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Posted: 18 years ago
Precap: Sujal & the Viranis and the Sinhas are all petrified for Shravan, meanwhile Pooja, Toshiko, Owen & Jack are concerned with Gauri's change, and Vikram~Sia's attiude towards each other changes at the evening party and the villains plan more horrible deadly plans.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice update Shirley!!
And i am sure tht evil person is non-other than Ansh! 😡 😡
And oh Sia & vikram in Paris!Have fun u guys! 😛
Great going Shirley!!
Hope u are doing good:D
Love u!!
Amina


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

Nice update Shirley!!
And i am sure tht evil person is non-other than Ansh! 😡 😡
And oh Sia & vikram in Paris!Have fun u guys! 😛
Great going Shirley!!
Hope u are doing good:D
Love u!!
Amina

Hey thanx Amina..i'm glad you enjoyed it..hopefully..enjjoy the forthcoming episodes..

well..you have to wait and see whether it was Ansh or not...who is doing all this..😉😉..you know..best to let you all read the story..if I tell you all now...then the story is not gonna sound or feel interesting...😳😃

and tonite's episode...sia and vikram...get even..more...ahem...wait till sia gets here..lets see her reaction as well...

but thanx 4 the comments amina...😳😃lub ya..tc...🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago
And don't worry guys - I will update Episode 42 by tonight 😳 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Nice part shirl..
Like amina I am too sure that..the person is none other than Ansh..
Sia n Vikam's chat was cool 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Shirley

hey...yur honeymoon..is gonna be soon and sweet...but be patient..ithe fruits of patience are very sweet..anu...

Hmm ok waiting to have the fruits😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Nice part shirl..
Like amina I am too sure that..the person is none other than Ansh..
Sia n Vikam's chat was cool 😊

thanx diya..and i have to say yurs and amina's predictions are fairly gud..ut lets wait and see whether it is ansh or nt...

and gud news...Episode 42..is gonna include yur honeymoon..to Switzerland..somewhere with lots of snow...😳😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Hmm ok waiting to have the fruits😉

hehe...😆😆😆..ok..ji...lets have the fruits of romance now..but wait...fruits of patience now...eerm...again...😆

i cant believe...it...i'm saying this...😆

cant stop laughing😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok ppl - updating Episode 42 😃 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 42

(At Torchwood, Jack and Owen discuss Gauri's health amongst themselves)

jack: owen, i think you are a bit over-reactive about what is happening to Gauri
owen: a bit over-reactive?
jack: well, let's jsut say very over-reactive..
owen: jack..she screamed NO!
jack: maybe someone took Thumper away from her
owen: oh jack, you neevr get tired of sarcasm or humour, do ya?
jack: mever
owen: i mean, why would Gauri be screaming about her childhood cherished toy being snatched away from her?
jack: owen..you are being way too protective..i'm sure..Gauri is fine..and there is nothing serious..
owen: she met a lot of serious stuff before...and she never swooped down like that...look jack..
jack(interrupts): owen?
owen: yeah?
jack: relax..nothing has happened to Gauri..and now..lets get analysing that hand..we found...

(go over to the artefact they found)

owen: its alien..
pooja: wow..owen...thats a really great discovery..we never knew that before..
(jack sniggers)
tosh: of course..we know..its alien..but ho does it belong to?
gauri(coming over): well..according to Ianto..it was found on Christmas Day..well...it was there..on Christmas Day..right?
ianto: right..
gauri: so..the question..arisess...(luks closely at the hand..the way..the fingers...outstretch themselves...as if it is reached out to hold someone's hand...

