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Posted: 12 years ago
#21




Wow it was really amazing..
the prologue was really gr8...
want to see what haooens with sharon on the first day of st. louis colledge...

plz do start with this SS...
the update the first chp. soon..
n do pm me... 😃😃
im WAITING... 😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept...😊😊
super excited for the ss...
plz update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome prologue dear!!
Loved the whole concept<3 waiting for chapter 1. Plzzz pm me when u update the ss .
Nd thnxxx fr d pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Well, i like the idea of starting a new SS but to be frankly it scared me when you asked do every story have to be happy in end! Well, if this story has a tragic or sad ending then please do tell me now so that i can keep myself away from this because i just can take nay tragedy or sad ending in love stories. I am horrible at that and i cry all the time them.

So make it happy in end or tell me if i should prefer to not read it? 😆



- Marium
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Posted: 12 years ago
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really nice proloue...i liked the idea so do continue soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey..interesting concept and superb write up... 👏
cnt wait to read further... update soon
do pm me! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Marium-

Well, i like the idea of starting a new SS but to be frankly it scared me when you asked do every story have to be happy in end! Well, if this story has a tragic or sad ending then please do tell me now so that i can keep myself away from this because i just can take nay tragedy or sad ending in love stories. I am horrible at that and i cry all the time them.

So make it happy in end or tell me if i should prefer to not read it? 😆



- Marium

Well.. I cannot reveal anything now. It's up to you to read it. About tragic stories, I cannot write them, cuz even I'm very emotional.. But I cannot reveal anything as of now. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting concept :-) can't wait to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter One

An 18 year old boy made his way through the vast corridor of St. Louis. Girls drooled over him as they saw his heart throbbing face pass a smile to random people. Suddenly his eyes, drifted to a girl who was lost in her own thoughts and was not even noticing him.

"Kriya!" He called out to her.

The girl glanced at him and resumed doing her work. The guy made up his mind to go and convince her. He walked towards her. She saw him and made a cranky face.

"Not this time. You ditched me last night and didn't turn up for the date. How could you? And instead of calling me, you message me and inform me about you unavailability."

"I am sorry Kriya. I really am. You know about the sixth dancer na? I was busy in that."

Kriya seemed to see sense in whatever he was blabbering. "Ok" she said. "But I need a compensation for this."

"Fine! How about a cup of coffee right now?"

"Okay." Kriya smiled and turned to go.

"Kriya!" the guy stopped her and she turned.

"I love you…."

Kriya blushed and reciprocated the same. She looked into his jet black orbs and he looked into her blue ones. They were blissfully unaware of the world around them when the guy's phone's loud blare pulled them out of their oblivion.

"Who's it?" Kriya asked the guy.

"It's Swayam." He answered the call.

"Rey… where are you? We have a meeting right now… you don't remember?"

"I'm sorry yaar. I was with Kriya. I'll be there right now. Bye."

Swayam hung him up and started pacing frantically in the rehearsal hall. On the other hand, Kriya frowned at Rey.

"I'm sorry." Rey seemed to understand her expressions very well. After all, both of them were deeply in love with each other.

"It's okay." Kriya let out a sigh. "We'll meet up in the evening." She gave him a smile.

"Thanks Kriya. Bye." Rey said and starting walking towards the rehearsal hall.

"Rey, thank god you are here. We have to discuss a lot."

"Swayam, we have to finish this work quickly. You made the notice?"

"Kind of. Just check it and see whether it has all the details or no."

Rey took a piece of paper which Swayam was holding. It read "Hey students of St. Louis College. This college has a massive number of dancers, who are still not in limelight. So dancers, put on your dancing shoes, and give an audition for the position of the sixth dancer for team weaklings. Day- Tomorrow and time- 5 pm, venue- audition room...-Swayam Shekhawat (Captain) and Reyaansh Singhania (GS) ."

"It's fine." Rey nodded in agreement. "What do you want me to do?"

"Approve of it. Now that you think it is fine, I'll put the notice on the notice board. Keys please?"

Rey handed him a bunch of keys and Swayam thanked him and left.

Sharon entered St. Louis College. It was the same as she had expected. A huge gate, a busy atrium, and she was yet to see the whole college. Little did she know that trouble lay ahead of her on the first day itself. She asked a girl where the principal's office was. As she turned to go there, a boy came unknowingly rushing towards her. He himself didn't know where he was going, but he collided straight with Sharon and as luck would have it, both of them fell down.

"Ouch!" Sharon cried in pain and shoved the boy off her. With great difficulty she got up and dusted her dress. "My new designer dress! What the hell!!!" She exclaimed.

Swayam was proceeding towards the notice board, when he saw a guy falling on a girl. He was surprised as well as shocked. He thought of helping both of them. He had humanity but at the same time he wanted to see the girl's reaction.

The guy who fell on Sharon got up and dusted himself. Sharon couldn't control her anger more and she straight away smacked him. The guy was shocked. But he didn't care to ask her the reason.

"Can't you walk and see?" Sharon asked him. "When you know that there is a girl in front of you, do you like banging into her? Get a life! Walk and see. I think my slap gave you a piece of my mind. Now think twice before messing with Sharon Rai Prakash."

Swayam heard her name but her back was turned. He could only watch her neat hair which was open. They were straight on top and curled towards the bottom.

