IPK FF - Glass COMPLETE (NEW NOTE page 28 - 04/17)

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Archana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

I loved this story read it all in one go ,it flowed so well ,a good read ,you kept us waiting to know how it turned out .

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arshiyana

@arshiyana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

I even don't know how to start with..

I had read prologue of this story n I found u shifted into the blog n I did't continue to read coz I didn't wanted to read incomplete story thus I had stopped reading...😕

V232... I don't know u personally..not I know everyone personally here but I think I am reading ur work first time..and I am so glad that I got opportunity to read ur story...😃

Lets move to to this FF..

This so beautiful and now I think it became one of my fav of Arshi ff.

When I was reading ur story I felt like I was in the story n everything was happening in front of eyes..

So, what is that I like in ur story..

Oh!! Girl I can' t even listed it's so many things stirred up..

I liked all the character u made. I found all characters are strong, in actual show even writer, director failed us to give such strong character that u've given in this story.

Payal- I am so proud of her n loved her. She acted such adorable sister, loved the way how she stood for her sister...

Mami- yes.. I loved her in the show but every time annoyed while she used to threw tantrum to khushi but in the story u changed her loveable n yes put some sense in her mind

Lavaya-NK- what to say abut them reading their support n care for their beloved ones I wish I had friend like La n cousin like NK.

Anjali-finally I love her. She is one have right to end Shyam life n loved her dialogue in the end..

And finally my hero Arnav---- I know he failed to protect his khushi at the first time but I can understand in which state he was standing that time.. I think besides khushi he was the one who was suffering mental dilemma...

Shyam omg!! I even scared to say his name...🤢

A big applause to u V232 for giving us such great story I really enjoyed it. I had cried, scared and felt happy at the end through the story...

Thank you👏

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Fried Rice Ji ðŸš

@Friedriceji

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

OMG!!

THIS IS SO PAINFUL 😭

EVERYONE DIED EXCEPT KHUSHI!!

SHYAM THE BLOODY MURDERESS

JUST READ THE EXCERPT! AND ITS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

I NEED TO BOOKMARK THIS!!

WILL GIVE YOU REVIEW AFTER READING!!

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LOVE

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glimmernglitter

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sultan_Of_Swing

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Finally finished reading the last chapter. Who would have thought, Anjali would have turned out to be the most twisted of all.Somehow the thought or her killing hr child doesn't sit well me, no matter what the excuses are. A child should never be on the receiving end of the sins committed by its parents.

But who said this was a normal story, or its characters were normal. As I have said earlier, you have shown a great deal of maturity in writing everything from domestic abuse, to Oedipus complex, to psychological issues, to regret and most importantly redemption.

The human psyche never ceases to surprise, kudos to you for writing a story with such a complex setting as the back-bone.

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kristin

@sweet_5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Thanks for the repost!

I had read before up to chapter 12! I felt really sad and depressed as I read this story, it did a number on my emotions but I guess that shows how your such a great writer! I freaked out when shyam showed up at the end! I mean my heart just sank in my stomach. This whole story was etched out nicely! Everyone's POV was done beautifully!

I'm glad we got a happy ending