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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome dear send me pm when upd
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 9A...

Wow!!

Arjun ne toh mujhe bhi shock kar diya... I thought Ayesha would be a dead person today...

Par nahi... Wow!!!

Arjun Sakshi ko ignore kyu kar raha hai???

And Sakshi's letter was too cute...

And the last part... *Blushing Blushing*
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Posted: 12 years ago
Unresed previous one on Pg. 70.. 😛

Lo ji.. Yahan bhi late lateef.. 😕

Oodi Baba.. 😲😲

Now this has to win the award for the best mystery ever!! A love triangle?? Who would've imagined that!! 😲 👏👏

Well, that only makes her more human.. And I could so totally relate to her frame of mind back then.. Uss age mein we really don't think about what implications our actions would have on others.. (Le.. Hum kaunse buddhe ho gayein hai yaar?!) 😆

So, Arjun must have despised her with a vengeance back then, right? You know for a moment i thought u were going the BL way with Roshni.. 😉😆 Khair, hum dono B1 jitne evil nahi hain.. Our Roshni's are always sweeti-pies.. (She'll kill me if she reads this!) 😆😉

So, she backed out eventually and went away! Well, I'm glad she did..

And now she's back.. For an undercover case maybe..

So we still don't know if he's forgiven her for all of that and what's more interesting is that she hasn't asked for forgiveness.. Not that it matters anymore.. But still..

So now he knows who she is, what she did in the past and why she did it.. Wonder if his outlook towards her is going to change knowing all that or the new Sakshi will prove him wrong this time around?

This prem kahani is going to be indeed mushkil; firstly, coz he's not interested and besides, since it's Sakshi, it'll be all the more difficult for him to accept his feelings if and when he falls for her..

The story's reached a perfect peak Vidzi.. Waiting for more to watch if the wrong-timed entrant deserves yet another chance, which destiny has unknowingly offered her..

Thanks for the PM behna.. And this one is really going great.. Do write more sooner..

P.S.: I've said it before and repeat yet again.. You do not have to apologise for treating your story in a particular way.. Samjhi ya samjhaun?

Ab toh private Gtalk session between B1, 2 and 3 kareka padi.. 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

This is heart breaking for me to see Sakshi like this...🤢

i can't accept her like this...

i am sorry...😔

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ketakee

This is heart breaking for me to see Sakshi like this...🤢

i can't accept her like this...

i am sorry...😔


dont be sorry! its your visions about ur fav onscreen character!

All have their own perceptions of a character...and my stories and characters reflect my own perceptions! Sakshi in my stories are never like the one in the serial...and i dont intend to make her that as well

from ur comment, do i assume that i dont have to PM you hereafter?

thanks for the feedback!
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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry 4 late commenting di//...it was superb...
so they know each other...hmm...
haha..bholi bhali abla naari...jai ho apki!!😆😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya.anand

B1, thats why i said by now she had conveniently termed it as a crush

and u caught that perfectly! WOW! 🤗

😆 Where is my reward for catching your clue?
Waiting for an update.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll

😆 Where is my reward for catching your clue?
Waiting for an update.😃


ab toh dho teen din lagega...
anyways...u will get ur super duper reward very soon! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updates sorry couldn't read your updates just finished reading wow u've gone so far i'm loving it. <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Arakshians...back with a new part...

pls read and reply...errors ho toh maaf kardena...

B1, the reward for u...hope u get time to read it...and the new game i mentioned starts here...

Thanks for liking and commenting on it! ur comments is my driving force...thanks a ton!

Part 11A:

Smiles which were alien to him were becoming a frequent happening when she was around...or rather when she talked such nonsense! well nonsense also sounded funny when it came from her!

Arjun: [instantly snapping out] teek hai...tum jaakhe le lo...main yahi hoom...phir ghar drop karunga...

Sakshi: nahi nahi usski zaroorat nahi hai...main chali jaavungi...

Arjun: tum boli baali abla naari kaise akele jaavogi??

Sakshi scratches her head as she was trapped in her own words while he added.."Ab jaao aur jaldi waapas aavo...tumhe yahaan beech raaste pe chodhke jaane ka risk main nahi lena chahtha...Samjhi ya samjhaavum?"

Sakshi nodded and got off while he parked the car towards the side in the parking lot of the store and waited for her!

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He saw her walk away into the apparel store and then his mind slowly wandered back to the past...

Now when he looked back, he wasn't able to hate her so much as he did at that time...perhaps having known the other side of her now had helped him change his opinion about her...

Now that he knew her good side, he could never get himself to hate her! She wasn't that bad after all!

In the past, he had seen her through Roshni's eyes...he had known and formed an image of her from Roshni's words...He had detested her due to that image which was obviously not so good!

He had so far had an image of a girl who would do anything to snatch him away from his love! He thought that by hook or crook, she just wished to separate him and Roshni!

But this Sakshi whom he knew now seemed so distant from all that...

She was completely a changed person now...perhaps time and her experiences had transformed her...but to what extent? Well he wasn't sure...Could he trust her now? Perhaps, yes...

Now looking back, he could only name all her deeds back then as sheer childishness and an act of complete immaturity!

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His thoughts snapped abruptly when a speeding jeep came to a screeching halt right before the store into which Sakshi had disappeared...He felt that there was something completely wrong about the whole scene...

No it wasn't just a feeling...something was definitely wrong...He was quick to react...he jumped out of the SUV and took his gun out...

He realized that his intuitions were right when he saw a gun pointing out of the jeep...the guy's face wasn't clear...it was hidden from him...He looked at the aim where the gun was pointing to...The guy seemed to be waiting for someone to step out of the store...

"Sakshi" his lips muttered mindlessly...yes they were waiting for her to step out...

