virman ss:milna hi ta.. part 27 page 52(30 march) - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
awesome update...
plzzz plzzz update it quick...
waiting for next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Superbly superb...
Waiting for next.. 😃😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 11

After 1 year manvi's and virat's life change terribly..

After that day when manvi left virat's house..she took an apartment ther only in Mumbai but didn't searched by virat or anyother manvu left her job of fashion designer of his show she got job of finance manager in a company…but the ques rises has she forget virt n hr feelings??? Noo a big noo..she still love virt from dept of her heart n too no what happen to her in delhi when she left delhi..she didn't tell this to anyone …kept herself secretive from all join a fine job that can fulfill her need she never miss virat's show..watch it daily ..but realizing something is bothering him..but don't know y..she no its she go there n ask him she will not been able to control her feelings nw that is becoming strong…

On the other hand virat is in terrible condition…he equally brok down from the day manvi left after a week or two kali also brok up with her…she cant marry him for his carrier she told him to brok up n live their life separately…but want to stop her but he himself know he have no rite to stop her coz he love manvi…but after manvi left..virat use to drink day n nyt ….he lock himself for days n nyts in the same room drinking alchohal like an animal…he come out of his room give shoot for a wek n one day..n went back in his chamber as if no one is there…

Vanshika was worried about his son..she thinks kali whom he loves like hell…had left him..thats y he isbroken..she cant see him like this its being 1 year virat being an animal who rinks day n nyt without any break…but now she want him to get rid of these drink n back his ols life back…he give him kasam to come with her..virat cnt do anything went with her to hospital…

on the other hand..manvi was feeling restless..she saw in news about virat..that he is not well will not shoot for 2 days… she want to meet him …but how can she after one year..she thought..he still remember me even after getting so much fans….but her heart is saying her to go n meet him once.but brain said he must hv totally forget her..coz he have more n more fans nw…then she decided to listen to her heart n go n meet him once…may b on Sunday he will b free n she is also free….

Next day

Manvi was looking for a taxi n ws going to her regular office for work..when a car stop in front of her..it was viren…

vi-manvi…tum yaha(confused n shok to her )

m-viren sir…

viren come out of his car

vi-manvi hmne tumhe kaha kaha nhi dhnda…kaha chli gaitit tum

m-viren sir..plss mi apne office jari hoo….

vi-mujhe tumse bt krni h ..tumhare jane k bad pta b h kya kya hua h hmari zndagi specially virat ki zindagi mein

manvi got shoked n confued-mtlb

v-sit in car ryt nw…

viren make her sit in car n told her about virat each n evry thing

v-virat tumhare jane k bad usne tumhe bht dhnda bht..rat din vo sadko p..airport ,railway station ghumta rahta ta…hme nhi pta vo itna restless q ta..mgr manvi un 2 din mi..tum virat k dil mi aisi jaga bna liti jo hum kbhi nhi bna ae..virat tumhe k bht achha dost man chukka ta..manvi jb use ek dost ki jarort ti q chli gait um…virat ka kali k sath brkup ho gya..vo tut gya manvi ek saal mi apne use rarely hi uske kamre se bahar dekha h tu drink mi kho gya manvi..plss tum hi hoo jo use wapas la skti hoo..use sirf tum hahiy manvi pta nhi q..rat din tumhe pukarta rahta h ..us pgl ko nhi pta vo tumhare liy feel krta h manvi..plss agr ye sch h ….to plsss use wapas le ao…

m-virat sir mere liy..(tears come in her eyes)…

v-haa uski akho mi likha h manvi sb ko pta h ..sirf use nhi pta hoga jb tum ti uske pass..lekin jb hme or use ye ehsas hua tum ja chuki ti manvi..pls plss virat ko wapas le ao..hmara virat kahi kho gya h manvi plss

m-mujhe virat sir milna h abi….(pleading look)

viren smiled n nooded yes…..its being..aftrnnon when viren and manvi reach virat's hoe..she stop her feet when viren hold her sholder in assurance n rang the bell…

va come out..her eyes was red as if she was crying from days…the fresh tears come in her eyes when she saw manvi..she hug her tightly

va-manvi..tum agai kaha chli gaiti….

