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Shirley thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
If you all have anymore ideas, please free to add them in this topic and I will sue it for your character and luv-interest in the ff 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG!!!OMG!!!i missed the last 3 updates.....they were too good yaar 👏 .....why is there so much trgedy in the ff????make evrythin proper soon or i am comin with a danda behind u 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
very nice 👏 but shravan was sweet and nice and Ansh is so mad! 😡 He is now happy that The letter which he wrote is read by sujal and now he hates her!! 😡 This mohini she showed the gun to priest and She made him say whatever she wants!! 😡 these evil people 😡 😡

Then Vikram and me in the plane 😳 I mean in the plane 😳 😛 kissing and hugging 😛 😳 nice!!



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Posted: 18 years ago
Shravan's death!!!...why did u make him dead?N that Ansh 😡 🤢....

Hai hai...u said that I would be blushing..but yeh kya hua!!!6 long.....monthssssss....I will kill that mohini 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: preeti_saarrthi

OMG!!!OMG!!!i missed the last 3 updates.....they were too good yaar 👏 .....why is there so much trgedy in the ff????make evrythin proper soon or i am comin with a danda behind u 😉

hey..i know..when we all see tragedy in star plus or sony or zee serials..we say da same..but like all serials..there will be an happy ending...but i know..what you're thinking...that when is the happy ending coming? don't worry..my story isnt going to be stretched like ekta's...happy ending coming along the way..soon!😳😃

P.S. Soon enough..so you dont chase me wid a danda!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

very nice 👏 but shravan was sweet and nice and Ansh is so mad! 😡 He is now happy that The letter which he wrote is read by sujal and now he hates her!! 😡 This mohini she showed the gun to priest and She made him say whatever she wants!! 😡 these evil people 😡 😡

Then Vikram and me in the plane 😳 I mean in the plane 😳 😛 kissing and hugging 😛 😳 nice!!

ooohh..sia..you going over the moon😳..there is much more...yet to come...😉😛

just wait and watch...and don't worry about sujal & amina...they will soo or later...get back to each other...😃😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Shravan's death!!!...why did u make him dead?N that Ansh 😡 🤢....

Hai hai...u said that I would be blushing..but yeh kya hua!!!6 long.....monthssssss....I will kill that mohini 😆

hey...diya..dont worry...by october...everything should be fine...hehe...only kidding...just wait and see...coz of mohini...u know..its only pretence....but...wait and see what happens...😃😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
Episode 44

(Jack, Owen, Ianto, Pooja, Tosh & Gauri are in Torchwood)

owen: ok - all is sorted...erm...gauri..we need a word with you..
gauri(concentrating on documents): yeah...go ahead..
owen(taking the documents): pay attention...boss..
gauri: what?
jack: gauri...we..all.. are getting concerned with your behaviour for the past few days...
gauri: listen..its nothing...
tosh: maybe because of her brother-in-law..he recently passed away..
gauri: no..its not that..
pooja: but..gauri..you screamed...you screamed..
jack: did anyone take thumper away from you?
gauri(puzzled): who?
jack: thumper...yur little childhood toy? little bunny?
owen: now...it wasnt thumper...
ianto: why cant it be?
jack: exactly..why not? they were like two peas in a pod...
owen: i'll "two peas in a pod" you..in a minute 😆
pooja: gauri..lie down...
gauri: where..?
pooja: upn the bed..

(gauri lies down...)

tosh: guys..i have a bad feeling abut this...
jack: dont worry..toshiko..it'll be alright...
ianto: now..relax...

(gauri breathing normally)

owen: close your eyes..

(gauri closes her eyes...jack fixes the wires into a device..and takes the strap which is at the end of those wires and straps it around gauri's arm..like a doctor's tool for checking the blood pressure)

tosh: whats that for?
jack: its to measure the blood...to see if the pressure goes high or low..
pooja(shocked): what?
jack: dont worry..shes not gonna die...then who will be the leader of Torchwood?

