ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One*

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gangsu

@gangsu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Awsum update.
if u didn't mention deir name atlst it wuld ve been vry disappointin n i wuld ve never known wat arnav do followed by d intro of his name.
its alwaz gud 2 read abt arnav being a powerful man coz it suit his name n personality alot.
his name is such a name dat m drawn 2ward him n him being a powerful person along wid his name

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Seriously you two are one rocking duo !!

Absolutely loved this "Arhi Tale" !

It has a little bit of everything then some more !😳

The best part with your style is the suspense quotient is always in tact ! I was thinking why she suddenly turned stiff on seeing Anjali's pic and then you worked your magic!

You kinda switched roles here but it felt as if thats who they have always been such is your writing...Perfect !!

Loving these twists you girls are giving to the iconic scenes of Ipkknd !!!

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Jenna

@LondonChick

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#843

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Edited by LondonChick - 12 years ago

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golpokobita

@golpokobita

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Are you sure, you wrote it right??

I mean, who was arnav and who was Khushi, in the 1st part???

Anyways, whatever it is, the tale is terrific! Starting from 'tum theek ho' to '(kumari Gupta)... not for long'!

Arnav is amazing in this story.. he has everything in him, ASR to some extent, too (possessiveness and determination).. Painter.. then kishore kumar .. oh I am now listening to this Ek Ladki' continuously and it never sounded better in my ears! And the cherry blossom!

But Khushi is so different! So strong from outside yet so soft and tender inside..

Anjali is the mastermind! that was a surprise at the end!

Wonderful.. enjoyed thoroughly..

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#845

Hi,

Just uploaded a picture of the Napa Valley at sunset, something I meant to do yesterday as well.

Do check out part two!

PMs will be set out soon, apologies for the delay!

-Juhi

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#846

Loved Arnav and the way he tried to thaw khushi, and loved the way u wrote, including some of my favorite scenes.

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Nehasupnfan

@Nehasupnfan

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#847

WHOA!! What a role reversal! Khushi's parents are the one with the troubled marriage where as Arnav's parents had a wonderful married life. Khushi is diabetic where as he LOVES sweets and desserts! I loved how they had passion from the very beginning but didn't give into it until the end...

And the biggest surprise of em all was the fact that Aman was Anjali's husband!! That was a pleasant surprise!! :)

I can't wait to read more!! :)

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#848

OMG role reversal...i always thought what it'll be like if arnav was like khushi and khushi like arnav instead of what they are now...ahh Expel it seems u get to know what ur readers always wanted to see and the twists u give to these iconic scene is commendable...u never cease to surprise me...awesome...loved the update...

thanks for pm :)

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#849

I'm back again. Because I love this story so much. Do you know how much I love the rain? And the weather where I live is BRILLIANT right now-- spring flowers and pearly clouds and breezy and occasionally rainy. And it's like your tale captured all of the restlessness I'm feeling with this kind of weather and put it on paper!

THAT'S IT. I DEMAND AN ARNAVJI THIS INSTANT!

Also, the Kumari-Gupta-not-for-long. 😆 I wonder if he meant not 'Kumari' for long or not 'Kumari Gupta' for long? Knowing you Expel, probably the first one.