virman new os : we r in love (pt3/last pt on pg5)

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awesome start...great os ..👏👏...really loved it...plz continue soon...do pm me if possible...😊

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Silpa

@iam-in-love

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thank u so much for ur lovely comments guys. Here is the part 2. Read, Enjoy & comment on my os.

VIRMAN OS : WE R IN LOVE
PART 2

Virat stopped his car in front of his house. Maanvi & her parents r staying with virats family.

Maanvi : Virat, is the surprize is here?

Virat : No yaar , We want to change our dreses. U go to ur room & change . I will go to my room.

Maanvi : ok

They both get out from the car and goes their own rooms. Maanvi entered her room & closed the room.

Maanvi : what iam going to wear today?

Then she heard a knock on the door. She opened the door and saw that virat is standing there with a packet. He came inside of the room. He handover the packet to maanvi.

Virat : Maanvi, this is for u

Maanvi : what is this virat?

Virat : this is the dress that ur going to wear today.

Maanvi : thank u virat

They both hugged & virat placed a kiss on her forehead. Then they broked the hug.

Virat : ok, now u go and ready

He goes from there. She opened the packet and saw that a sky blue colour net saree which is covered with full of small silver stones and a backless blouse.

Maanvi : wow, its so beautiful, good selection partner

sometimes later.

Virat is waiting for maanvi in outside of the house. He is wearing a skyblue colour t-shirt with a jacket and black jeans . He looks so hot and dashing . He looked his watch. 7pm.

"partner" he heard maanvis voice from behind. He turned back . He mesmerized by her beauty. she wears the skyblue net saree with the backless blouse. Some bangles in one hand and a beautiful chain in other hand. she wears a small pearl earrings. and her hair is open . Really he looks like an Angel. Virats Angel.
She walks towards Virat. She stopped the walking a couple of feet away from virat.

Maanvi : Virat, am i looking good?

Virat is unable to controll and pulled maanvi into a hug. She felt that his arms encircled around her barewaist. She hide her head in his chest.

Virat : Maanvi, u r looking so sexy...

Maanvi blushed very hard & try to hide her blushed face from him. But virat take maanvis face from his chest and saw that her both cheeks looks like red tomotto. He kissed her both cheeks.

Virat : Can we go now?

Maanvi : ofcourse...

They both get in the car & virat start the car.

Maanvi is really like the journey. She opend the window glasses and looked out. Virat staring at her. Maanvi saw that & blushed again.

Maanvi : Virat, concentrate on ur drive..

Virat smiled at her and concentrate in his drive.

They reached a beautiful place. They both get out from the car. The place is covered with big hills. There is a beautiful river. no one is there except them. Really the place is looks so romantic...

Maanvi : wow virat, its really very beautiful place.

She looked the sky...

Maanvi : look virat, the moon is looking very lovely...and the stars...wow... Thank u somuch partner for taking me in this place. Its really very surprize...

Maanvi is very happy like a child. Virat is just staring at her. This is the matter y he loves her morethan him self.

Maanvi run towards him and hugged him.

Virat : Maanvi , look there...

Maanvi looked the side and saw that there is a table and two chairs. And that place fully civered with candle lights.

Maanvi : wow virat, a candle light dinner,... I love u virat, love u so much...

Virat : love u too maanvi... come...

They goes towards the table and sat on the chair facing eachother.

Maanvi : Virat, u arranged all this things early?

Virat : yes maanvi, for u...

Maanvi : how sweet , thank u so much partner..

Virat serve the dishes for maanvi. After the dinner, finally he gave her the chocolate...

Maanvi : wow virat, its my favourite chocolate...

She started to eat the chocolate like a small kid. Sometimes later she saw that virat is staring at her.

Maanvi : virat, its really teasty... u can eat it...

She gave that to him . Virat saw that some chocolate in maanvis lips corner. He get up from his chair and Maanvi too.

Maanvi : what happend virat? u dont like to eat the chocolate?

Virat : i want to eat. But not from the packet.But from here...

He said and pulled her closer to him by hold her waist and kissed her lips.

Maanvi : virat...

But he didnt listend her. Bcoz this is their first lip to lip kiss. He want to enjoy that. He slowly started to taste her lips. He took her lower lips into his mouth. Maanvi felt a strange vibration running into her body. She was in heven in his kiss. She was feel faint in his kiss. She tightened her arms around his neck to keep herself steady. Slowly she too responded in the kiss with equal love and passion. Virat understand that maanvi is out of her breath, so he let go her from that kiss but he didnt let go her from his arms.

Virat : Maanvi, u know that i eat this chocolate somany times before. But i didnt felt that the chocolate is very teasty like this before. From now this is mine too favourite.

Maanvi blushed & hugged him very tightly. He too hugged her back

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ok guys, here is the pt2. u guys like it?. can i continue? If u guys like it, pls comment on my story and hit the like button. Then i will update next pt very soon

bye...bye...guys
love u all...

ACHU

Edited by iam-in-love - 12 years ago

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floral

@floral

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

hey it is really superb i loved it sooo much and thank for the pm and please do continue soon

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kulsum_virman

@kulsum_virman

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wow that was beautiful update ...😊
story sounds interesting and yu write very well 👍🏼
do continue would like to read further 😊

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hangok

@hangok

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

no need to ask you have to continue it is amazing, love the end😳

thanks for pm

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susmita12

@susmita12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awsome story nd also Awsome update. Plz plz continue soon.

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Niaksharma

@Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Thank u for pm...
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its was awesome nd romentic...
Plz continue...

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kalpana

@jia123sagar

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

amazing update

thanks for pm me

plz cont soon

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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

its awsome n romantic n mesmerizing update dear plzzz plzzz do cont soon n thanks for the pm😊

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shonaten

@shonaten

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

Cute and hot kissi lolzz
nyc continue soon

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