virman ss:milna hi ta.. part 27 page 52(30 march)

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guyzz a topic sutk in my mind..so i decided to write a story on it
intoduction

there is gal bubbly from nature njoy her life to te fullest..njoy each n evry secnd of her life...she is non other than manvi...
she liv with her mom,dad and a brother...she love a guy...so much and tat guyz too love her...they both njoy ther love...this is a kind of collage love...his name is hemant...
some of the clg guyz and girls r jealous of them but that dosnt matter to them...they family members dont no about their relationship..they decided to tell them after they complte their study...
m-hemant chlo jaldi agr kisi teacher ne dekh lia to gadbad ho jaegi...bolegi class mi q nhi goo lets gooo...
h-ya ya lets go baby

on the othetr hand ..our handsome hunk..on whom lots of girls drolls over..he is an actor...actor in a daily soap...he is non other than viraaattt...
he too love a girl her name is kali...
there parents no about their relaionship...virat take out time from his shoot foa kali..
virat called kali
v-m coming to pick u up okk..
k-kk sweet heart




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intro pag 1
part 1 page 2
part 2,3,4 part 2
part 5,6 page 3
part 7 page 4
part 8 page 6
part 9 page 8
part 10 page 9
part 11 part 10
part 12(a) page 12
part 12(b) page 13
part 13 page 14
part 14 page 17
part 15 page 18
part 16 page 21
part 17 page 23
part 18 page 25
part 19 page 27
part 20 page 31
part 21 n note on page 34
part 22 page 37
part 23 page 41
part 24 page 43
part 25(A) page 45
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its awesome plz continue it
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**********part 1********
the two couples were living happily their lifes..but somehow...they r not attched from heart to each other..they think as if something is missing in them
manvi side
manvi n hemant sitting in a cafe..
m-hemant tumhe kal ka show dekha...virat kitna cute lg rha ta...
h-kbhi mujhe cute bola h ..roj virat ki mala japti rahti hooo...
m-ohh hoo..dont b jealous..mi sirf uski fan hoo bht badi..or is br to socha h use gift b bheju...
h-q rishedar h tumhara jo gift bhejogi...
m-come yr..tum virat ka naam sunte hi...aise q behav krne lgte hoo
h-what behv yr...jb se virat virat/...tumahra bf mi hoo na ki virat...
m-come on..ab bf ki tb kahaa se agai..mi bs gift ki hi to kah riti
h-leav tum gift bhejo ya kuch b i dont care...hmesha virat virat virat..age to sb mujhe pgl kahneg...ki iski gf isse jyada kisi or ko bhav deti h
hemant is angr left from ther...
m-kya manvi...iske samne bolna jarori ta na ho gya na naraj..
she make face n too left the place
on the other side...
virat called kali
v-hey hi sweatheart..ek problm agai...
k-kaisi problm..m sure..koi segment ya...shoot nikal aya hoga...
v-haa.yr..u no its my b'day or fans se kuch chupa nhi h ...to gift seg roj hoti h yr...
k-leav it virat..now a days u dont hv time for me..i no..tum ek actr hoo mgr..plsss...apni personal life p b to dhyan do...
kali cut the cal...
v-helo.h...
v-yr...jaldi se jana hoga..seg jaldi khtm krta hoo...
virat strts his segment...
on the other hand manvi calling hemant ..
m-hemant plss fon mt rkhna plss...
h-bolo...
m-look i no...ki tum q naraj hoo i promise aj k bad..no virat ka name n no gofts pkka ..
h-pkka na...
m-haa baba pkka...
h-now m happy
m to herself-ek gift bhej deti to iska kya bigta ...to h-m also happy(but eventually she is not she want to gift virat something) achha ab btao..yr last year h hmara clg ka..iske bad agr mi kahi or chli gai to kya hoga..plss come to my parents plss..
h(upset)-yr i no..but mi kaise agr gdbd ho gai to...
m-okk mi bt krti hoo tum aoge na...
h-kb
m-kl..
h-kl yr mujhe kam h kuch...
m-kya kam h ..
h-h kuch...
m-come on bta do...
h-mujhe kuch kam h abhi bad mi bye
hmant cut the cal...look a deep breath
m-kya hemant mujhse kuch chupa rh h ...

