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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Huma0301
awesomeee update- loved it sooo much love this hate relationship between virman ooohhh I wonder wats next then if its gonna change the story - im getting really excited now plzzz update quickly really wanna kno wat happens next soon 😉

Aww Humaa .. from you I always get positive comments 😃⭐️

THANK YOU!

I'll try update asap 😉

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman
i can imagine manvi in tht white anarkali she surely look soo pretty and elegant virat toh ek dam flat ho gaya 😉
i loved the virat was trying trying to start convo with manvi and asusual the annoying one worked on her bt poor virat bt yu deserve hell virat 😆
i do want manvi with some other hot guy and see the jealous virat he deserves it...
update soon

Hehehe ... flat toh hua hi tha 😉. Thanks so much for the comment. Loved it 😃 Viru toh aisa he hai 😆

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maahiya90

@maahiya90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#243

wow superb update..i lik it...but plzzz update asap...i m nt satisfied bczz this updt ended soon..plzz next tim long one...

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vamps1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

#244

ok so missed the last two updates and read them together

they were amazinggg

the way virat wished to see manvi changing was adorable and pure

and the kitchen scene was hilarious and thsi was my fav part

"EVIL...PURE EVIL"

buahahahhaha and that sorry scene was fab

soo they are going to live apart now

intresting to know that he story is going to change hope it goes well

thank u for the pm

update soon

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saemeen

@shabsem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#245

nice update. .oh dats funny how manvi spill dal n coffee on him... cont soon

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anuvir

@anuvir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#246

Hey, thanks for PM. Nice update. Throughly enjoyed it...can't wait to see what happens next!

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paddu503

@paddu503

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Posted: 12 years ago

#247

loved the update...cute and funny...manvi was really angry on virat...somehow said sorry on behalf of her mother...virat was trying to get her back...but he has to work hard...whole update was lovely...eagerly waiting for the next part...continue soon...take.

care...😊

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#248

Thanks for pm...
Update was superb...
Liked it...
Continues soon..

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#249

Fabulous update Aliya👏👏👏u noe wat i have big grin on my face throughout the update :DDD
wat a fun update yaar!!! virat bechaaraa no one is there to take his side...actually i was included also...😆😆 virman noks joke were as usual really fun ~~~virat bhi kuch kam nahi hai...bhao kataa hai manvi se do baar sorry bulwaayaa..😉 everything was awesomely written 👍🏼 i really enjoyed every bit of it ~~~ haww virman is different house...*pouts* ~~~wow new twist...waiting for it...looking forward for next update !!!!plz continue soon if possible~~~thanx for the pm aliya :D🤗