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Posted: 18 years ago
ok ppl - updating episode 26 😃 😉
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Episode 26

(Kavya is up in his room..kashish goes 2 see him)

kavya: oh hi..kashish..come in..
kashish: erm...i will..erm..kavya i needed to talk to you..
kavya: about what?
kashish: u were working after school today...werent you?
kavya: yeah..so?
kashish: and i called you..
kavya: did you?
kashish: yes..i did...and why didnt you respond..?
kavya: u never called me..
kashish: yes i did...u can check the list of missed calls in yur mobile..
kavya: but...(remembers that he went to get his chemistry book): but...i get it..
kashish: what?
kavya: i went to get my chemistry book...and i left my mobile on the table..and only swayam was there...
kashish: so..what are you trying to point out?
kavya: that...(pauses): nothing...but..kashish...i didnt know you called me...
kashish: erm..
kavya: i'm sorry...i really am...and..
kashish: emr..kavya..i know..but...when you dont respond like that to me..i feel...like if you are ignoring me....
kavya: kashish..that will never happen...i cna neevr ever forget about you...we have been friends since we were one...
kashish: i know..and...
kavya: hey...its all right...
(gives her a friendly hug)

(Marriyam is out for some shopping with Tuhina)

tuhina: so..marriyam..how do you like this dress?
marriyam: hmm...which one?
tuhina: that one...that black one..with the red dupatta...
marriyam: yeah..its nice...i might as well as buy it...
tuhina: hmm..u pay for it...while i go and erm..see some other stuff...ok?
marriyam: ok..

(marriyam pays for the dress...and turns around to go and see tuhina..but bumps into someone)

marriyam: uff...seriously..aaj kal ki log bhi na...

(luks up..and sees a 16 yr old guy in front of her...)

guy: i'm sorry....i didnt mean it..
marriyam: its ok...

(tuhina calls out 2 marriyam)

tuhina: marriyam! come here!
guy: so...u r marriyam?
marriyam: yeah...marriyam sinha...and you are?
guy: yuvraj..but you can call me yuv..
marriyam: right..erm...my sister is calling me....and..
yuv: we will catch each other later..right?
marriyam: erm..yeah...someday...probably...(turns around and goes)
yuv(2 himself): someday...maybe tomorrow? (smiles)

(sujal is in his room..the song "pyar se pyaar hum" is on the pc..sujal suddenly is in thoughts of someone)

(Sujal's dream: Sujal in black suit and the girl in a black trouser suit with ehr duppatta around her arms...her hair curly and black jewellery...he takes the girl's hand and dances with her...he kisses the girl on the forehead...and takes her in his arms...he luks at her face..and the girl is none other than amina!!)

(vikram suddnely turns off the music..sujal's dream breaks)

vikram: where were you lost?
sujal: erm..erm...why did you turn off the music?
vikram: because my dear brother...you were suddnely smiling to yur self...
sujal: sshh...
vikram: who were you thinking of?
sujal: erm..no-one...
vikram: sujal..the only reason a guy would smile..and his heartbeat would go faster...is because..he is in luv...
sujal: vicky...chup...luk..i need to do something...you wait here...
(goes out of the room)
(vikram opens sujal's book..and sees amina's photo inside)
vikram: well..so much nothing in his heart..
(sujal comes back in the room..vikram puts the photo back)
sujal: what?
vikram: sujal...tujhe amina ke kasam...kya baat hai?
sujal: erm...batao?
vikram: well..duh...yes!
sujal: i...well..erm...
vikram: just blurt it out...
sujal: i think i am...in luv...
vikram: i knew it...who is she?
sujal: Amina..
vikram: really?
sujal: yeah..and vicky..i'm so mad about her...and..each time..she's front of me..smiling...i cant control myself..i feel like...
vikram: holding her..
sujal: yeah...
vikram: well...the...tell her...