on the other hand
virat fix date with kali..to cheer her up
k-virat tumhe pta h mujhe kaise manna h ...tum bht bure hoo...
v-i noo..ab isme kya kr skte h
both laugh
both hv foos with each other...
kali get a cl n xcuse herseld ..n left
v-aisa kiska cl ta jo..mere samne nhi kr skti ti..
guyzzz i'll continue it latr

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Posted: 12 years ago
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this very interesting
Sumthng fishy with hemant and kali

Update soon
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************part 2**************


manvi many time tried to make out ..what happen t hemant y is he ignorning her ...but no ans found..one day she went to mall...for shooping
m-ria come on...jaldi shoping..,.,mujhe hemant se milne jana h ...
r-ya ya ..u n ur hemant..waise kb decid kia ...uncle anty ko btane ka...
m-abhi nhi yr time ane par tjhe kud pta chl jaega...
r-hmmm
they both had done their shopping...n drive towards their hous...
n b/w manvi saw hemant with a girl in car...it was red light ...
manvi saw him(mind)-nhi nhi hemant nhi ho skta must b someoneelese...
whem hemant turn manvi saw n shoked hemnat was in car with some other girl
m-ria..tu ghr ja mi yahis se chli jaogi...
r-are mujhe bta hemant kaha ara h mi chhod deti hoo...
m-nhi mi chli jaogi...
manvi pick her packagesbefore ria stop her she moved towards an auto who is behind hemant's car...
m-bhaia..jaha vo cA JAEGI NA WAHA CHLNA ...(MIND)ohh god pls pls pls pls...pls kuchh glt mt krna...m ready to be wrong but plss kuch glt mt plsss...
the green signal shown...
m-bhaia chlo...
they were driving ..manvi's auto was still behind hemant car...in front of a hotel hemant's cat stop..manvi hide her face...hemant n girl hand in hand move inside the hotel..manvi pay the driver of auto n rush behind them..her fingers were crossed...hemant was talkin to manager took keys n move towards the lifet...
manvi move towards manager n ask about him
m-vo logkaun room mi gaye h
r-mama we cant tel...unhone stictly mana kia h ...
m-mgr miu kah rahi hoo mujhe btaooo...
manvi shown her card of father to him..he was a gr8 businessmen
r-mam room no..102
m-mujhe uske samne wale room ki keys chahiy abhi
r give her the gives...she move towards the keyys...
she was behing hemant...a girl n hemant move inside the room...she was standing drumstuck...
m-no..this cant happen...no
manvi go in room which he ask from r...aftr 2 hours..she heard a sound of opening the door...she look from whole hemant n girl is coming out..hemant brushing his hair with his hand...girls was blushing hard
manvi hit the wall..n was super shoked tears falling from her eyes...she alled hemant
m-hemant kaha hoo...
h-manvi mi dad k sath kahi bahar aya hoo i cant come to meet u..sory baby bye tc...
hemant hung th fon..manvi move towards this room 102...n saw the bedshhet was all messed up...
manvi was standing heart brokn...n ove out of the hotell

one side the heart is broken into pieces..n other side...virat n kali decided to get agganged to each other...
v-kali..lets get engaged...
k-virat waooo..u took my words m soo happy..
they both hug each other...
but kali was not happy from inside


*************part 3*********
kali brok the hug
k-but u no na m madel..mujhe abhi jana hoga us...mjhe contact mila h
v-wht do u mean...i wanna strt life with u ..n u saying ki
k-baby...i also want..but plss undrstand sirf 1 sal ki bt h uske tu engagement kya mi sidha shadi krogi
v-what is this
k-plss
v-okk i'll w8...tumhari pakin ho gai
k-haa.bs ho gai...
v-ok i'll drop u in airport
k-waoo tats nice...
both smile n hug..but virat is lil upset

