Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 21

Yeah it is quite long and excellent one.And what a sweet way of confesion!!!!!!!!!hai........main to ................mar gayi 😳

wow just read all the parts i missed!!!
and i have to say all were totally awesome and gr8!!! 👏
u just brought a huge smile on my face 😃 😉
gr8 going sis! 👏
take care!!
Amina

Originally posted by: diya7000

Yeah it is quite long and excellent one.And what a sweet way of confesion!!!!!!!!!hai........main to ................mar gayi 😳

thanx anu jaan..nice to see those red cheeks again😃😳😛

Originally posted by: amina877

wow just read all the parts i missed!!!
and i have to say all were totally awesome and gr8!!! 👏
u just brought a huge smile on my face 😃 😉
gr8 going sis! 👏
take care!!
Amina

hey amina...nice 2 have u back....thanx for the comments...you take care as well....Shirley😳😃

ok ppl - updating episode 25 😃 😉

Episode 25

(Marriyam is alone crying in her room...the song "tujhe yaad na aaye mere" from kuch kuch hota hai comes on..marriyam remembers the good old days of her and arjun..the sinha sisters come in)

kashish: hey..marriyam...
(marriyam wipes her tears away)
marriyam: hey..wassup?
poonam(coming in): i told them..we are all sisters...and...
amina(hugs her): luk..one day...u will get yur luv..ok?
marriyam: i wont..he does even love me...he...he loves someone else...
gauri: who does he love?
marriyam: shefali..and..i'm jsut a frend...
rose: luk..one day...arjun will come to you...you will be able to spend the rest of yur life with him..
marriyam: hes in love wid someone else..rose...how is that exactly possible?

(diya comes back..after talking to karan...in a hurry to tell her sisters of what happened)

diya(coming in): guess what guys? u will never believe what happened...(sees marriyam upset): sweetie..whats wrong?
marriyam: i fell in luve...wid arjun..
diya: and...did you tell him?

(mariyam starts crying again)

sia: hey..marriyam...rona amath..yaar...
poonam: arjun is in love wid shefali...totally broken her ehart..and she neevr told him...
diya: hey..marriyam..dekh? tu ek buhut bahadur larki hai...theek hai? khabar dar agar tu phirse rona shoro kiya tho..theek hai?
marriyam: kya karo..diya? mere zindagi bas sirf andira hogaya hai..
diya: luk...jab thak yeh diya..(about ehrself): tere saath..tere zindagi kabhi bhi nahin andira hoga..ok?
marriyam: tho kuch kehna chati thi...?
diya: baad mein...
amal: luk...arjun se hum sab baat kar lenge..theek hai? aur..
marriyam(interrupts): nahin...arjun se koi kuch nahin kahega...
rose: what will you do? cry for him throughout the rest of yur life?
marriyam: i guess..i have to..
mita: zindagi yahan nahin rukh ti...aur bhi tumhe buhut kuch karna..hai..arjun ke liye..itna sacrifice tho maath karo..

(next scene: swayam and kavya are working at school together..)

swyaam: so...maths work is done..
kavya: finally...this maths is taking the life out of me...
swayam: tell me about it...
kavya: oh god..
swayam: what happened?
kavya: i forgot my chemistry book in my locker..erm...i'll be back in five minutes...ok?
swayam: ok..

(kashish calls on kavya's mobile..and kavya left it behind..swayam picks it up..and hungs up on the other end)

kashish: arre..phone kyun cut hogaya?

(kavya comes back..swayam acts normal)

kavya: kya hua?
swayam: kuch nahin..just the same..
kavya: koi phone nahin kiya mujhe? mobile phar?
swayam: erm..nahin tho..
kavya: acha..

(meanwhile..kashish is upset of why kavya cut the line)

kashish: aisa kyun kiya usne? aaj usse pochna parega..

(next scene: rose is waiting in the restaurant..but ansh tells daniel that rose is waiting for him at home)

rose(luking at her watch): uff...where is daniel? its 5:30..and he said he will be at 4:00...

(tries 2 call him....ansh sees daniel's phone on charge..ansh turns it off)

rose: oh god..i dont care...voh aa raha hai..ya nahin..i have had it...

(picks up her bag is about to leave...but sees that it is raining now..)

rose: well done..rose sinha...you didnt get yur umbrella...(thinking): i'm so going to kill daniel...

daniel: ansh...u said rose was going to meet me at home..so..where is she?
ansh: oh yaar..i dont know..are you sure..that she is not working extra hrs at school...?
daniel: no..swayam..and kavya..were working after school..and they were the only ones...
ansh: yaar..dont worry...she will be back..
daniel: this is not her...she always comes home on fridays...

(ansh sees rose coming...)

ansh: acha yaar...main chaltha hoo..phir baad dinner phar milenge..ok?
daniel: ok..

(rose comes in...all wet from head to toe)

anu: rose...kaha thi aap?
rose: school..
anu: school mein aaj sirf swayam aur kavya thi..aap kaha thi?
rose: papa...i need to talk to u later...erm..is dnaiel at home?
anu: no..beta..he's waiting for you here..

(rose feels angry)

rose: one minute...papa...(goes up to her room...and sees daniel)

daniel: rose...OMG....u're safe...thank god...i got so scared..
rose: dont pretend with me...give up that innocent act..understand?
daniel: rose..whats wrong?
rose: thats it..daniel..dont give me that...u delibrately..told me to wait in the restaurant..and u never turned up..
daniel: woah..hold on..u were waiting in the restaurant..?
rose: yes..like you told me..to..
daniel: but..you said that u wanted to meet me here in yur house..
rose: i never said that...u said that we were supposed to meet in the restaurant..
daniel: yes..but i got the message that you couldnt make it..to the restaurant..
rose: message? from who?
daniel: ffrom ansh..
rose: well...ansh told me..that u said that u will meet in the restaurant..
daniel: and he said that u wanted to see me here..in yur house...(thinks): why did ansh lie to me?
rose: but..i..(sneezes): sorry...its so cold...
daniel: u know what? erm...u get changed...and..i will get u some hot..hot..chocolate..yeah?
rose: yeah...

(hugs him..)

daniel: ok..ok...rose...u r all wet...u going to get me wet too..
rose: i dont care...(holding on tightly)
daniel: ok..i'll get yur hot chocolate..alright?
rose: alright...

(the big ben just struck 8:00pm..)

ansh: uff...oh god..after such a good plan...it failed...the two of them are still happy with each other..

Precap: Karan~Diya meet each other after school for the first time, Kashish asks Kavya of why he didn't respond to her calls, and Marriyam meets someone new in her life, and Sujal feels different towards Amina.

Howz dat, ppl?

Shirl mere dictionary mein jitne bhi adjectives the sab tumne khatam kar diya.Ab mere pass kehne ke liye kuch nehi hai 👏 . First meeting after school!!!!!!!!!! 😳 hey pls post soon.

hey shirl read out evrything........evey paart.....the only thing is awesome..... 👏 indded very beautifully writen and very very nice....... 👏

Originally posted by: diya7000

Shirl mere dictionary mein jitne bhi adjectives the sab tumne khatam kar diya.Ab mere pass kehne ke liye kuch nehi hai 👏 . First meeting after school!!!!!!!!!! 😳 hey pls post soon.

awww..thanx anu dear...i will try my bets that yur first meeting after school turns out to be romantic...i will write to the best...😳😃

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

hey shirl read out evrything........evey paart.....the only thing is awesome..... 👏 indded very beautifully writen and very very nice....... 👏

hey thanx sia....ur luv story will be on track soon...😳😃😉