Fan-Fic 4 Saarrthi: Mohabbatein! - Page 23

Episode 27 (actually..its 27..soz about dat!)

(Amina is out on her terrace...outside her bedroom....studying...sujal is luking for her)

sujal: erm...sia..tumne amina ko dekha kahiin?
sia: erm..shayad voh aapne room mein ho..kyun? kuch zaroori baat hai kya?
sujal: erm..nahin..bas school ki baari mein...
sia: acha..
sujal: aur haan...vicky tumse koi baat karna chathta tha..
sia: really? ok..thanx 4 telling me..

(sia leaves..sujal goes 2 amina's room..and sees her on the terrace..and goes there)

sujal: erm..hi..
amina(luking up): hi..sujal...kaise ho?
sujal: theek ho..and u?
amina: theek ho...erm..sit..
sujal: erm..nahin...amina..main tumse kuch kehna chahtha tha...
amina: acha? kaunse baat?
(a long pause)
amina: well..sujal..kaho na...kya hua?
sujal: pata nahin..ki yeh baat main kaise kaho...lekhen..(goes more closer): amina..
amina: sujal...tumhare sehat theek tho haina?
sujal: amina...(takes her in his arms)
amina: sujal...dekho..agar kisi ni hume dekh bhi liya na..phir sab kuch gaalt ho jayega...
sujal: amina...main tumse pyar karne laga ho..

(amina is surprised)

amina: kya?
sujal: i luv you...a lot...
amina: lekhen...
sujal: pata nahin...kabse..lekhen..
(amina puts her finger on his lips)
amina: i luv you too...
(both smile at each other..and hug each other....the maple leaves on the terrace..blow all around them...

(sujal's phone starts ringing)

sujal: ok...i gotta go..amina..
amina: thats ok...
sujal: i'll see you after school...
amina: we always see each other after school..
sujal: no..i meant....together...alone...like a date...
amina(blushes): a date? what..like yur girlfrend?
sujal(nods): hmm
amina: ok...
sujal: alright...see you then...
(kisses her on the forehead..and leaves...meanwhile amina..is smiling with joy)

(adi is sitting watching tv...when amal joins him)

amal: kya ho raha hai?
adi: oh...kuch khaas nahin...tum kaise ho?
amal: theek ho...erm...adi?
adi: haan...
amal: mujhe tumse kuch kehna tha..
adi: kya? (turns off the tv)
amal: erm...kaise kaho? pehle kabhi kisi larki ko aisa nahin kaha..
adi: kya nahin kaha?
amal: adi..mujhe tumse pyar hogaya hai..

(adi is surprised)

adi: kya? yeh tum kya keh rahe ho?

(both gaze at eahc other...until amal..bursts out laughing)

adi: arre..kya hua? why are you laughing?
amal: tum bhi..na...adi...itne saalo se mujhe jaante hoo..aur...
adi: u r too much...u girls are just too much...
amal(sing-along): hum to bhai jaise hai...waise rahenge...
adi: tumhe tho pata hai..mujhe aise jokes pasand nahin..
amal: arre..tum bura maan gaye....acha...baba..sorry...(holds her ears)
adi: its ok..

(sia goes upto vikram)

sia: erm..vicky?
vicky: haan?
sia: erm..sujal keh raha tha..ki tum mujhe koi baat karna chahti thi...
vicky: haan..erm...mere paas do tickets hai..
sia: haan tho?
vicky: europe ki...aur..erm..ek mere liye hai..aur doosra ek...dost ki liye hai...
sia: acha...phir?
vicky: kya tum chalo gi mere saath?
sia: erm..vicky..
vicky: dekho...tumhare mummy papa ko koi aitraaz nahin hai..na mere mum aur dad ko hai...so...
sia: erm...theek hai..(smiles)
vicky: acha...aaj friday hai..sunday ko...flight jayege...subha mein...
sia: acha..erm..main jaa kar..packing karti hoo..
vicky: ok...

(marriyam is coming home...on the way she meets yuv again)

yuv: arre..marriyam..tum?
marriyam: oh..yuv..kaise ho?
yuv: main tho theek ho..aur tum?
marriyam: i'm fine...
yuv: aur...kya kar rahe thi?
marriyam: erm..koi shopping karne gaye thi..aur yeh sab bags mujhse handle ho rahe hai...
(struggling to hold them)
yuv: main koi help karo?
marriyam: nahin..but thanx for offering...
yuv: dekho..tumhe koi help ki zaroorat hao..lao...mujhe do...aur main tumhe ghar bhi drop kartha ho...
marriyam: oh..thanx yuv..