(gauri is facing another long-lost memory//one she rembers during Christmas again...a young man smiling at her..and held his hand out..for hers to hold...the fingers outstretching.."That hand of yours still gives me the creeps"..and she holds that hand..gauri is soon back to the current day..)

gauri: that hand gives me the creeps..
owen: what?
gauri: hold on..what did i just say?
owen(whispering to jack): luk..even now..you must think..i'm not being paranoid..
jack: i think..you..are..right..owen..we need to keep close observation on Gauri..
jack(2 gauri): gauri..what did you see jus then?
gauri: luk..i saw this young man..holding out his hand to me...just like that hand is..its fingers...and..i said.."that hand of yurs gives me the creeps"
tosh: hold on..this sounds as if you knew the person to whom this hand belongs to...is that right?
gauri(confused): i'm not sure..this all seems confusing to me...
jack: ok...luk..go and see..some other stuff..we will be here..ok?
gauri: ok..

(gauri leaves)

jack: ok..ok...ok..owen..i'm wrong...you r right..something is wrong with our boss..and we gotta find out what it is...
pooja: right..we gotta find out..
jack: i think i may have a way...
ianto: whats that?
owen: but..we need her to go to sleep..deep sleep..

(toshiko has a worried look on her face)

(meanwhile..then the villains all meet up in the study room in the virani house...ansh, swayam, mohini, pammi, renuka, jatin, piyush and others)

renuka: i dont believe this...shravan's accident...OMG..
ansh: oh..for the love of God...please...please...forget about him..
pammi: how can you say that..ansh? shravan is one of us..and you are saying...
ansh: look..he was supposed o marry Amina..
mohini: and he is..
ansh: he is not...he decided himself..(imicking shravan): i..cant...separate them two..i cant do this...(his own voice): well..if one of our friends has a attack of conscience..then i'm sorry...
swayam: ansh..but we have to at least...find out..who did the accident..shravan was one of our friends..
ansh: you want..to..know..who did the acciden?

(all of them nod their heads)

ansh: fine...i will tell you..


ansh: I DID!!!!!!!!

(all of them are shocked)

piyush: what? you...
ansh: yes..me..
jatin: but why?
ansh: if i didn't..he would have blown our cover...and all of our hard work..would be ruined...
pammi: but ansh..you made it worse...sujal will now marry amina..
ansh(grins): whether he does..or whether he doesnt..he will never..ever...ever marry her...
mohini: how?
ansh: oh..i went to shravan's room..wrote a tear-jerking letter to sujal in shravan's handwiritng...messy wiritng though...and scattered Amina's photos everywhere...making it luk like he was fed up..and also..held amina responsible for it..

(ansh laughs devilishly..all the other villains smile as they udnerstood his plan)

mohini: gud one..ansh..and even i have a surprise in for karan and diya...
renuka: and whats that?
mohini: tomorrow..when before..they leave for their honeymoon..the priest shall..erm..reveal a secret..(grins)
ansh: gud..keep working on that..you will do anything..to become Mohini...(grins): Virani..
pammi: and what do i do?
ansh(mimicking pammi): what do i do? (his own voice): separate daniel from rose..thats what you were supposed to do..
pammi: but..but...ansh..there is something that needs to be shared...
ansh: what?
pammi: rose..loves daniel..

9ansh is shocked with anger..and throws his champagne bottle on the floor)

ansh: WHAT!!!?????
swayam: ansh?
ansh: thats it...sujal and amina ares sorted..but..now..this daniel virani..needs a lesson..but lets wait till karan and diya are gona...jatin..
jatin: yeah?
ansh: sia..is gona on a trip...but wait for her...and treat her with sweets.and flowers..and the typical boyfriend ad girlfriend stuff..
jatin: erm..but ansh..
ansh: just do it..
jatin: right..
ansh: renuka?
renuka: yeah?
ansh: hmm...get one of the sinha girls out of the way...and not..amina..or rose...
renuka: how about...(evilly): kashish?
ansh: ok...perfect..
swayam: no...ansh..you..promised me..that kashish would be mine..YOU PROMISED!!
ansh: alright!!! lover boy!! have that kashish...renuka...forget the sinha girls...target the virani boys..these boys need to be over and done with..
renuka: erm...how about karan?
mohini: no..karan is mine..
jatin(sighs): kashish is mine..and he is mine...just shut up...will you?/!!
ansh: luk..sujal needs to be alive...to punish amina...daniel is for me to sort out..kavya..hmm..arjun..nope...erm...sohan...
piyush: sohan? lets get rid of him..because..then i can make.tuhina an easy target..
ansh: fine..thats decided...ok...lets go..