(owen connects gauri's mind telepathically with the device that reads human minds)

owen: okey-dokey..here we go...(clears his throat): now..whats your name?
gauri(in her sleep): Gauri Sinha
owen: what is yur age?
Gauri: Seventeen years old
jack: Occupation?
Gauri: Businesswoman..
jack: your real one?
Gauri: Leader of Torchwood..
tosh(i dont get it..shes replying it all correct..so whats the problem?
ianto: ssh...now this is where it gets all confusing and tricky..
owen: Gauri tell me...where are you at this moment?
Gauri: London, England
pooja: but where in London?
Gauri: right in front of this big blue box..

(everyone is shocked)

jack: big...blue...box...?
owen: Is there anyone with you?
Gauri: yes
tosh: who? Describe him...
Gauri: Tall, dark brunette, dressed in a suit and a long light brown coat...fair and skinny...
owen: whats his name?
Gauri: The...The...
jack(whispers): come on..come on...tell me...

(Gauri begins to see the clear picture..back some months ago..when she was with this young man)

gauri: so..what are looking for?
man: sharks..monstrous sharks...
gauri: do those even exist?
man: gauri..cybermen...and daleks..exist...and even poisonous spiders exist..so why cant monstrous sharks exist?
gauri: gud point..mate..

(gauri(present time): gud point mate..
owen: shes talking...ok...

(back to the flashback)

gauri: whats that there?
man: where?

(gauri leans forward and accidently falls over but the man catches ehr hand in time...now..whateva gauri is saying...the others at Torchwood can hear it as well)

man: gauri!
gauri: help...help me!
jack: ok..she must be seeing..a violent...memory..
man: gauri..dont let go...
gauri: i wont..but help me up..

(jack luks at the machine...the blood pressure is rising)

jack: owen..turn it off...blood pressure is rising!
owen: but..
man: come on...(the man pulls up gauri and saves her)
gauri: thats was close shave..wasnt it?
man: yeah..
gauri: thanx doctor..

(suddenly..the blood pressure..seems to return to normal)

pooja: what did she say?
tosh: she said "Thanks Doctor"..
owen: who is this doctor?
jack: gauri...who's that an with you?
Gauri: The Doctor...
owen(puzzled): The Doctor? But Doctor Who?
ianto: ok..we gotta bring her around now...
owen: one minute...who do you have a crush on right now?
Gauri: Capt---

(jack interrupts)

jack: OWEN!
owen: sorry..

(the machines are urned off...gauri wakes up)

owen: you all right?
gauri: erm...erm..
jack: its ll right..we all are here....

(places his arms around Gauri..who embraces him as if glad to be with ehr friends again)

pooja: tosh?
tosh: yeah..?
pooja: find out about this "Doctor"

(next, mihir~Tulsi and Anu~Prerna)

anu: so..mihir..tell me...what is it that you needed to tell me in office and that with Tulsi bhabhi and prerna?
mihir: look..anurag...Shravan is dead and gone and can't be brought back...but...we still ant Amina as our daughter-in-law...
prerna: what?
tulsi: we have a proposal for her...we want your daughter Amina and our son...Sujal...
anurag: sujal?
mihir: anu...dont get angry..
anu: i'm not angry..but...
mhiir: look..they are best friends..and we will ask sujal tonight..and...amina..but we would want to know..that do you have any objections?
prerna: i think..sujal and amina will look great together..what do you think...anu?
anurag: hmm...me too...but.it all depends on what our children think..right?
tulsi: right...
mihir: ok..tonight then..yeah..?
anu: yeah..

9ansh overhears this and thinks of more devious stuff)

(back at the sinha house, rose is dressed in black trousers, purple shirt and purple sweater..and is waiting...just then..a black car comes...daniel gets out)

rose: hi...
daniel: hi there..
(both hug each other)
rose: yu..all right?
daniel: yeah...and you?
rose: fine...
daniel: shall we go?

(both sit in the car)

rose: so..where are we going?
daniel: somewhere...you wouldnt even think of
rose: oh..come on..
daniel: its a surprise...
rose: will i get these surprises...after we are married?
daniel: maybe..

(daniel drives to a beautiful place..where there is gras...and a sea surrounding the land..)

daniel: we have just come out of South East London and this is...
rose: what?
daniel: southend
rose: no...you are kidding me...
daniel: not bad is it?
rose: this..is so beautiful...can i say something?
daniel: what?
rose: i love you..
daniel(holding her hand): i love you too..
rose: so..what do we do first?
daniel: first..(takes out a bag): we eat...chips..

