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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

ooo god
finally finally kriyash ke beach sab thik hone laga he
kria rey n uski relationship ko chance diya

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917494

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

Mania 😊
awsome update!

i think small kanha from uttran will be perfect!

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star94

@star94

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

That update was just so beautifully written. Please please update soon!!

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

OMG... Hailaaa... me dead... 🤢

Mannu mata ki jai ho... 😆

kya mast update likha hai manu...

Gosh.. shuru shuru mei toh it was sooo damn hawt... uff... 😳

i was deaddd... 🤢

super awesome mannu... 😳

The caring nature of Rey towards Rivaan... and whn he called her Dadda... eepppss... 😳

They both r being practical...but at the same time they want to be with each other...

m just loving it all...

der emotions... feelings... Love... everything...

Love you Manu... for writing this story... 🤗

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

This was such a romantic part 😳...

Filled with lots of Love and Romance..

I so love it when Rey addresses Kria 'Love' , it's beautiful..

Jahan KR hain wahan romance toh banta hai 😉..

Aur jab yeh dono saath hon wahan 'Haddi' toh definitely hoti hai 😆..

Aww!!! Rivaan ko toh Rey abhi se he itna acha lagta hai , future mein problem nai hogi 😉...

N he is toh even calling him 'Dadda' now , great ...

*Sigh* When ur Lover is a superstar N even the father of ur child , it is 'Very' difficult to have a normal life 🤔

Hope they find out a way to stay together as a 'Family' N not just as Friends...

The part was Fabulous , written very well , as always 😃..

Loving the story ❤️...

Will be waiting for the next part..

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

awesome update
loved it
plz update soon...

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shradha_23

@shradha_23

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

Awesome update
Loved it 😊 👏

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

The update was amazing, as usual. No matter whatever you try hands on, it turns out to be magical - just splendid. Right from the concept to the execution.

It definitely was a treat. From the start to the end. Just fantabulous.

I liked the way Rivaan is getting attatched with Rey. That was soo cute..

Then Rey returns to check on Kria and then some serious talk which later turned to be mischevious. How do they manage to be grab all the attention? Or rather I put it as hoe do you manage to portray it in such a tremedous way?

Sabko ghayal karne ka irada hai kya?