ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread One*

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#811

nice twist... loved the role reversal... too good..

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#812

A role reversal of "sorts"? This was a personality swap, and I enjoyed it so much. He is a glutton and she's the diabetic. He wants happily ever afters and she doesn't believe in marriage.He likes the little things in life, she's too busy on her phone to see the sun . I love the rain hug, both in the show, nd in this story. Just love it. Obviously, your Arnav is much nicer, since he isn't being a prick. And I really thought that in the show, at that moment , Arnav looked like he wanted to kiss her, and she just looked very confused and shocked, co she couldn't understand what was happening to her. Oh Aman pulled a Khushi , hahaa. Sugar grains in her fuel tank. Waiting for Semanti now!

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#813

OMG, it was an awesome update, starting from teh rain, her broken car, him giving the lift, instead of the GET OUT's, a novel change, him trying to make the conversation, and she giving in only straight answers, so much interchange of characters, he being always want to catch a glimpse of her, she being diabetic, well the possessiveness there, bravo..., he wanted to find out more about her and not the other way round, and all the feelings that he goes thru when he drops her off at the airport were amazing..., I would have never guessed Cherry Blossom, and now thanks for reminding me of my allergies, 😊 , claritin time..., She runs away from him knowing who he is, and comes back as even she wants to be herself.

Anjali dear no need to tell Khushi who he is, she is a stock broker, she knows more about Arnav's assets than you would, I liked the part where the couple played the cupid and put sugar crystals, i could not help but LOL.

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#814

Absolutely loved it, the role reversal of their personalities, situations and the setting of the FF, They hardly knew each other not even their names but yet felt something so strong.. We did not even know their names and you could have easily misled us, but one could just sense who the characters were...

Ever faithfully Aman as Arnav's BIL was adorable. So when Khushi saw the picture in his wallet she realized who he was and that Anajli was the owner of the winery where her sister had just got married! All the scenes from the show were blended in meticulously, along with dialogues given new perspective ..I did not miss the other characters from the show...and no cliffhangers... you rock...

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#815

this was so awesome and undoubtedly beautiful juhi...😃 the writing was serene...simply awesome...😊

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#816

Great tale!!! Loved the role reversal, I enjoyed a strong and well educated Khushi.

The car ride, the rain, the connection between them, the chemistry...uff You just know how to paint the perfect picture Juhi!

I loved imagining Arnav as a painter, that seems like something he would do, since he likes solitude, silence and is a deep thinker.

Great twist of how he had a loving family environment and she was from a broken home.

The last line when they finally exchange there names and he says "Not for long" just gave me goose bumps!

Thank you for starting this Juhi and Semanti! You have kept the soul of IPK alive and kicking.

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 12 years ago

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#817

this was beautiful!

roles reversed!...nice!😊

loved it!

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jtammareddy

@jtammareddy

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#818

That was simply awesome. Something diff from the usual.he has a sweet tooth where as she is a diabetic. He believes marriage and she doesn't. They r opp in everyway . True to say opp always attract. She left becoz he is The Arnav Sing Raizada. But, could stay away.

I remembered the seen where Khushi put the grains in ASRs SUV n the show when I read aman put some in khushi's car becoz he saw something in Arnav's eyes for Khushi and let them meet.

Ur one brilliant writter.