on the other hand..
manvi's heart is broken into pieces...she cant go home coz...if her parents come to no of her conditon..they will be tensed...even cant cry in front of them...
m-mi aise ghr kaise jao..mi nhi ja skti...papa mumy pareshan ho jaenge...
manvi clear her tears..a idea stuck in her mind...
m-haa aj to vo log gaye hue bahar h...lets go manvi...u cant tense them
manvi goto her house..unlock the door...saw no one was there...
tears contoniusly falling from her eyes...all the flashbacks..with hemant was romaing in her mind...
manvi pack her stucks..took all the necessary thing..he pocket money,pasport,evrything tat she need...he saw..her family photo on a side table-m sory mumma papa...i cant troublr u ..pls forgive me...she put her fon on that table n pic up the foto n walk out admiring the whole house...-miss u housy...
she left the house...
m-manvi ghr to chhod dia..ab jaegi kaha..haa mi yaha se door chali jaogi..mumbai...m coming...coz agr yaha rahi to papa dhnd hi lenge..or meri halat k bare mi b pta chl jaega...let goo manvi..now u cant go back...
he took taxi n reach airtpot..she took the flight...
(guyzz let me clear this to u manvi doing job...tats y she had money with her..;)..}

recptioanlist-mam..apko kaha ki flight chahiy
m(lost in thoughts)-didnt respose
r-xcuse me mam
manvi come out of her terrance-h...
r-apko kaha ki flight chahiy
m-mum..mum..mumbai...
r-ok
manvi collect the documet
r-mam apki flight 2 ghnte bd h
m-2 ghnte..pehle ki flight nhi h mujhe urgent jana h ...
r-no abhi to 10 mint mi flight nikl ri h vo ful h ..m sory
m-but
r-can u plss get a side mam...there long line aftr u...
m-ya...ab mi kya kro..2 ghnte mi nhi rah skti 2 ghnte yaha...kya kro...agr koi agya or usne mujhe dekh lia..nhi jane denge mujhe...

after 2 hours
v-kali..apna dhyan rkhna..u no i love u ..
k-i love u abby..thnx understanding...
v-its okkk...
k-okk meri flight ka time

thy both hug each other virat about to leav when he sense something strange near her...he turn but foung no one...manvi and virt sholder crash with each other manvi;'s duppata come on virt's fac...virat was about to touch the duppata n remove it from his face..when imidiately manvy pull the duppata n run while saying sory...
no one saw each others face
virat trun to see her..but she already left
virat realise some strange air touching him...he smil n also left




******************************part 4*************
virat back in his senses..when his frnd cl came ...
v-h..ha ha ara hoo..director sahab se kah m ready for the shoot...chl bye

