IPK FF - Glass COMPLETE (NEW NOTE page 28 - 04/17) - Page 5

Thanks a lot for reposting it!
I had read the 1st 13 chapters and had wanted to read the rest. Your writing style is simply beautiful😊

It would be awesome if you could write a redemption story for arnav and Khushi where it takes off after arnav realises khushi's innocence and khushi walks out on d contract marriage...

Do think about it please? I would looove to read an arnav redemption story from you...

Thanks for reposting this wonderful story again & yeah thanks for the pm too. Loved the entire ff, it had me crying like a baby at times but I would still not give up on reading such interesting & different stories. Poor Khushi went through so much of mental & physical abuse but still managed to come out a winner as so did the other characters after going through their own personal hells.
Take a bow missy cos u r a genius, thanks for giving us one of the best stories on the forum

Read your story on the blog. Loved it. Thanks a lot for your mail, Vee. Spent the evening reading it. Loved the strong character you gave to Payal and Anjali . You made the characters more believable. Aakash was envious of Arnav which is easily believable. Manorma stopped insulting Payal when the latter grew a spine. She became a mother to her. Good for her. Loved the fact that Shyam was killed by Anjali. She deserved to kill him.

Thank you so much for posting this story!! I am so glad that I was able to read it!

There were so many things I just loved about this story, I can't even write them all down if I wanted to do.

I just loved the storyline. It was so unique and beautifully written.

Most of all, I just love how you characterized each person in this story. Every one of them had a unique story and perspective and you did such a great job of portraying it. I recognize that it probably takes a lot of work to be able to do that for so many different characters!!

I also loved how you dealt with such a delicate subject nature in a very tasteful manner.

Furthermore, I really liked how you made female characters like Khushi, Anjali and Payal bold in this story. I hated how the show portrayed Anjali and Payal (and sometimes even Khushi) as weak and meek girls, instead of powerful women that they could be. All three of them faced hardships but persevered through it all.

I can honestly go on about all the things I loved about this story, but I'll stop here!! I will be stalking your index pretty soon, as you are a really great writer and I'm sure your other work will be amazing as well.

i am so glad you reposted it😆

wonderful story!!!👏

after reading the 1st chap...i would say i was kind of scared...😆...psychopaths scares the hell out of me...
but at the end the story was beautiful...
i really loved anjali...she is bold nd mature...from my point of view she is the bravest character in the story...
loved payal too...manorama mami really impressed me...😊
i felt awful for khushi...she had been raped nd abused by a psychopath... the way u wrote her mental state was absolutely amazing...though at the end she hadn't become entirely what she used to be..it was amazing how she was able to start a new life leaving behind all the bad memories...

it was a beautiful happy ending...😊

Originally posted by: no_username

wonderful story!!!👏

after reading the 1st chap...i would say i was kind of scared...😆...psychopaths scares the hell out of me...
but at the end the story was beautiful...
i really loved anjali...she is bold nd mature...from my point of view she is the bravest character in the story...
loved payal too...manorama mami really impressed me...😊
i felt awful for khushi...she had been raped nd abused by a psychopath... the way u wrote her mental state was absolutely amazing...though at the end she hadn't become entirely what she used to be..it was amazing how she was able to start a new life leaving behind all the bad memories...

it was a beautiful happy ending...😊

I am editing my comment after heaven knows how many years, because the grown up me is ashamed of the comment the past me posted. I know you are not going to read this probably but if you do, I love your later works. Yes the pieces you wrote after this one. My favourite is the one where you explore Khushi's identitty crisis. That one resonated with me. I could almost feel what Khushi felt. But this comment is supposed to be about this story and still I can't help wondering how the stylised storytelling won me over along with the narration that doesn't let any detail escape . I hope you would keep writing.

since the time i have started reading arhi ff and ss, i have heard about this story quite a lot of time. Bt since u post the half of chapters in private blog, i never tried to read it as i thought i would never get to read the end. Bt u proved me wrong by posting it here and thanks a ton for that dear. I would have cursed myself if i would havent read this story today. Its one of darkest, yet amazing ff i have ever read. Shyam was such a psycho. My heart is still feeling bad for khushi who went through so much. What payal and nk was awesome. Arnav's desperation for khushi was portrayed well. Quite being the apple of everyone's eye, he faced so much hate from his cousins which was quite obvious. Poor manorama. Bt the show stealer of this SS was anjali. I have always admired anjali-arnav's bonding in the show and i always felt bad how anjali's role was ruined by cvs. Thanks a ton for posting this SS dear. THANK U THANK U THANK U SO MUCH :-)

Vee this is one of most fav stories...it cuts like glass..love it