IPK FF - Glass COMPLETE (NEW NOTE page 28 - 04/17)

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john-angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

started so painfully but you wrapped it up beautifully!

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Shrutee

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Gosh V, this was beautiful! I don't mean the story was beautiful (it was really good it was something else), but what I mean is the way you wrote it was ..wow. I sound so corny sometimes when I appreciate good work but I love when I come across amazing work and cheese just oozes out of my mouth/hands/fingers/you get the point. I can't explain the feeling of your writing and a thesaurus does not help when it comes to finding words for unique. I've told you before and I'm telling you again you will go far with this kind of *waves hands around* stuff. Okay so not an all-nighter, but a good few hours after midnight was all it took to finish "Glass". I really liked your approach towards a "realistic in a different way non-mushy" story here with Arnav and Khushi. I'm a sucker for romance stuff and H and H living happily ever after (only some weeks lol); in this story I'm glad that wasn't what it was aiming towards taking the easy route. No mushy mush stuff.
Okay my cousin just called me I have go help her out I'll be back with non-corny more story related review tomorrow!! But yay I finished reading it!

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srilathas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Wow!!!!!!!

read it in one go...great work dear...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

i hadn't read this before

thanks for re-posting it

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

thank you for reposting this story...very happy to have finished it...keep up the awesome work

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

I'm in a miserable mood.. And when I'm in this mood, I don't want to read awesome mushy love stories.. I want to draw blood.. And then I saw this.. And thought I'd try it out.. So far, I've only read the excerpt.. But I think I found my desired landing... I don't really know the genre of this story, but it has the right beginning... Exactly what I needed.. Maybe I'm insane, but I found traces of humor here.. And the horror factor was just outta this world.. I'm in love with this FF.. I don't know where it's leading to.. But, I'm sure I'll find out soon enough..

First FF u say??? Well, you've got me hooked with just the first few lines.. So I'm positive it'll be fab!!!!

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Chapter 1:

OH MY GOD!!!! Why is she taking that shit from him??? And Shyam, the Psychopath!!! So cruel!! Vee, this is brilliant writing... I wonder how I missed this before.. I have hatred flowing in my bloodstream right now... Hatred and disgust for SHYAM MANOHAR JHA!!!!! This is exactly what I need right now... To read this story and feel blessed.. And not despondent...

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 2:

The hidden workings of a psychopathic mind!!! Who can understand what triggers them, and when??? Outwardly, they are like any normal person, but in their own world, there is nothing remotely normal about them.. Shyam killed his Baba when he was just 4 1/2 yrs old!!! And then committed his second murder at the tender age of 11.. Obsession with his mother, was the reason for his mind's deterioration... But I feel, if these signs r manifested so early in life, it has to be familial...

Loved it Vee... Brilliantly written!!!

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 3:

Oh bless you Vee!!! A ray of hope, finally!!! I can't believe those were only 2 chapters, and my skin already feels raw, because of the incessant vigorous rubbing I have subjected it to... Just to increase the circulation, for my mind and body had gone numb... Too much pain... A father's inability to help his child... A wife's helplessness in seeing her husbands misery, a mother's yearning for her child... Arnav's misery and his only way of dealing with it by being ruthless..

I loved it...

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Denaid

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 4:

Ok, now I'm confused!!! If Shyam had moved out with Anjali and Nani, to another country, then how was Khushi spotted in Dehradhun??? Or am I mixing up the time phase???

I'm happy to see Payal has finally grown a pair of balls.. And is standing up to her in-laws..

And the ever weakling Di... What do I say about her.. I can't stand weak women, cos I feel it's just an excuse they conjure up to hide behind someone else's back and not do anything to fight back..