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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: ArthyV
The update was really cool...😉

Loved how Virat and Manvi thought about each other regarding the color of the dress...😃

"Mannu, you look so pretty when you wear this colour"

"Really Viru you think I look pretty in this colour. Then toh I'll always wear this colour. "

And when virat said "I am gonna make sure that everything is back to the way it was. It has to be..." I was like awww.. so Virat will pacify Manvi...👏

And they again fought... 😆

Update soon dear...⭐️

Aww .. thank you 😊 That's so sweet. Loved your comment. Will definitely update soon.

THANKS!

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Udaya2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Haha I loved d update

Poor virat😆his parents were not supporting him

And I think they are thnkng about their engagement😆

Woww update soon

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: Vaarya53
short one but still was fyn n nice...waiting to read more..update ASAP ...thnks for the pm

Thanks .. i'll try make the next one longer 😉

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Sumana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

LOLLL Great update ...I just gave a fast read to it now ...will read it in details ...and give a longer comment :) :) Love the story ..and Nok Jhoks ...Bechaara Viraat 😆

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Shivani Rajput

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Awh small update.. bt nice one.. VirMan not on talkin terms.. nd der is big twist coming.. aha.. cant wait.. update soon..!!!

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Huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

awesomeee update- loved it sooo much love this hate relationship between virman ooohhh I wonder wats next then if its gonna change the story - im getting really excited now plzzz update quickly really wanna kno wat happens next soon 😉

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: .Yamin.
Brilliant update Aliyah👏👏👏i really loved it n as well as enjoyed it❤️❤️both virman povs were superbly written👍🏼so virat wanna make everything bak on his way!!this is gonna be fun😃😃vriat staring a convo...wow...😃par our mannu ignoring him...double wow!!!N our viru ke dimaag main idea aayaa...😉here it come virman convo...fight;)COOL!!!!!manvi spilt the coffee on virat shirt..😆😆this is really fun😛can't wait for next part~~~looking forward!!!will be waiting:)thanks for the upcoming pm :D

Thank You!⭐️🤗

Wow! Itne karab update ke liye itna acha comment! You're so sweet 😳

You don't know how happy you've made me 😃

Glad you like it

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: Udaya2
Haha I loved d update
Poor virat😆his parents were not supporting him
And I think they are thnkng about their engagement😆
Woww update soon

THANKS! You'll find out soon anyway. 😉

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: Sumana123
LOLLL Great update ...I just gave a fast read to it now ...will read it in details ...and give a longer comment :) :) Love the story ..and Nok Jhoks ...Bechaara Viraat 😆

Thanks 😊 ... No tension, take your time 😉

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#240

Originally posted by: ShivRajput
Awh small update.. bt nice one.. VirMan not on talkin terms.. nd der is big twist coming.. aha.. cant wait.. update soon..!!!

Sorry it was short ... was a filler. THANKS and will do.⭐️