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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#351

neha is really sweet n clever also..😉

n rivaan is really a sweetypie...

finally rey and rivaan ki thodi bonding ho rhi hai...

n dono khi na khi kese na kese kiss karne ka bahana dhund hi lete hai..😳

n i just loved the last part...

hayee rey to next ki planning b kar rha hai...naughty..☺️

m just dieing to read the next part...

but i guess we have to wait...😔

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#352

awesome update

loved it very much

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#353

WoW

SPLENDID

MARVELOUS

FLAWLESS

AWESOME

AMAZING SUPERB

MINDBLOWING

AWESTRUCK

BEAUTIFUL

ROCKING

NEHA KNOWING REY MORE DEN HIM

DEN KRIYAANSH MOMENTS

LOVED REY-RIVAAN DUO

N DEN AGAIN ALL DAT REY SAID..AWAAAH

UPDATE SOON :)

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#354

m late to read the last 3 chappy's but they are beautifully penned dear... loved it..!!

the story couldnt get btr than this...

all d best n update sooner..!!

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#355

Mania. They're simply Par-Excellence. Am left speechless after reading this update. Splendid! :D

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#356

Love the update
n rey n kria are going well
n last part was so intresting
rey taking about one more child was graEt

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#357

supr amazinggg update,,,,

luv it 2 d core,,,,,waiting eagerly 4 nxt chappy

n all d bst 4 ur xmz

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magical_mania

@magical_mania

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#358

IMP NOTE

Heya buddies,

Me done with my exams 😃
As promised, it was a treat.
Wasn't it?

People are confusing with Rivaan's character
I dun have a fixed face for him.
So you guys tell me who should play Rivaan
Majority will be the result.
Please everybody mention with a single choice.

As I said earlier, my frequency of updates will depend upon your response.
Better the response, earlier u'll get.

Last thing, I'm going to finally filter ma buddy list,
so do leave review+hit like, if u want PMs.
M serious about it.

Thanks for reading!!

Luv

Mania 😊

Edited by magical_mania - 12 years ago

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#359

Me first... .:D

I wanted at SOTP also though...

par chalo... logon ko saat khoon maaf hote hian... lollu is forgiven... ;)

Pehle toh woh dusre res ne mera dil toda... i thought there was one more update... :D

Coming to the update...

could it get any better? :D

i mean it was so beautifully and lovingly written...

Absolute flawless flow... and a beautiful journey...

from start till end...

I just love this cocky rey... he is so absolutely perfect and feels surreal...

the way he coaxed kiri... the way u escribed his gestures and way of speaking was amazing... and just beautiful...

though buggie wanted more... ;)

i just absolutely loved how u showed the relationships progressing...

and how they wanted to venture into knowns and unknowns... amazingly written.. and beautifully shown.. the word were so soothing...

awesome write up..

Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#360

res plz
:P

unres

making love being parents is too hard.. :P

I hope everything goes well

cant comment much bigger but it was fab as always dearie infact I loved this more...finally sorting out things between them

Edited by deetha - 12 years ago