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sugandha mishra

@sugu2569

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

i liked this dimag ka dahi ... which this was certainly not ... lovely ... planning toh bdi masst thi,,!!!!! :D
arnav sitting as a pillion rider ...lolzzz !!!!!!! :))))))
lavender lavender everywhere !!! ;)

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Firstly, i love love love the way you create the imagery. The wet earth, the nip in the air, the sloping landscape lined with trees, i can see and feel it all.

And the ride on the scooty? Reservations paas ane na de, scooty door jane na de :-D

I had noticed you didn't update on Wednesday as you had said. Life, it happens.

I like the idea of a 10 part short story.

I'm so jealous of you. You've some great writers reading you :)

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taani16

@taani16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

amazing update...

scooty rabba vey was awesome...

loved it...

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A, Anon, Nony, Anamika :)

@Anony_mous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

You absolutely know how to set an ambiance.

Sitting under scorching sun and shielding my eyes against bright sunlight, my mind is wandering into your misty, lush green with curvy roads of beautiful valleys and smelling of rains Darjeeling. Took my breath away and my mind promptly followed :D

Objects in the mirror are closer than they appear 🤣

Who would know it more than Raizada ji at this particular moment. Too close for comfort actually! Tabhi naa accident hota hota bacha ;)

Btw, how about you let Raizadaji deal with flying hair, dupattas, earrings and Lavender smells and delegate the hard work to behna and cheeku?

Next update soonish please!!!

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lazyleaves

@lazyleaves

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

Do you remember when you have a different username (something related to Barun) I had told you that your comments make me think that you are cute? And now when your writing a fan fiction, this cuteness spills over in your updates and especially your notes :-D

This is not a proper comment for the 5 chapters that I just read, but let me tell you, everytime yoy mentioned Khushi's tea shop I could actually smell tea being cooked on a stove nearby :-D

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Arnav and khushi and their Scooty Rabba ve...That was so cute.

Objects in the mirror are closer than they appear...🤣 That was such a kickass dialogue.

I am in love with your narrative style it is so refreshing and detailed, its almost like you are transported to the place where it is all taking place.

Next update on monday you say, which comes after Sunday. 😉 So please go to the church and daydream...😛

Thanks for the PM and will wait for monday.

Liza

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luvbug

@luvbug

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

rabbaa veyyy :D loved it...

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reallyhappy

@reallyhappy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Maza aagyi..

Meko toh laga tha car hogi..;)

Achhi nai toh theek thaak toh hogi hi..

Bt yahan toh scooty aa gayi.:D

1 hi seat vacant thi..n Arnav k liye hi..:D

Ye toh Chanchann wala scene ho gya..:)

Arnav wntd 2 ride..bt no chance..

Objects in d mirror r closer dn dey appear..

Really lol..

He was ehem ehem by her..her hairs,..her smile..

Dey bth wer enjoyin d weather..n weather ne karwatt le li,,,

Arnav saved..aise situation pe dimaag kaam nai krta,.n here..

Khushi wantd Arnav 2 b safe..

N Arnav ne b yai socha hoga 4 Khushi..:) <3

La noticed Arshhi's connection..

Yes!!

Last nyt's convo z still on..:)

Loved it.:)

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

LOL! By vehicle cheeku and Khushi meant scooty!!
Loved the Rabba Vey on scooty. Good to know that Arnav was equally affected..

And the classic "Tum Theek Ho?" Anupamaji Monday kab aayega?