ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One*

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soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#821

After reading both the stories I can say only this
Wah wah kya baath hai mazaa agaya :-)

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-MIMOSA-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#822

Oh dear that was just beautiful...👏

How do you come up with such beautiful stories one after the other...

I liked the swapping of the Arnav and Khushi's personalities...But I think these were their shortly acquired ones due to their circumstances, aren't they...Correct me if I am wrong...

Waiting for the next one...

Keep going...

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Jenna

@LondonChick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#823

That was amazing I literally wolfed down my dinner to read this 😊
It was beautiful.
Cant wait for the next one.
God bless Jenna

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casker

@casker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#824

Reversal of roles 😊. loved it.

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 12 years ago

#825

superb...

loved the you write.. as you didn't mentioned their coz they were stranger to each other and didn't know each others name.. you kept that till the end... that was awesome work.. seriously

this also remind me of nainital trip and rain hug and yeah, that dhabha scene, where khushi orders every item from and arnav just water, well here role was reverse totally

loved this reverse role concept...

so arnav was millionaire... that revealed at the end and that whole trip was planned by aman... god that again remind of Ipkknd when khushi put sugar balls on arnav's car...

very very beautifully written tale... loved it to bits👏

waiting for next one

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#826

Hey a really really nice two-shot.

So Anjali is always the saviour sister and matchmaker here!!❤️

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 12 years ago

#827

the banner for this series is damn appropriate for this story, don't you think!

Simply Lovely! just went gaga over the role reversal: khushi, the driven workaholic disillusioned with marriage and arnav, the relaxed 'artist' who stops to smell the roses! Am tickled silly by the fact that this arnav isn't fastidious about cleanliness or having everything just so! Pleased that he has remained the multi-millionaire, though 😊! the convo about Kishore Kumar was another eye-opener! each and every scene has been so beautifully delineated and flowed and blended so seamlessly that I can't pick or choose favourites... that anjali's husband was aman came as a pleasant surprise, though loved him 'commandeering' khushi's 'sugar in the fuel tank' ploy to stall her car... the rain rescue was outstanding, as was the incorporation of all those iconic lines: "Tum theek ho?" "Agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh? What if I had lost you, dammit?!" "You never are! Do you ever know what's happening around you?" "Mujhe faraq padhta hai, dammit!" only "Coz I love you dammit!" is missing from this scintillating mix!

a naughty arnav at his flirtatious best, saying that khushi won't be 'kumari' gupta for much longer is just awww , and I am sure khushi's expression mirrors ours!

agree with your point about the rain hug being an unwitting result of his punishment... if one considers it, most of the iconic or powerful scenes / dialogues cannot be digested because of the inevitable cruelty arnav showed khushi before, during or after the same... I am all for women's lib, so can't understand why I was willing to overlook and forget his caustic tongue and physical intimidation of khushi the moment he did something to support her against his family / the public or to show his love for her 😕!

loved your story and am eagerly awaiting the next instalment!

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#828

It was like reading a piece of poetry.

It made me nostalgic. Reminded me of the rainy season in India where one enjoys the rain, getting wet in the rain. Where you it and watch the raindrops falling, listening to old hindi film songs.

The choice of song was so appropriate. It suited the situation so well.

Just loved the whole scenario.

Also loved the way you have sprinkled dialogues and situations from the serial in your story.

They are so much part of the story, they don't seem picked up from the serial.

ZNMD is one of my favourite road journey films. I can safely say that this story is even better.

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124555

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Posted: 12 years ago

#829

the tale was amazing...

you write so beautifully...

the role reversal was awesome...

loved khushi and arnav...

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karmachameleon

@karmachameleon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#830

Read Semanti's Tale in Red...

LOVED IT!

Almost reminded me of Eric Segal's Love Story...

Read your note as well...and you did manage to take the 'almost kiss' to another new level...so much that it made me think of the classic Love Story...

A very well written Tale - if I may say - the 'actual' names of the teams added to the fun of reading this wonderful Tale in Red...

It was a great read...good job!!