virman new os : we r in love (pt3/last pt on pg5)

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Hai guys, its a short story about our VIRMAN. pls read it and tell me that how is it?

WE R IN LOVE

It is maanvis first day of her new college. She is come from hrishikesh to chandhighad bcoz her father got a transpher to here.
Maanvi goes to her new classroom.

Maanvi : excuesme sir, can i come in?

sir : ofcourse, r u miss.maanvi from hrishikesh?

Maanvi : yes sir

Sir : students, listen... This is Maanvi... our new admission. Maanvi, there is ur seat. go & sit

Maanvi : thank u sir

She goes to her seat and sit there.

"Hey, my name is priya" said the girl, who sat next to her .

Maanvi : hai

Priya : Friends?

Maanvi : ofcourse...

They shared a shakehand.

Priya : maanvi, this is Anaamika, this is Maya and this is Tanya

They all gave her a shakehand.

Afternoon
Maanvi and her friends sitting in the garden. Thats time they heard that some one playing a guitar.

Priya : oh, god... that was he...

Maanvi : who?

Maanvi looked that side. But he cant see the persons face. Bcoz who played the guitar, he is in middile of a small crowd.

Priya : u dont know him? He is the most handsome, hot, dashing, sexy person in this collage. Virat. Virat Singh Vadera. He is our seniour and the dream boy of the every girl in this college. U r new here , thats y u dont know about him.

Maanvi : is he have any girl friend?

Priya : ofcourse

Maanvi : who?

Priya : We dont know about her yaar... The last valentines day a girl said him to that she loved him in front of a crowd. He just smiled and said her that " hey, i like u but i dont love u. Bcoz iam in love already. I love my childhood frnd. she is my fiance. I love her very much. And she love me too. We cant live without eachother. Iam sorry if i disappointed u" , then he left the place...

Anaamika : really how sweet he is...

Maya : hey guys, come , we can go and enjoy his music...

Tanya : comeon guys...

The 5 of them go to that side and saw that virat sing a beautiful song with playing his guitar. He wearing a light green colour shirt and black jeans.He looks very stunning. All girls r staring him. including maanvi.

Priya : maanvi, what happend?

Maanvi : nothing.

Priya : who is the lucky girl that he loved? Really he is very lucky to have a partner like him. ok guys, come'on, our class is going to start...

All of them goes to their classroom.

Evening, after the class...
All students walking towards the collage gate. Maanvi and her friends too walking. Thats time a BLACK BMW car stopped in front of them.

Priya : hey, its Virats car...

They saw that virat comes from the car & walk towards them.

Anaamika : hey, he came towards us. oh,god...oh,god... iam feeling faint...

Maya : but y he came towards us?

Priya : who knows?

All the students of the college is watching this scence...

Virat came & stand in front of the 5 girls.

Virat : hey, my dear girl, i promise u that i must pick u in this morning and gave u a surprize. Anyway how is ur first day in this new collage?

Everyone shocked to hear him except maanvi. She just smiled and came towards him and gave him a hug. He hugged her back.
Other girls mouth opend in a 'O' shape. After sometimes , they broke their hug. Maanvi turned towards her friends.

Maanvi : guys, close ur mouth...or flies must go inside

Priya : maanvi, its means u r his...

Virat : yes, u r right... she is my love, my life, my everything...maanvi... soon going to be mrs.maanvi virat vadera...
come'on maanvi, the surprizing is waiting for u...

Maanvi : yes guy, we r in love . ok... bye guys... see u tomorrow...

They both get in the car and goes from there leaving a shocked crowd behind them.

Anaamika : oh god, am i dreaming?

Thats time priya pinched anaamikas hand very hard.

Anaamika : ouchhh... what r u doing?

Priya : iam just pinch u

Anaamika : Thats means i am not dreaming.

Maya : wow... its really a surprize...
Really they look like a petfect couples...

Priya : yes , made for each other...


here it is guys, u guys like it ? then i'll update next pt. if u dont like this , let me know that. i'll nevet continue...
if u like it pls comment and hit like button

bye...guys...
take care...

PART 2
PART 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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i just loved ur update do continue soon and will u pm me😊😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏
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It is really vry good u should cnt
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wow awsome do cont plzzz👍🏼
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I liked it... pls post next part n PM me...
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Awsum work ...
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nice work
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plz continue soon waiting for virat's surprise😆
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