virman ss:milna hi ta.. part 27 page 52(30 march) - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
kya halath ho gayi hai bechare virat ki I liked the way manvi can control him n nw that shes back im sure he will be ok loved the precap- cnt wait for next part so plz continue quick😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
realy mind blowing..
Loved it
plz cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
superb update
loved it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Part 12(a)

Guyzz guyzz guyzz relax m updaqting don't through chapples for being late n plsss a request don't tell me to send pm I really cant guyzz ..i update thar is a big thing lol'.now njoy the update

Virat n manvi both lost in each others eyes'manvi brok the hug n look down feeling guity for his condition'

Virat cupid her face-kya hua'.

m-m sory'meri waja se ap'

v-hey plsss.abi kuch mt kaho'.abi meri bari h bolne ki'kaha chli gai t=um mujhe chhod..pta h mujhep kya biti h ..tumhare jane k bad'plsss ab kbi mt jana

manvi nooded nooo..n hug him-m sory mi ab kahi nhi jaogi ek br jake apna fav actor kho dia maine(playing prank to make im smile)

virat brok the hug-sirf actor'

m-or ek caretaker b

virat smile vanshika seeing this from outside was happy to se his son smiling aftr 1year'n went out

m-achha chlo pehle apni halat thk kro..

v-q thk to mi(confused)

m-hk hoo'

manvi make him stnd nar the mirror-dekho kya halat bna li apne..chli..jake shower leke ao or shk bnak ao..

virat look at her-nhi mi nhi jaogi..tum firse chli gai to'

m(lost in his eys-nhi jaogi'

v-pkka'

manvi nodded hmm-

v-okk tum yaha se jana mt mi 2 mint gya or 10 mint mi aya okk'

manvi smile n nodded ok'

virat took his towel n rush to washroom'.when tarun nok the door'

t-manvi madam khana laya hoo'apke liy'

m-mere liy'q virat sir nhi khaenge'

v-(look down ) aj kl virat baba khana kahte hi kb h 'voto bs..

manvi got it..-vo ab khaenge unke liy b ek plate lao..ya tum is kamre ki ache se dusting..bedhseet bdl do..n frsh flower roses ya lilies lake vase mi lga so n room frshner dal dena okk'.mi unke kuch leke ati ho

tarun nodded n strt doing work.manvi went to kitchen'prepare for him green salad..his fav pasta'n orange juice'parathas'.vanshika saw her making think

va-are manvi tum yaha kya kr ri hoo..mujhe bol dia hota ya tarun ko

m-nhi anti ..tarun ko maine virst sir ka karma hk krne ko kaha h ''.

Sudden ly virat shout from his room-maaanviii..maaanvi''

Virat got his voice-ye to virat sir'

Virat went out from washroom saw no where in his room tarun also went to take frsh flowers'

Virat rush downstairs looking here n there..manvi n vanshika too rush outside fro kitchen'virat saw manvi..n quickly take her in his embrace..-kaha chli git tit um..mujhe lga tum firse chli gai'

Virat brok the hug manvi look at va n then look down..va smie n went to kitchen'

v-bolo naa kaha tit um'

m-are baba mi apke liy khana lene gai ti..

v-q ghr naukar kya mar gaye h '

m-v irat sir plsss..gussa nhi'ho gya mi bs aa hi ri ti'dekho maine kya bnaya..mi abi leke ati hoo..

v-mi b chliga'

m-ap kitchen mi'

v-q nhi askta(cute face)

manvi smile shok her hnad no-ap room mi jao mi wahi ari hoo

v-pkka(worried)

m-ha baba pkkkaaa

virat went to his room..manvi went to kitchen va gave her plate of foos manvi went to virat's room'virat was restless w8ing for her'manvi came to his room saw him roaming here n there she shok her head..keept the plate on bed

m-ao jaldi khana khao..

v(sad)mujhe nhi khana

m-q..idhar chup chap se mere smane ye anutanki nhi chlegi

virat look at her ordering her he smile n sit on bed..manvi sit beside him..n smile

m-khao'

virat look at her then food'virat forwards his hand to take food his hand was stammering.manvi saw this v irat took a bit in his hadn stilllt5his hand was moving manvi hold his hand..n look at him ..virat came to no y she did it'.manvi took bitr from his hand hold his hand tightly from her ither hand n feed him..virat smile n ate him'manvi smile observing movement in his hand'''

manvi make him eat all his food'.n tell tarun to keep the plate in kitchn back'.as virat don't want her to go'..

m-ab utho'

v(confused) q

m-maine kaha na utho'.

Virat smile n stnd up-ab'

m-chlo mere sath'.

v-kaha'.

m-shooting bhool gaye ki ap actor or apki shooting chl ri h '

v-nhi mujhe nhi jana'

m-q nhi jana ..jana padega'.maine viren sir se bt kiti'.apki shooting ka time hone wala h chli ab'

virat look at her controlling him since she came'.she always try him to forget the bad habbit he had..while giving him angry look..while making him take bath..while eating him..n now shooting of he work he will forgt it defiantly'

both virman went to set for shooting'.