"I'm sorry. " The guy hung his head.

"You should be." Sharon turned, to go the other way.

She turned only to face Swayam. They were not very far from each other. Swayam saw her perfectly carved face; she put a lock of hair behind her ears as they came on her face and made it difficult for her to see.

She looked stunning. Swayam thought. Dressed in a skirt and an off shoulder top, Swayam thought, she looked no less than an angel. He kept looking at her, those hazel eyes, were looking everywhere else, apart from him.

She got a bit fidgety. She felt nervousness creeping up to her as she saw a boy staring at her. She hesitantly looked at him. His face was babyish, cute, but impeccable... She looked into his chocolate brown eyes and her eyes drifted to his perfectly carved lips. She watched as his lips carved into a beautiful crescent. He had to be given the award for wearing such a beautiful smile. It was not a wide one, but a slight one and it looked perfect on him.

Sharon realized what she was doing. She was admiring a complete stranger.

'Good looking stranger.' She reminded herself. She snapped out of her trance. But she did not move. She didn't know why but she wanted to be there, near him.

Swayam still couldn't realize what he was doing. He was staring at her from what seemed like ages, but he could not stop himself from doing the same. Had it not been for Rey, Swayam would have permanently stayed like that.

Swayam's phone rang and he at once slipped out of his trance. It was Rey who had called him. Swayam answered the call.

"Yes Rey" He sighed.

"Swayam did you put the notice?"

Swayam face palmed. He had completely forgotten about it. "Yeah Rey. I'm just about to do that. I'll talk to you later. Bye."

He hung Rey up and proceeded towards the notice board and put up the notice.

It was 5 in the evening and Sharon noticed there was a huge rush in front of the notice board. People had gathered around it and it was difficult for one to even see what the notice was about. After the crowd around the notice board plummeted, Sharon took a look at the "famous" notice.

"Dance? Auditions? That sounds cool!" Sharon loved dancing and giving auditions for her was always like seeking a new opportunity and a step towards her future. She made up her mind to give the auditions. She was really excited about it.

Swayam was sitting in the rehearsal hall thinking about the girl whom he had seen. He was not a person who could be impressed easily, but somehow he couldn't take his mind off that girl. He knew her name, it was Sharon Rai Prakash and she looked beautiful. Swayam's gut feeling said that she was a beauty with brains. One of those rare combinations. He tried to drift himself from her, and finally got engaged in some CS work.

Next day, Swayam bumped into Sharon once again. Swayam was already a bit preoccupied, but Sharon recognized him. He was the same guy who was admiring her the previous day. She apologized but because of his extreme preoccupation, he did not pay heed to her. She became a bit upset but at once cheered up. She thought about the auditions and decided to practice for the same before 5 pm. She went straight to the rehearsal hall because there wasn't any lecture scheduled for that particular time.

The rehearsal hall was more magnificent than she had imagined. It was huge and perfect for the dance team to rehearse. She wore her dancing shoes and transformed herself into a graceful swan on the dance floor.

Her light body swayed rhythmically. She was flawless and blissfully unaware of the fact that someone was watching her.

Swayam watched her as she danced beautifully without any interruptions and perfectly isolated from rest of the world. He didn't wish to stop her, even though he had a meeting scheduled with Rey and Kriya. She looked so nonchalant, as if she was in some other world, which was completely free of tension. He rested his head on the nearby wall and watched her dance, her body moving gracefully. He had a constant smile playing on his lips. She had captured his mind again and he desperately wanted to go there and dance with her.

"Swayam…" Someone tapped him. Swayam quietly removed that person's hand from his shoulder and continued admiring her.

"Swayam!" That person repeated. Swayam didn't answer him this time either.

"Swayam look at me!" The person, Rey, chided. Rey blocked his view and shook him, as if trying to bring him back to normal. "What's wrong? We have a meeting now and who's this girl dancing here?"

Swayam came out of his trance and apologized to Rey for not responding earlier. "Yeah, we have a meeting now."

"Who is this girl?" Rey asked him.

"I don't know Rey." Swayam said. "I haven't spoken to her anytime."

"Then tell her that we have a meeting and that she should get out of this rehearsal hall."

Swayam sighed as if he was tired of something but he looked a bit confused.

"Never mind. I'll do it." Rey said and before Swayam could respond, he went straight up to Sharon and asked her to stop dancing because he needed the rehearsal hall for an official meeting.

This time Sharon stopped. It looked as if she was done with her practice. She glanced at Swayam and looked down, a bit embarrassed. And then, sheepishly enough, she made her way out of the rehearsal hall without even apologizing to Rey or Swayam. Swayam looked at her retreating back as it was getting hazier with each passing second.

She seemed to have cast a magical spell on him. He wanted to stop thinking about her. Because he simply liked the way she danced, nothing else.

Hope you all liked this chapter. You should expect many twists and turns. If you liked the update, do hit the like tab and please comment. 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res 😎
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Loved the first meeting SWARON 😳and i pity the poor boy who banged with sharon 😆
Swayam lost in the beauty of sharon and sharon drooling swayam in their first meet but disturbed by rey
Sharon dancing and swayam admiring her again rey acted like kabab main Haddi 😆
Amazing start 👍🏼
Hope u will update next chapter soon
-palak

Edited by swaron_pk - 12 years ago

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