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Posted: 18 years ago
Shravan realised that's really good but his accident!!that's very sad as well....post d next part soon as like previous epi...btw what abt. my honeymoon?? 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow 😳 Well me and Vikram to Europe 😛 ! By the way nice part! Its good that shravan realised the importance of true love. 😳 Unlike Ansh who is still thinking bad! 😡 ! well so sweet of shravan to think of sujal and amina.But still the acccident thing was bad enough to shravan as said by diya! 😭 !! well good he said that things to Ansh. Ansh deserved this He is a bad person!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti_saarrthi

thank god shravan ki akal thikane ayi.....but this ansh is so 🤢 ......and....ahem....vikram-sia on a vacation 😳 😳 can wait for their story 😉 .....update soon 😊

well..the next episode is gonna include them a lot..and lets see what happens to sharavan in the next episode😉

and thanx 4 the comments pooja😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Shravan realised that's really good but his accident!!that's very sad as well....post d next part soon as like previous epi...btw what abt. my honeymoon?? 😳

hey...yur honeymoon..is gonna be soon and sweet...but be patient..ithe fruits of patience are very sweet..anu...just wait..2morrow..monday..hopefully...i will update Episode 41😳😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

wow 😳 Well me and Vikram to Europe 😛 ! By the way nice part! Its good that shravan realised the importance of true love. 😳 Unlike Ansh who is still thinking bad! 😡 ! well so sweet of shravan to think of sujal and amina.But still the acccident thing was bad enough to shravan as said by diya! 😭 !! well good he said that things to Ansh. Ansh deserved this He is a bad person!

Hey sia glad..you luved it as well..and i bet..after 2morrow's episode..you will be tired of copying and pasting the blushing smileys...😆...and wait till next episode as well to see what happens to shravan😉

and later...ansh will start to get a bit worse...

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok guys - i will update Episode 411 tomorrow.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
Omg Omg!!just read last two epi...Epi 49 totally scared me!! I mean how can Me and Shravan get married???!!
The epi 50 was gr8!!Thank God now Sujal know i only love him 😳 😳
But at the same i feel bad for poor Shravan!! 😭 Hope he is still alive!
Good going Shirley!!Keep it up!! 😃 👏 👏
Keep smiling! 😃
Love u!!
Amina
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

Omg Omg!!just read last two epi...Epi 49 totally scared me!! I mean how can Me and Shravan get married???!!
The epi 50 was gr8!!Thank God now Sujal know i only love him 😳 😳
But at the same i feel bad for poor Shravan!! 😭 Hope he is still alive!
Good going Shirley!!Keep it up!! 😃 👏 👏
Keep smiling! 😃
Love u!!
Amina

Hey..amina...nice to hear from you too...and..the ff is at a suspenseful climax...wait till what happens...😳😉..and wheher you sujal will get together or not..and especially whether shravan survives or not...😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
ok updating Episode 41 ppl 😃 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 41

(episode continues from the last one)

sujal(panicking): OMG...OMG...what...what...what do i do?
shravan(murmuring): uh-uh-uh-uh....s-sujal..
sujal: its ok..shravan...nothing is going to happen to you..ok? you listening? nothing...come on..

(tries to get him up..and eventually gets him up and carries him over to the car..and puts him the backside..and quickly drives to a nearby hospital)

sujal: oh god...this...how did this happen?
(sujal constantly looks back to see shravan)

sujal: look..yaar..dont worry...we will get there...

(sujal stops at the nearest hospital he ahs reached...he quickly grabs shravan and enters a hospital)

sujal(shouting): DOCTOR!!! SOMEONE HELP!!!

(a nurse running to help)

nurse: ok...ok...doctor...doctor...bring a stretcher...
(a stretcher is borught..and shravan is taken for immediate operation)
doctor: ok...what is going on?
sujal: I'm Sujal Virani..sir...and this shravan Virani...my brother-like friend...plz...you have to save him..plz..
doctor: we will do our level best...Mr. Virani...you must support us..and try to understand the situation...
sujal: ok..ok..i will...but plz..hurry....you...gotta save him...
doctor: right..you first fill out the details..and...we will begin the operation..

(doctor is about to go..but sujal stops him)

sujal; he will live..wont he?
doctor: lets pray...(leaves)
sujal(sits down): OMG...this...what is happening?

(meanwhile...back at the virani house..in shravan's room..an mysterious person writes a note in shravan's handwriting 😲..and htis is what he writes: Dear Sujal, please forgive me - I know this is all hard for you, but I did want you and Amina back together, this was my heart's greatest desire, but Amina just neevr understood this - just threw it in my face and never wanted to see my face again. I can't bear that, so I'll make sure she never sees my face. I enjoyed a good life of 19 years and...once I enjoyed looking at the skies from this earth and now maybe I will enjoy looking upon th earth from the skies 😲 - but don't blame yourself but it just because Amina never understood me, she wished for this to happen - your best friend, Shravan.)

(the mysterious person takes out an envelope and takes out the photos from there - the photos are of Amina and the person scatters them all over the place 😈)

person: Now Amina - Sujal loved you like crazy and now...he will hate you like crazy (evil grins)

(meanwhile, Pooja and Gauri just enter a sceret hi-tech organisation building that is unknown to the whole world)

pooja: look, Gauri go easy on him..
gauri(sarcastically): oh sure, yeah - of course i will go easy on him, in fact I will greet him not with 'hi' but with flowers..
pooja: really?
gauri: of course not...he disturbd us...especially when i told him not to...