virat move towards his cr...he is not feeling good coz kali alsi went...he went to this shoting set...
on the othrhand...
m-manvi tu yaha aa to gai h ..mgr jaegi kha...itni rtko...yaha rent p flat kise dhndegi...
tears rolling from her eyes n moving on the empty road...
it was around 12 at night...manvi was still roming on road waiting for the sun to rise...
m-bhagwanji..apni mere sath jo b kia h ..uske bd to mujhe pse bt b nhi krni chhaiy...mgr meri ek bt man skt ho gya...sj ka sunrise thodaa jaldi kr do..taki mi apni life mi concetrat kro...
manvi was stiing on the side path of the road...thinking of hemant n his dhoka...that he gave her..she strted cring tears strted falling from her eyes...
then some bad boys...in jeep was crossing her n saw her sitting alone..manvi saw them but ignorw..she knew they r not good people...she strted walking..guyzz get down from car n strted following her...manvi increased her speed n the bad guyzz too
bg1-kaha jari h meri jaa.aja hmare pass...
tears strted ozing from her eyes..she strting running as fast as she can...guyzz strted running behind her...
bg-eee ruk...
mnavi strted running n dump in a car..but the driverput the break like jerk...
manvi saw the car n then the guyzz...
she strted tapping the window of the cr-plaace...help mee..plsss...
she is crying ...then a handsum dude yes our virat come out of the cr..manvi go behing himhold his shirt tightly-pls mujhe bachalo..plss...
she was crying
v-p tension mt lo...
g-e ladki hme dede
v-jao yha se...verna ye thopda pehnchan nhi paoge...
g-mi kahta hoo ladki idhar dede...
v-tum ise nhi manhoge.haadia tudwa k hi jaogi...
guyz come n hold her hand-chhod iska hath..
g-nhi
\virat p;ynch him..n te fight strted..he strted kicing the guyzz...n punching them...n guyzz run from there...virat turn n didnt saw the girl face..her back was showing him...
v-ap thk to h n...
m-haaa...
virat realise some strnge sound...bit ignored...
v-ap yaha itni ratko..mi kahi drop kr do...
m-nhi thnx...mi chli jaoi...
v-dekhiye...itni ratko...akele ghimna sahi nhi h
manvi atlast turn...her eyes waqs red due to crying...but she didnt look at him..she is looking diown n continuelusly tteras ozing from her eyes...virat look at her angelic face n lost in her beauty
then come out of hus thought...when his frnds come out there..in their car...
guy1-whqt happen virat sb thk h
virat signal them to came here
m-thnk you so much...
v-its okk
virat thought*isen mujhe dekha nhi..yaha dekh k b pehchan nhi rahi ki vo ek actr k amne khdi h *
she realise 3 more person come there she got scared but didnt look at them still uking diwn
g1-kaun h ye...
v- i dont no...(to manvi)ye mere frnd h
m-thnx
mqnvi turn n run from thereto the opposite side
v-are suno...ajeet ladki h
g1-re thi kaun ye...
v-pta nhi
virat tell him the whole story...
n they mke their way ...as they all decided to go on same place for party..ggo all come in same car
virat frnds-viren.jeevika,tanya...they r co str of his show as well his frnds...
virt was driving when suddenly j shout
j-virat gadi ruko...
virat press brk like a jerk-kya hua
j-vo dekhi vo hi ladki
virat saw in j direction saw manvi try to jump in sea...he got out..storm out of the car
v-ooo heloo.,,..
what r u doing...
amvni didnt listn she just want to get rid of her life...she is about to jump in sea...
virat hold her hand pulled her to him like a jerk
mnvi head it his chest..
v-kya kr ri hoo pagl ho gya
sh pull herself back-tum hote kaun hoo..mujhe ye sb kahne wale..just goo..ye meri lfie h ..ise khtm ya bachao who r u(shout on his)
she didnt realise she is talking to n actr.coz she is in her own thought
m-jus tleav m alone...
manvi agin try to climb a wall...but virat hold her hand tighte... n drag her to his gang...
v-jeevika--iske purse mi chek kro..ise ghr chodna h verna pta nhi...subh tk kaha mari milegi
all of them surprise to see virat so much consrn about a strnager
m-mera purs mujhe doo...meri jaan bachai un gundo se thnk you kaha na..now leav me on the way i am
v-jeevika jaldi
j-yaa...(after a pause)from manvi liscence
she is from delhi
all shoked..mavni pulled her hand took her purse...n goto her luggage...which was still with him
ll of them standin n looking at her...going
v-ye delhi..iska saman b yaha h ./or is time
all mvoe towards her...she ws sitting on a bench...n teaars fliing from her eyes..virat signal jevika to tlk..j nodded
j-tum yaha new hooo mumbai mi..
manvi look at her hold her purse tightly look at her from corner eyes-manvi nodded eyes...
j-okkk...kaha jana h tumhe...
manvi nodded no...lookind down
j-noo mtlb..
m-pt nhi...
all shoked n confused
j-pt nhi...ohh jaror jaha jana h address kho gya hoga h na
manvi nodded no
j-kisse milne hoo yaha
m-kisi se nhi...
j-to yaha ai q hoo...
m-q yaha ne mi tax lgtaa h ...

guyzz i'll continue it later...
precap-manvi in virat's house...
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amazing plz cntinue soon ad plz pm me
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wow just read all the parts its amazing
virat an actor n viren jeevs n tanya r his co-stars n frnds too😃
manvi's so heart broken🄺...n she came to mumbai but didnt know anyone around herešŸ˜Ž
virat is surprised that she didnt recognize him😳
n love manvi's answer to jeev *ku mimbai ane pe tax lagta ha kia*🤣
manvi na aise situation ma bhi joke crack karna nae bhulti
plzz cont soon
i love itā¤ļø
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Awesome...
Loved this..
Plzcontiu soon...
Liked to read next part...
Liked this story line..
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wow i love it soo much please do continue soon will u pm me😊

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