(sujal sees shravan passing by)

sujal: shravan!
sharavan: sujal?
sujal: hey yaar..erm..main tumhe kuch keh sakta hoo?
shravan: yeah..sure..why not?
shravan: u were right...i think i am in...
shravan: love?
(sujal nods)
shravan: dont tell me...amina sinha...right?
sujal: how did you know?
shravan: simply..u have been childhood friends from the age of one...upto the age of six..and then...now 16...i know it..
sujal: i'm going to tell her...
shravan: good luck..man...
sujal: thanx..

(shravan grins...and decides to share this news with his own pals)

(diya is passing by...and someone suddnely pulls her inside a room...which is completely dark...)

diya(scared): kaun hai? who's there?
(she feels someone's hand over her mouth...a candle is lit..and she sees the face of the person)
diya: karan..tum?
karan: haan..main? kyun..daar gaye thi?
diya: nahin...its oly you..who can do something like this...
(karan mvoes closer towards diya)
diya: karan..yeh theek nahin hai..
karan: kya theek nahin hai?
diya: akran...hum dono ek doosri se buhut payr karte hai..lekhen humare rishte ki koi naam nahin hai..aur iss tarha..
karan(takes her in his arms): lekhen ya phar koi nahin hai...tho..daar kis baat ka?
diya: karan..agar kisi ni hume dekh liya...phir hum dono ki badnami go jayege...
karan: kisi ko pata nahin hoga..
diya: lekhen...hum dono..school mein bhi mil sakte hai...
karan: school mein tum busy hote ho...aur yaha bhi tum busy hote hoo..mere saath kab busy hoge..?
diya: karan...yeh baatein...(luks away)
karan: theek hai...lekhen..first you know...
diya: fine...
(places her arms aorund him..and hugs him tightly..and is about to go..but karan doesnt let her go)
karan: mera...voh..matlaab nahin tha...
diya: phir kya?
(karan whispers 2 her)
diya: nahin..karan...
karan: if..you really do luv me...

(karan holds diya and both kiss each other...)

diya: i'll see you later...
karan: how about tonight? again?
diya: karan...
karan: ok..bye...
diya: i luv you...
karan: i luv you too....

Precap: Sujal finally confesses to Amina about his feelings, and Sush tells Poonam a big secret about Rahul, and Rohan's life begins to change too.

Howz dat, ppl?
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey as usual......beautiful and really nicely written....i am loving each and every part.....u are making the story beautiful and at the same time intresting.....

if its having romance then its also wowven with evil people trying their evilness....with intresting moments.....as well......

👏
this for u!!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

hey as usual......beautiful and really nicely written....i am loving each and every part.....u are making the story beautiful and at the same time intresting.....

if its having romance then its also wowven with evil people trying their evilness....with intresting moments.....as well......

👏
this for u!!

thanx sia....so sweet of you...and thanx once again..for those comments...😳😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
Ufffffff main kiya kahunnnnnnnnnn.Candle light😳....Karan and me...😳 and then............... 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Ufffffff main kiya kahunnnnnnnnnn.Candle light😳....Karan and me...😳 and then............... 😳

pata hai? i knew u will react like this wid blushing smileys...but so many? 😛

i neva knew....hehe😛😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Shirley

pata hai? i knew u will react like this wid blushing smileys...but so many? 😛

i neva knew....hehe😛😉

Kiya karun mein yeh sab tumhari meherbani se hain😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
haila shirley!
u made me blush 2!! 😳
that dream was soo sweet and u r more sweeter for writing it! 😃 🤗 🤗
the episode was awesome and romantic! 👏
love u!!!
Amina
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: diya7000

Kiya karun mein yeh sab tumhari meherbani se hain😳

awww...anu-ji...aap tho buhut sweet ho....😳

bas aise blush karti rahe..hehe....😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: amina877

haila shirley!
u made me blush 2!! 😳
that dream was soo sweet and u r more sweeter for writing it! 😃 🤗 🤗
the episode was awesome and romantic! 👏
love u!!!
Amina

aww...amina....no matter how sweet i am...u r sweet..and so r yur sweet...sweet...comments...😛😃

thanx...just wait till sujal confesses...yur heart might skip a beat...😉😃

tc....luv..Shirley🤗🤗🤗

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