(yuv drops marriyam home....and helps her with her bags...arjun sees yuv)

yuv(placing the bags down): acha...yeh sab hogaya...acha..main chaltha hoo..
marriyam: ok..thanx...bye...
yuv: bye...
(yuv leaves)

arjun: amrriyam..yeh kaun tha?
marriyam(luking away): mera dost hai..
arjun: tumne mujhe kabhi nahin bataya...
marriyam: isme batani ki kya zaroorat hai?
arjun: erm...marriyam..main tumhara dost hoo..mujhse nahon kahoge..phir kisi kahoge?
marriyam: apne beheno ko bataonge..
(leaves..arjun feels hurt wid marriyam not trusting him anymore)

Precap: Karan~Diya and Sujal~Amina are on their first dates after school, and the teenagers are revising for their final exams.

Howz dat, ppl?

Daniel~Rose
Kavya~Kashish
Karan~Diya
Rahul~Poonam
Sujal~Amina
Aditya~Amal
Sohan~Tuhina
Arjun~Marriyam
Vikram~Sia
Angad~Priya

The jodis' list..have i missed any1 out? 😊

Nice veryyyy nice shirl 👏 👏.I suppose that you haven't missed out any pair 😊

the update was awesome as usual.......wow and vikram and me ...... to europe........uff.....update soon

👏 beautiful update indeed......

haila shirley ...the episode was awesome,gr8, romantic and breathtaking😳....as i was reading, i was blushing😳,smiling😃 and imagining it in my mind😳

You r doing a wonderful job shirley.......keep up the gr8 work!👏

love u!!🤗

Amina

Originally posted by: diya7000

Nice veryyyy nice shirl 👏 👏.I suppose that you haven't missed out any pair 😊

thanx anu dear...😳😃...next episode is gonna make you blush...hehe😳😛

Originally posted by: sia_lovely

the update was awesome as usual.......wow and vikram and me ...... to europe........uff.....update soon

👏 beautiful update indeed......

hey sia...glad u liked it...wait till you and vicky get there....and i will try my bets to write a romantic spicy episode for two...😳😊

Originally posted by: amina877

haila shirley ...the episode was awesome,gr8, romantic and breathtaking😳....as i was reading, i was blushing😳,smiling😃 and imagining it in my mind😳

You r doing a wonderful job shirley.......keep up the gr8 work!👏

love u!!🤗

Amina

aww....so sweet of you amina...😳😃

if you are reacting this much..wait till yur first date...😃😛😳

love u...🤗

ok ppl - updating episode 28 😃 😉

Episode 28

(School has finished...karan~diya meet up after school..saying to their parents that they are studying)

karan: oh..i'm really tired...
diya: same here..and plus...exams coming up...as well..
karan: yeah..but spending time here with you..makes it all worthwhile...
diya: so sweet...erm..karan..r u thinking of moving out of yur house? when you go to university?
karan: yeah...i am...r u?
diya: hmm
karan: well...erm..i suppose...we can live with each other..u know..
diya: together? under one roof? thats impossible..
karan: hey..do you know what impossible means?
diya: yeah...no way!
karan: it means im possible...
diya: karan...

(diya moves up closer and rests her head on karan's shoulder..karan places his arm around her..watching the waters and the sky)

diya: this place is so beautiful...
karan: it is...we always came here when we were kids..and..then we were friends...but..
diya: but what?
karan(going more closer): we're...more than friends..
diya(moves away): karan..until we r not married...this isn't right...
karan: you kissed me...the other night...
diya: but..yeah..but...thats because...
karan(stroking her cheek): because you cant stay away from me..
diya: karan..we were all alone..and plus...i couldn't resist you...
karan: then why resist me now?
diya(luking down): karan...erm...

(karan holds up ehr face..and both gaze at each other...unable to fight the resistance...they tightly embrace each other..when diya lets go)

karan: whats wrong?
diya: erm...karan..we r in a public place...what if someone sees us?
karan: hmm...ok...we should be going anyway...
diya: yeah...mum and papa...are telling me..you all are coming over ours today...
karan: yeah..and we will...(smiles)
diya: dismiss any further thoughts...