Guyzz I need to rush that's it for today..n no precap

Edited by sakshivirmanian - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
nice update he really scare to loose her again
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
PLZZZ CONTINUE SOOON
LOVED THE UPDATE...
MIND BLOWING
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
the update was really beautiful and cute 😃
manvi ordering virat and he following her orders was too cute then seeing that she is missing from his room he got really scared and screamed for her hugged her tightly 😃
then manvi doing soo much for virat trying her best to get the old virat back his room set food his fav food for him making him eat then shooting 😃
update next part soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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suc a beautiful updatevirats life depends on manvi now- its so cute the way he wants her there for everything loved the update n the banner is also very nice continue quick plz 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69

Part 12(b)

They move out of house…she told virat he wil not drive ..driver will drive viat first agrue but manvi give him angry look he nooded ok he will not drive..manvi n virat sitting in car strted thei destination…here aftrsometime…

v-driver car roko..

manvi look here n there but set was not there…

m-virat sir set to aya nhi…

v-haa vo mujhe kuch kam h yaha…

manvi look outside…there is beer stole on road side…..manvi look at virat n hold his hand n nodded noo..virat look at her…pleaded—plsss…

manvi look at his pleaded eyes who is pleading her to plss let him go….manvi eyes got filled he found herself guity for his this condiotns..she try to hide her tears n look opposite site n leav hi hand..manvi look at her changing xpression…virat open the car door…n move out manvi listen the sound of opeing the door but didn't turn close her eyes ttightly tears flow from her eyes to cheeks…..

here virat went to stol n buy on beer bottle…n went to car….he look at manvi ooking down n tears r still flowing from her eyes…he curse himself for these tears….he keep the bottle in his left side n turn towards manvi..cupid her face….clear her tearsv

v-m sory….meri waja se tumhari akho mi asu ate h na…..plss mt ro plss….

m-mi rona chhod dungi to kya ap pina bnd kr doge(incoocent n pleading voice)

virat look at her ..n was unanswerable to her….he don't know what to ans…he can mak fake promises

he look down-driver gadi chalao…

manvi look at him n want to no the ans….virat open the window n throw th bottle out….manvi smile at his action virat look at her

m-thnk you…

virat nodded noo n hug her tightly..manvi knew this time he need her support bdly…if he has buyed a bottle he need that…but he has thrown it..now it though for him to control his craving she hug him triple tight from him rub his back smoothly…

m-sb thk ho jaega..mi ho na…..

v-plsss……merese ye sb nhi hota…

m-hoga mi help krogi….

Virat n manvi hugging each other more tightly…manvi hugged him so that his craving will b gone….he realize aftersometime…his grip loosen she too brok the hug n cupid his face

M-ap thk hoo ab…

Virat nodded yes..-thnk you….

m-aj k bad thnk you bola to kbi bt nhi krogi…

manvi turn to opposite side folded her arms n show fake angr..virat got worried pull her with jerk n hig her more tightly-pkkkaa kbi bologi plss kbi aisa dubara mt kahna…mi nhi rah paoga…

m(curse herself to say like this)-are baba mi mjk kr riti…

they brok the hug… both laugh at each other….

m-virat sir look at u …kya hal bna lia.ufff…ap mere fav hero hua krte the..ab ….(giving him look)

v(confused) ab kya..ab nhi hoo…

m-niii(manvi shout….n run out as driver stop the car they r on set…)

v-manvii,,,…

virat to run behind her---manvi ki bachi abi btata hoo,,

virat hasing manviii..manvi laughing n running here n there ..so that virat should not catch her…v

v-manvi ruk jao verna achha nhi hoga….kya kaha tumne mi nhi hiii

manvi teasing him showing him her tongue n thumb---nooo

again strted running..evryone on set got shoked looking at virat laughing n running here n there…

viren ,jeevika n Tanya….looking at them n found their frnd virat bac after so many days…

virat signl manvi-thnk you…

m(singal)-its okk…

virat n manvi still chasing each other when manvi strted breathing heavily n sit on sofa—times plsss….

Virat too sit with her…both breath heavily…..

vi-kya bat h virat bda khush lg rha..or aj hme ye tom n jeery q dekhne ko mila..h

v-vooo ..ye na…

m-ach acha ach acha sory sory sory..aj k bd nhi kahogi(controlling her laughting)

v-ppka

m-pkka walaa pkaaa

all smile at virat n manvi..

pproducer-virat jake ready ho jao shoot ki taiari krte h ….

v-ya sure….(to manvi mi abi ata hoo…

manvi nooded okkk

virat left j,vi,, n t come n sit with manvi

vi-manvi thnk you soo much…tum nhi jnati hum ye sb kitne time se miss kr re the

j-sch mi manvi ..hmara virat kahi kho gya ta..as if tum use wapas le ai…

manvi smile-aisa kuch nhi h ..unhe bs thoda pyar chhaiy ta..ye chhaiy ta ,,ki haa koi hai unke sath…

vi-or kisi ka nhi tumahara pyar or sath chaiy ta….mi use dekh k ata hooo…

all nodded

t-huh….aisaq to koi b krta ta…

j-to tumne q nhi Tanya..1 saal se3…ark r deti to manvi yaha nhi hoti

manvi smile n j too

Tanya tap her feet n left…

Precap-

v-m sory manvi mgr….mi or nhi sehn kr skta…

virat pick the bottle of beer open it……

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW >>>>>YIPPEE
i m first to comment..😊


awsmeee update...loved it...
this tanya ...i hate her...
percap makes me worried 4 viru...
i feel bad...i wish manu never went away from viru...
i wishh she changes viru's habit ...
plzzz continue soonn...
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Edited by virumanu - 12 years ago

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