(a young man aged at in his early 20s - hair blondish and fair white skin and dressed in blue jeans, black T-Shirt and grey jacket..comes up towards Gauri)

Owen: Hi Gauri..
gauri: Mr. Owen Harper...what the hell do you think of yourself?
owen: gauri..listen to me...there..
gauri(interrupts): listen? you want me to listen to you? well listen to me..owen..i strictly told you..that on Anu's wedding..no...calls...i dont care if...(loudly): if Torchwood...
pooja: sshhh...don't alert the world about us..
gauri: jeez ok...look..i told you..its my sister's wedding..despite knowing that you called..
owen: look..even i didn;t want to..but..Toshiko..told me to..because there was an emergency..
gauri: emergency? now what kind of emergency would that be?
owen: come with us...

(owen, pooja and gauri go over to Toshiko - a Japanese girl in her 20s in dark-brunette high ponytail style wearing black trousers and white polo neck with black jacket)

toshiko: look..gauri..first of all..i'm sorry...i know..
gauri: I know..its..ok..lets cut to the chase..
owen: oii..you let her off...
pooja: sshh..
toshiko: we found something..something alien... 😲
gauri: alien?
toshiko: yeah...Jack is analysing it right now...

(a young man in his late 20s comes in wearing a suit and long dark blue coat with brown hair comes in)

jack(american accent): gauri Sinha..hello!
gauri: hi jack...so whats this artefact you got me?
jack: this..let me show you..

(he picks up a jar which contains a hand which seems to be badly severed as if it were cut from the person's arm)

(gauri has a puzzled look on her face and remembers one event which she encountered more than a year...somewhere during Christmas)

jack: are you ok?
gauri: yeah..yeah...i'm fine..but..where did you find it?
toshiko: we found it..on the streets of London..and you know the motto of Torchwood..
gauri: "If its alien, then its ours".
owen; right..
gauri: someone lost their hand, but who?
jack: cant you remeber anything?

(gauri's mind starts to spin again...soon..she drops off to the floor..and sees jack, toshiko, pooja and owen surrounding her)

toshiko(faintly): gauri...gauri...you ok?

(soon gauri falls off to a sleep and is cast off to a world where she remembers a memory - she sees herself standing holding a young man's dresing gown but doesnt know..whho's exactly...and sees herself watching a fight..an alien fight...a young man in triped pyjamas fighting a alien with swords...the alien leader pushes the young man to the floor..and cuts off his arm...

gauri(in the dream): NNNNOOOO!!!!!!!!!

(immediately gauri wakes up)

owen: you ok?
gauri: i seen this happening...
tosh: see what?
gauri: i think i know who lost that hand...i know his face...but..but...
jack: its ok..its ok..you need to rest...

(next scene is in Paris of France)

sia(puting down her bags): oh...oh...Paris is so hot..(putting on her sunglasses): gosh..its really hot..
vikram: hot? what are you talking about? its not hot...i find it...cool..
sia: are you even human?
vikram: huh?
sia: hmm...maybe not...
vikram: ok..come on..lets pick up our bags...
sia: why...what are we oing to do first?
vikram: well, genius - first we are going to find a hotel..so we can spend the night ehre..and next...
sia: next what?
vikram: i'll tell you..when we are in the hotel...
sia: why? why cant you tell me now?
vikram: because its hot..here...
sia: aahhh! i knew it! i knew it!
vikram: ssh...sia...

(both go to a hotel...and go to the reception)

reception: hi..how..may i help you?
vikram: erm..i'm vikram virani...i need to book two rooms..
reception: erm..ok..hold on..sir..(holds on): erm..but sir...our rooms are mostly booked..as you see its a holiday time..but..erm..there is one..room..for you and yur wife..
vikram: my wife?
reception: yes..that girl over there..(points to sia..who smiles back unaware of whats going on)
vikram: erm..ok..then..give me that...
reception: ok sir...
vikram: erm...also...how much will you take?
reception: you..can pay in the morning sir..and oh...erm..would you like room service?
vikram: oh..erm..if we need it...we will call..
reception: ok..enjoy yur stay here..
vikram: thank you..erm..sia..
sia: huh?
vikram: chalo..
sia: ok..

(both go up to the room...)

sia: which one is yurs..and which one's is mine?
vikram: yeah...about that..erm...the htel had only one room..
sia(shocked): what?!!
vikram: look...its not so bad...i'll sleep on the sofa..and you..sleep on the bed..ok?
sia: but..but..people will think bad of us..
vikram: sia..this is France..not..England which is the land of good manners..or India - the land of good values..
sia: but still..
vikram: sia..(entering the room): the lady at the reception..thought you were my wife..
sia: but i dont care..no matter how good the room is..i'm not..(enters the room and is surprised)
vikram: you were saying?

(sia looks around and is surprised with the rooms...which are exquistely decorated..and the showers and bathrooms..especially bright and clean)

sia: never mind..what i said..i'll take the bed...(laughs): OMG..this is so awesome..(jumps on the bed)
vikram: easy...sia...
sia: vikram...i wanna settle here..
vikram: you cant..yur mum and dad are in London..and so are yur sisters...
sia: mmm...i need to freshen up..and we will go out in the evening right?
vikram: yeah..but find something suitable..ok?
sia(smiles): ok...

How is that ppl? 😳

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