(all leave)

(back at the hopsital...the two families are worried for shravan)

dida: humne kiya socha tha..aur kya hua hai?
bauji: sabar karo..sharmila-ji...sabar karo..
prerna: dekho...kuch nahin hoga..shravan ko...kuch nahin hoga...
tulsi: prerna theek keh rahe hai...usse kuch nahin hoga...haina..mihir?
mihir: haan...nothing will happen to him..

(the doctor comes out)

mihir: doctor? any news..?
doctor: he is still critical..he suffered a huge blow on the head..

(dida's eyes are streaming with tears)

doctor: and..his jaw is badly damaged too..and not to mention his bones...
mihir: but..doctor..please...
doctor: we are trying our best...Mr. Virani..

(next scene at Paris..Vikram and Sia..both getting ready for the party)

vikram: erm..sia...are you ready?
(vikram who is smartly dressed in a blow-tie..with shirt..jacket and trousers)

vikram: sia..?
sia: coming...(sia comes out ina white silk sari with silver jewellery and open straight hair..)

vikram: you..erm...you look..beautiful...
sia: oh? thanx..you...look..incredible..
vikram: thanx..so..shall we be getting on?
sia; yeah

(both go to the party venue..)

vikram: paris is so beautiful..
sia: i noticed that when we got here...
vikram: luk..all the couples are dancing here..
sia: so?
vikram(holding out his hand): so?
sia: right..ok..(takes his hand)

(sia laces her hand on vikram's shoulder..and vikram..brings sia closer..than ever with his arm around her waist..and both holding their other hands together)

sia: do you know?
vikram: what?
sia: you are the first boy..i'm dancing with..
vikram: and did you know?
sia: what?
vikram: this is the first time..we ever gt so close...

(sia jsut looks down with nothing to say)

vikram: why have you lowered yur gaze?
sia(luking up): when did i do that?
vikram: erm..neevr mind...

(music finishes..both still holding each other...and later let go..)

sia: erm..i will go and get some food for us two..ok?
vikram: ok..

(sia goes over to get some food..when a couple of boys begin to harass her)

boy 1: hey...gorgeous..whats yur name?
sia: erm..sorry..i cant tell you that...
boy 2: i think her name is beautiful..dont you think?
sia: please...
boy 1: come on...baby..lets have some fun..(grabs her wrist)
sia: let go of me..
boy 2: what are you gonna do?
sia: i'll scream..then...
boy 1 : really? lets hear it..
sia: VIKRAM!!!!

(vikram sees sia in trouble..and takes the two boys out and teaches them a lesson..the 2 boys...run away...vikram comes back in for Sia)

vikram: are you ok?
sia: lets go..vikram..please..lets go..
vikram: ok..come on..

(they go back to the hotel room...vikram closes the door..and goes voer to sia who is at the terrace with her back towards vikram..vikram goes upto her and puts his hand on her shoulder)

vikram: sia..
(but before..he could say anything else..sia embarcs him..tightly than ever she did...)

sia: i'm in love with you..
(vikram who hears these words...embraces her tightly too...)
vikram: i love you too...but..but i couldnt say it...
sia: please..vikram..jsut...hold m..like this..
(vikram embraces her tighter...sia moves away...both continue to look at each other...and later...vikram goes closer to sia..and kisses her..holding her tightly in his arms)

sia(moving away): i'm not dreaming..am i?
vikram: no..

(both go inside..the lights turn off...sia sleeps on the bed..and vikram..gets his pillow and blanket and sleeps on the sofa)

(back at the hospital...the doctor comes out again)

tulsi: doctor?
doctor: the operation is over..and..erm...
savita: please..doctor..tell us...
doctor: Mr. Mihir Virani..yur son is no more..

(the families are shocked..in the background..ansh grins)

ansh(2 himself): hogaya kaam..

How was that? 😛

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