virman new os : we r in love (pt3/last pt on pg5) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww...so sweet n cute update...😳...really nice update...loved it...ā­ļø...looking forward for next update..thank u so much for the pm...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweet Update...~! waiti ng for the next n thnks for the PM..~!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome update
love it
plzzz plzzz update soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Really u should cont
Updt soon 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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<font size="4">Never ignore a person who loves u , cares u & miss u . Bcoz one day u might wake up & realize , u lost the MOON while counting the stars</font> ā¤ļø

Hai guys , iam here with the part3 of my virman os. And this is the last pt of this os. pls guys , read it and comment. I know that iam not a gud writer. But i tried my best for my os. Hope u guys like this part.


<font size="3">PART 3 / LAST PART</font>


After the dinner,

Maanvi : Virat , thank u so much for the dinner. I really enjoued it.

Virat : I too really enjoyed it

He winked at her šŸ˜‰ .

Maanvi : what?

Virat : Dinner & the kiss

Maanvi blushed 😳 very hardly when he talked about their FIRST KISS. she run from there. She goes towards the river and sat in a rock. She placed her legs in the water. Virat came and sat beside her. Maanvi placed her head on his shoulder.

Maanvi : Virat , I LOVE U...

He wrapped his hands around her shoulder and kissed her forehead and said : LOVE U TOO Maanvi...

She take some water in her palm & throw that to Virats face and started to laugh. Virat is Virat . He too did the same thing to Maanvi. They both started to play with the water. At last they both fell down in the water. Both of them wet. Their dresses sticked in their body like the second skin. Maanvis wet saree showrd all the curves of her body. Virat stared maanvi. she understand that. He walked towards her. Maanvi feels little uncomfortable and hugged him very tightly. Virat smiled and hugged her back. One of his hand was in her bare waist. Virat take her face in to his other hands and looked into her eyes. Maanvi couldnt face his looks so long , so she closed her eyes. Virat looked at her innocent face. He moved his hand from her waist to her neck. And kissed her forehead. She opend her eyes. He saw that her body is shivering bcoz of the cold . He picked her in his arms from the water and goes towards the car. He put her down and take a towel from his car. He wiped her face & dried her hair.

After that they both lay down in the grass , looking at the sky. Maanvis head on virats chest & his hand wrapped her body very comfortable.

Maanvi : Virat , wheres goes ur heart? i couldnt hear ur heartbeats.

Virat : oh... that, ... My heart is stolen by a girl who now lay down in my chest.

Maanvi laughed on his comment.

Maanvi : Virat, its really late now , we want to go home...

Virat : yes , u r right...

Both of them get up from the grass. Maanvi walked towards the car. But virat pulled her towards him. He wrapped his hands around her body.

Virat : we can go , but before that i want something from u.

He winked at her. Maanvi understand that what he ment.

Maanvi : no,no. not now... I will kiss u after we reached home.

She tried to get out from his grip.

Virat : ok , u can give me kiss after we reached the house. But iam going to kiss u now.

He placed her hair aside & placed a passionate kiss on her neck. Maanvi just closed her eyes. He moved his lips towards her cheek and all of her face except her lips. He gave a love bite on her neck which make her moned his name with pleasure. Finally he kissed on her juicy lips. He kissed her with all passion & love. she too responed with the same passion. Virat released her from that kiss , when he felt that they needed air.

Maanvi : virat , can we go now?

She didnt looked his face bcoz she is blushing very badly. Virat understand that & hugged her by side. And the walked towards the car.

They both reached the home & walked towards their own rooms. Virat too came maanvis room.

Maanvi : Virat , what r u doing in my room?

Virat : hey, u forget that u told me that u gave me the kiss after we reached the home.

Maanvi : virat...

Virat : what?

Maanvi : hmmm... nothing...

Virat hugged her & she placed a sweet kiss on his cheek. He lay down her in the bed and covered her body with the bedsheet. And he kissed her on her forehead. Then goes to his room .

They both slept in their own respective room with the beautiful thoughts of their beautiful candle light dinner & their first kiss


&&&&&&&&&&&THE END&&&&&&&&&



Hows this guys? u guys like it. Pls comment & hit the like button tooo...

love
Achu ā¤ļø


Edited by iam-in-love - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Superb one..
Like it...
They r adorable...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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super cute. ..lvd it. thnx fo d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi.. Achu.. That was a very sweet, cute romantic n very lvly os yar.. How cute both r..? Their cndl lit dinr, the first kiss, their child like water game.. N all the lv n care that virat gave to manvi is beyond perfection n manvi too return that to virat equally. Such a sweet or without rona dhona, without any jealosy part n without any problme.. I lv it achu.. Thanx for the pm yar.. N yes keep updating these kind of beautiful n cute os.. Waiting for ur new works.. Lv u achu from me aachu. Bay..Take care
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
hai achu nice update , loved this cute update and
my pet name is also achu yaar
loved this virman ,nice work šŸ‘šŸ¼
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