(next scene: sujal waits for amina..she was supposed to meet him at 2:30...but now..it is 3:30..amina arrives..)

(sujal is busy reading a book)

amina: hi..
(sujal is silent)
amina: sujal...main hoo....hi...sweetie...
(sujal is still silent)
amina: sujal...(waves): hello...
(amina bends down and snatches the book)
sujal: give me the book back..now..
amina: are books better than yur girlfriend now?
sujal: yes..in a way...they are...at least they dont make you wait..do they?
amina(holds her ears): ok sujal..i'm sorry...i didnt mean it...gauri and mamta had to be dropped off first...and i told mum and papa..that i'm studying..but here i am...to meet you..
(sujal ignores her)
amina: ok...fine..i'm going...
(about to go..but sujal grabs her hand)
sujal: now..that you have come to me..what makes you think i will let you go?
amina: u were angry wid me...
sujal(next 2 her): i can never ever be angry with you...what makes you think i am?
amina: the way you ignore me..
sujal: i was joking...so...i got..some sweets...here...
(gives her the sweets)
amina: oh...so sweet of you...we canshare...na?
sujal: hmm..and flowers...
amina: sujal..i love you...
sujal: i love you too...

(sujal tightly hugs amina...and kisses her on the forehead)

sujal: really amina...i neevr knew when i fell in love wid you..one minute you were my friend..next...i cant even resist you...
amina: love is unpredictable...i just hope that...we can stay together...like this...
sujal: i promise you...that we will never separate...(holds her hands)
amina: ok..(smiles)
(sujal gently kisses amina on the cheek..amina is surprised)
amina: ok..first time a guy has kissed me on the cheek...
(sujal and amina get more closer..and are about to kiss each other..when sujal's phone rings)

sujal: woah...this phone...(attends it..and then after a couple of minutes...hungs up)
amina: is eevrything all right?
sujal: erm..yeah...it was adi..he said that we need to go to sinha house..yurs...
amina: right..and here we are...
sujal: dont worry...there's tomorrow..too..
amina: yeah...

(both familes at the sinha house...)

(the boys upstairs in their room)

daniel(working): 67 x 77890=..uff..i cant do this homework...i'm so going to be happy..when i get out of..high school..
vicky: all of us..will be...

(sujal comes..in..and then karan)

sujal: oii...brothers..i got something to tell you all..
kavya: what? oh..dont tell me...
sujal: what?
kavya: u have a crush on Angelina Jolie..dont you?
sujal: yeah..i do..but not on angie jolie...goodness no...its more than a crush...its love...
adi: with who? who is she?
sujal: Amina Sinha...

(angad who was drinking his coke...spits it out)

angad: u r kidding me?
sujal: no..and me and ehr just had our first date...
daniel: seriously? omg..you didnt...(luks at him)
sujal: no..i didnt kiss her...but i was about to..until adi phoned me...
sohan: satyanas! how could you...?
sujal: but i didnt..did i?
arjun: do..mum and dad...know?
sujal: no..not yet...
kavya: i'm smelling trouble...

karan: oh..and erm....me and diya...
sohan: no..not u and diya...dating...u mean..
karan: erm...we are...
daniel: right...sujal dating amina...karan dates diya...arjun dating shefali...whos next? angad?
angad: i do a lot of dating...so..cute those girls..are..
kavya: god! hes so useless....
angad: oii...stop talking about yurself...
vicky(laughs): kavya...kuch kaho na...
angad(sings): kuch na kaho...kuch na kaho...
kavya(pressing his fists): u're asking for a punch..yeah?
angad: dont..dont...please...for my sake..
kavya: nope...
angad: for kashish's sake...
(kavya stops)

sohan: ooh...only for kashish..huh?
daniel: sohan...shut it now..or he wont spare you...
adi: oh...daniel...yur application for university has arrived...you can go..after the exams...
karan: go? where?
daniel: San Francisco....university...
sujal: for how long?
daniel: 2 years...mum and dad..know..and so does everyone else...
arjun: but does...rose know?
daniel: erm..no...but i will...
adi: you should tell her quick...

tulsi: boys...come on..dinner time....
karan: lets go..

Precap: The teenagers have their exams, meanwhile Vikram~Sia decide to study in Europe, and Marriyam feels that she can't live with Arjun~Shefali together.

Howz dat, ppl?