ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One*

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

as usual well-written. i love the inverted concept; btw ur tribute 'what if i'd lost u' scene was stupendous to me that was the most beautiful scene

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

i love this idea of yours and it is such a treat reading these stories. Thank You Both.

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MemoriesDieHard

@MemoriesDieHard

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#833

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Yashi

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LIONHEART

@LIONHEART

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

Once again you amaze me with your magical storywriting skills. Just the whole concept and the way this story came out is mindblowing. I am a pretty fast reader and your stories make me just keep continuing wanting more n more----.

Me too never liked his ideas of punishing her and i really love the stories where either they show his repent or a strong khushi. Keep it up!

I treasure each of your stories as they have and are still giving me immense joy and hope.Thanks once again!

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#835

Awiee. Romance in the rain. Romance during a long drive. Both my favorite kinds and you gave me both! Double dhamaka!

Loved it. The Kishore Kumar song made it even more special :)

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Loved the story..
The way you reversed their characteristics was a pleasant surprise!
I was anxious when she left without exchanging names or numbers! But then wow! parking lot scene in a fresh set up!!

Aman and Anjali, I wish!!

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#837

Aa gayi. Abhi Res.

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EXPEL!! I am freaking SPEECHLESS! You know why? Well partially because this tale was GODDAMN BRILLIANT! And I LOVED it! But ALSO because it's like someone took a look inside MY head. =O

This is SO freaky. I've been meaning to make Khushi a diabetic, anal-retentive, cynical, control freak for a while now-- and Arnav the dessert-loving, free-spirited, artistic, chill person he is in your tale!

And you DID it! With no prompting from my side and did it with so much flair and chemistry and passion and attraction that I was left FLOORED and manifestly thankful that you wrote it!

BRB, going to get a glass of chilled water. 😆

Now coming to the actual story-- I LOVE the setting. I'd say you're fairly familiar with the background-- it came out so REAL and wonderful! The whole thing reminded me of Impressionist paintings-- a hazy, blurry quality to the beauty yet an underlying sense of calm and tranquility-- a subtly concealed mystery. 👏

The characterization was so good I feel like CRYING. While I always love the Arnav's and Khushi's you create-- these two were special in how different they are to anything we've seen so far!

The ever simmering attraction despite (or perhaps BECAUSE of) them being polar opposites, the terse, minimal conversation, the longing and desire, and finally the giving in and hoping for something better-- maa kasam Expel, maar dala!

I also loved the subtle changes to the order of events. How Arnav didn't resort to physical violence this time, how he didn't MAKE Khushi stand in the rain, how he wanted HER to give HIM a chance-- all of it.

And of course, the tale wouldn't be complete without a curly-fries-wala twist in the end. Aman and Anjali up to no good (or everything good depending on how you look at it!)

This was everything my heart wanted today-- the rain, the passion, the beautiful setting, and a happy ending. ❤️

P.S. I 🤣 when I read Cherry Blossoms. Chalo, that's another reader made happy. And you saved me the trouble of having to do anything about it.

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Honestly I wish I was gifted with words so that O could write along long review of your writings..but I havnt got that skill and I sincerely apologize for not being able to express what I feel after reading your stories...so my dear Juhi you are an awesome writer and I simply simply love reading your stories...

if this was a SS I would have defi requested for an epilogue but knowing the concept I would appear to be a fool making such a request..but despite of that I am asking you to pleaseee write something in form of an epilogue for this...

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A_BA

@A_BA

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#839

Brilliant story!! There were so many classic scenes infused in it, I really enjoyed it: the road trip, the sugar cubes in the car, the dhaba scene, the parking attendant scene, all the classic dialogue, but with your own amazing twist, I just loved it!! Also the reversal of their roles was really interesting...Khushi as the no nonsense business woman as opposed to the carefree artist that was Arnav!

The parking attendant scene in the show portrayed so much chemistry and tension between the two main characters, but at the of the day, it was Arnav punishing her in a cruel way. I'm glad your version of it was much happier.

Also, loved the setting of your story, basically in my own backyard...and Khushi going to my school!!!