of them happily. And so did the lavender to him as if beckoning him."

Great update.
Cheers!

P.s - You Naughty woman, church mai baith kar aise sapne dekhti ho :-P

Edited by Anarocksick - 12 years ago

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

Omg you evil author...kya point par laakar end kiya !!!

Main theek nahi hu !!!😕

The almost accident was really well written i could envision the same while reading and i was like please dont fall !!!

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Japonica

@Japonica

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

After that almost poetic update, I'm left in need of someone to ask me 'tum theek ho?'

What a beautiful description of the drive and the emotions of the 4 characters. I now need an cup of good strong, Assam to recover from, not the near-miss, but the description of the aftermath of the near miss! after reading that, Kya hum theek ho sakte hain?

Simply loved this update, A. Your Khushi is a blend of the best of teas in the world- a total delight.😊

Edited by Japonica - 12 years ago

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Hum teekh nahin hai after this rabbave !! Oolong tea needed to get ove this!!

But oolong is like his eyes!!!!!!!!!

We want more!

Edited by Newbiesoapfan - 12 years ago

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

the scooty rabba ve was sooo cute...and in between darjileeng tea estates it was all the more romantic...

loved the update...so the first word was out of concern...loved it...now i guess it will be reall hard to arnav to ignore her since lavanyas radars are on them...hopefull that shell play cupid...