He mentally made a note of the number of people in the jeep...they were just 2 of them...the gun man and the driver were the only people in it...and it was absolutely doable for him!

He didn't think twice...He aimed at the hand that held the gun...

In a quick action, he shot the hand and sprinted towards the entrance of the store...The gun fell off to the ground from the guy's hands...

Before the man could even realize what happened and revive back, Arjun was inside the shop...

Arjun knew that there were only two of them in the jeep but he wasn't sure if there were more from the same gang around the place...may be there were more and could be hiding!...so he had to be alert...

He couldn't risk anybody's life...Once inside the shop, he closed down the shutter instantly...

He alerted everyone "ETF...everybody stay where ever you are!...Don't panic!"

There were hushes from all sides about "WHAT THE HELL!" "HUMEIN BAAHAR JAANA HAI", "WHATS THE PROBLEM?" etc etc

He looked at the security guard "jab tak police na aa jaaye kisi keliye bhi uss shutter ko kholna matth..."

Arjun rang up the ETF and called for the backup to bring things under control...

Once done with that, he scanned around to check where Sakshi was..."SAKSHI..." he called out loudly...

Hearing no response from her, he walked into the store and heard a humming of "kuch na kaho" song from the trial room...That could only be her... He instantly realized that she was inside that room!

He wondered, "How crazy can this girl get! Itna badaa hungaama ho raha hai aur yeh ladki yahaan aaraam se gaana gaa rahi hai!"

Arjun banged on the door, "SAKSHI...nikhlo baahar...jaldi!"

Sakshi let a sigh of anger..."offo ARJUN! aap yahaan??? Isiliye aapko jaane keliye kahaa tha...i know you are impatient and cant wait till I finish shopping!"

Arjun: [furiously] Sakshi...get out right now!

Sakshi: [rolling her eyes] ARJUN, I am changing...aise kaise baahar aa jaavum??

Arjun snorted angrily...controlling his fumes, he realized that she was obviously right..."OKAY...jaldi kapde peheno aur baahar aa jaavo...we have a problem!"

Sakshi: Problem?? [then adds casually] Haan woh toh humesha hai...whats so new today?

Arjun: [flaring up] Sakshi, I am not in a mood to hear your silly comments...koyi tumhe maarne keliye baahar kadhaa hai...So stop your nonsense right now and get out!

Sakshi gets out in less than a minute in a new dress looking so pretty and casually replies..."yeh baat pehle bathaa diya hota na? Itna sunaane ki zaroorat hi nahi padtha!"

He had just told her about an attempt to kill her and she was acting so cool and casual as if it wasn't a murder attempt but somebody was there outside waiting to take her for a film!

Arjun wonders from which planet, had this crazy specimen come from...Without wasting a second more nor waiting to reply to her, he grabs her wrist and rushes out of that place...

He enquires at the counter, "yahaan ka emergency exit kis taraf hai?"

The sales person replies to his query...

Arjun warns him before leaving, "police force bas paanch minute mein paunchega...usske baadh hi shutter open karna...ok?

Saying that, Arjun sprints to the direction of the emergency exit tugging Sakshi along...

She keeps protesting, "Arjun, mere dresses...mujhe woh lena hai...usse bhi lekhar chalthe hai na...plzz"

When she keeps pulling him back, he pins her to a side corner...

Glaring into her eyes, he gestures to keep quiet..."Chup bilkul chup...not a word more Sakshi!"

But Sakshi manages to just voice, "lekin mere kapde..."

Arjun doesn't reply but just pulls her along...On the way, his other hand pick some random clothes effortlessly and thrusts them into her hands..."yeh lo..."

Sakshi, while on the run, keeps looking at the dresses he had given her and keeps ranting on the various dresses he picked, "yeh sab main nahi pehen sakthi..aur yeh mere size ke bhi nahi hai...

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But he didn't utter a word back till they were at the exit door...He made her stand hidden towards the side of the door while he cautiously broke the glass of the emergency lever...Pushing it, he opened the door slowly...

Making sure that there was no one around outside that door, he dragged Sakshi and sprinted to the parking lot...He ducked up and down and keenly observing the activities all around, he reached the SUV along with her...He looked at the direction where the jeep stood earlier...It seemed to have disappeared now...

He shoved her into the passenger seat, and he got to the steering as quickly as possible...

He quickly called Aisha and informed, "Aisha, koyi sawaal matth poochna...but just hear me out...don't open the door to any stranger...Aur haan Sakshi aaj ghar nahi aayegi..yeah don't worry, she is with me...You just take care ok?"

Aisha was confused by this sudden turn of events...what was happening? She wondered but she knew that Arjun wouldn't instruct her all these without a valid reason...So she just nodded, "Yes sir"

Arjun knew that it was possible that whoever behind this sudden attack also knew that Sakshi stayed with Aisha...So their next destination could be Aisha's home!

He also messaged Rathod about it and made sure he went to Aisha's place as soon as possible...

He steered the SUV out of the parking lot and his mind was in deep silent thinking...meanwhile, Sakshi was going on and on about all the confusions...She appeared quite cool about it...perhaps she was used to all such crisis situations of life and death! And such running around was her favorite pass time!

He noticed the police force entering the compound as they left...

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After a long moment of silence, he turned to her side and enquired,

"tumne uss store se kisse call kiya tha Sakshi?"

He was quite sure that she called up someone from there and had informed the person about her whereabouts and obviously the person, the traitor himself had in turn let it out to the gang who were behind her life!

All along, he was thinking about the whole attempt and could judge that it wasn't a result of a big planning...it was all planned instantly...and he was sure that the entire plan came into light in a matter few minutes...

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So here begins a new game altogether...So far she played a hide and seek with him and now they play a game of life and death...where a win means life and a loss means nothing but death!

[To be continued]

So how was it??? Pls do reply!

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago

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