(rose laughs)

daniel: oh come on..you love them..dont you?
rose: yeah..ok...come on..

(both are lying down...eating chips..and admiring the view)

rose: i neevr thought i would ever come to such a place..
daniel: why is that then?
rose: because..i'm a journalist...we hardly ever get to go anywhere..i mean..you all are pilots...you go anywehre in the sky..you went..
daniel: you know what? both of us are in a place where no-one is right now...
rose: whats that then?
daniel: love..(smiles)
rose: dan...do..erm..remember us two playing cinderella..when we were little?
daniel: yeah...you used to fuss so much when cinderella's show neevr came off...
rose: yeah...and you saved my life..
daniel: i was thinking you went crazy...you were screaming your head off and..anyway..what was in your bag?
rose: your contact details...
daniel: what?
rose: i couldnt risk losing those.because..they were the only thing that connected me with you during those years...and..but..
daniel(stroking her hair): you screamed that much...just for me?
rose(nodding her head): hmm...
daniel: i knew..it was something like that...
rose: arent you supposed..to be..busy today?
daniel: i am busy...
rose: i mean..erm..
daniel: what?
rose: nothing...

(both sit up..the wind blowing through their hair...both keep gazing at each other..rose cuddles up with daniel..who puts his arm around her...daniel strokes her hair...until then his phone rings)

daniel(on phone): hello? oh hi...yeah..wassup? i'm ok..erm..now...i'm busy...not a emergency...right...but i booked a day off...because...my brother jsut passed away...but i'm back tomorrow...ok..bye..
rose: who was that?
daniel: oh..someone from the RAF...
rose: you dont have to go?
daniel: no...so i'm thinking..that sooner or later...i'm going to tell my mum and dad about us..
rose: what? not now..
daniel: i know..not now..but..sooner or later..
rose: but..i'm scared...of being rejcted..
daniel: i'm scared tooo...of losing you..what f your parents..get you married to someone else...
rose: that wont happen..
daniel: what if it does..(holds her closer): i want us to be close like this forever...
rose: we will be..one day...(kisses him gently on the cheek)

(daniel then kisses rose...holding her tightly...both are nterrupted..by the phone)

daniel: oh great...now what?

(picks up the phone...hears something...and quickly hangs up)

rose; what happened?
daniel: we have to go..
rose: is everything all right?
daniel: i'll explain on the way...

(both get to the virani house...)

daniel: kavya..what happened? whats the important news?
kavya: the important news..concerns...piyush..and tuhina..
rose: why? whats happened?
kavya: mum and dad are thinking of getting piyush married to tuhina..
rose: what?
daniel: and why is that shocking..?
kavya: well..simply what happened to sujal...sohan and tuhina..are in love with each other..
daniel: oh great...look..we will try and talk to mum and dad today..
rose: erm..i should be going...i try and see mum and dad dont agree..
kavya: yeah..ok
rose: bye..see you daniel..see you kavya..
daniel & kavya: bye..

(rose leaves)

kavya: and where have you been?
daniel: oh..erm..just here and there...
kavya: daniel..whats that?
daniel: what?
kavya(sniffing): is it just me or have you got female perfume on you> whya re you wearing female perfume?

(daniel remebers when he kissed rose)

daniel: oh..erm..i bumped into a lady today...seemed angry...but you know..
kavya: hmm...coincidentlly..with rose..you came..
daniel: oh..erm...i..erm...i...just met her on the way...so..thought..we might talk for a while...but what you told us....she had to go..
kavya: right...
daniel: coming in a minute...
(daniel leaves)

kavya(thinking): daniel is lying...so obvious...OMG..he's...going out with someone...he's in love..but with who?

How was that..guys? 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Precap: The parents discuss with Sujal~Amina about their marriage, meanwhile Ansh brainwashes Sujal to hate Amina, and Marriyam tells Prerna of her secret and Kashish and Kavya go through a life-changing encounter.

😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Just updating the couples' list

Daniel~Rose
Kavya~Kashish
Karan~Diya
Sujal~Amina
Arjun~Marriyam
Vikram~Sia

Hope i havent missed any1 out 😃

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