m-m sory anty…

va-andr aoo..andr cls leti hoo tumhari…

va took her in….make her sit n sit next to her…

va-beta bina btae chli gai ek br mhmare bare mere bare..or vi…(she stop at virat's word..she think manvi don't know about his feeling for her)

m-virat sirk bare mi(she continued her sentence)

va- haa vo..

when a shout come from upstairs…

?-plsss plsss come back I cant live without u….

m-ye to..

va-virat ki awaj h …

m-mujhe unse milna h

va-mgr

m-plss

viren nodded va n she nodded manvi…

manvi in no time rush upstairs….open his room she was shoked seeing his room….his room was all shatterd..sme drink bottles were broke..some lying sealed all the room is filled with broken glasses bedsheet on floor..pillows shaterd all around she look for virat..she was siiting in corner having bottle in his hand tears in his eys….as if not shaved for months…his hair all messy..tears strted flowing his eyes…va come there…..touch her sholder nodded not to cry…

m-ap kisi servant ko bhej diye..rom ki safai k liy…

va-virat use safai nhi krne dega…

m-ap bhejiye

va nodded n went…tarun the servant came

t-apne bukaya

m-room saf kr do..

manvi still standing at entrance of door…..tarun got scared he look at her n then virat who is lost..

t-mam magr…

m-maine kaha na

tarun entr the room n strted picking broken glasses….virat heard the sound..n look at him

v-how dare it(shout on him)..kisne kaha tums eyaha ane k liy

tarun got scared…

m-maine..

virat look to her direction ..n was lost in her…

v-manvi(tears flowing his eyes n manvi's eyes too)

manvi nodded yes/….

Manvi rush n hug him tightly…he hug her back

v-kaha chli gai tum..q chli gai ti mujhe chhod..ek br meri bt to suni hoti manvi….

m-m sory…

two souls were crying badly in each other embrace..vanshika standing on door looking at them n went to give them some space….

They brok the hug

v-ab to nhi jaogi na….(innocently ask)

manvi nodded no…

they again hug tightly …..when tarun ask virat for bottle..which is in his hand

t-virat baba..bottle dedijiye…

they brok the hug

v-q nhi donga mi bottlte ja tum yaha se…

virat hide his bottle ….n saw tarun having his other bottle in a bag..virat get up n took his back

v-get out..jao yaha se..meri bottlenhi lejane donga

manvi was shoked looking at this look at tarun to w8

m-ruko tarun…(to virat)-meri bat b nhi manoge…bottles dedo plss…

v-nhi plsss…

m-mi hona tumhare pass.plss dedo…

virat leav the botthel n hug her tightly-plss help manvi…I want to leav all this..

manvi hig him tightly-I will help u ….

Single tarun to take everything away….tarun eyes too teary seeing virat like this….n nodded ok..

Tarun left n close the door…

Manvi make virat sit on bed….n sit on floor looking at him…..

v-aise kya dekh ri hoo(innocently)

m-yahi ki..kya ache khase inssan ki band baja di tumne…sari fans dar k bhag jaengi..fir kaun rkega voting tumhare liy…

virat smil at her sentence…..manvi smile back..

precap-manvi help virat to get rid of his drink she always be there in his embrace day n nyt….to help him..which not for a second let her g away form her….

I will update it soon….i noo too emotional but don't beat me…

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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
i just love it the way u writte ur story i really love the bit were ...actually i loved all virman parts if u can will uu plez plez update now plez im fasting so plez help
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Yesss i am the first...

Its awesome it just love it...
Too good..

Viren and Vanshika are soo understanding...

Love Tarun alsooo...

Finally Virat will stop drinking... Love how Manvi make him understand and he listen to her...

Pleasee continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Oepppsss

I mean the 2nd...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
awesome update dramatic yet interesting twist 👏
bth of thems life is sooo changed bth just soo list incomplete souls ... specially virat he to almost destroyed himself in guilt and loneliness...
the virman reunion OMG tht was soo emotional yet awesome loved the virman hug 😃
this part was really tooo emotional ...
update next part sooon am loving it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
hey that was an awesome update

loved it to the core

poor virat he started drinking after manvi left him and broke up with kali too

feeling very bad for him

the last part was very touchy and it reminds me movie Aashiqui2 where rahul jaikar asked arohi to help him to come out from his dilema

plz update soon and do try to pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow super daasu update total paisa wasool..👏😛
do continue ur story soon... waiting for u r update😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
nice update both meet at last each other
now he will again become nice prs
update soon

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