~KriYansh FF- Return to Paradise~ New thread link posted - Page 39

Amzing update
as usual i liked it very much.
Thnx for pm me

Great Update!!

Wow awesome..
i so loved when rivan said i want my dad to be like u..
awesome

loved the update
you write really beautifully
thnx 4 da pm

Awesomeee awesomeee awesomeee
loved it so much
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Truely amazing part

thanx for the pm
plz update soon :)

Awesum... 👏

Loved it... 👍🏼

Do cont soon...
N Thnks 4 d pm..

Amazing update

It feels so nice to wake up and when checking my mails get a notification that i have gotten a PM from you

This chapter was a perfect blend of rey-rivaan and the hotness of kriyansh

How can rey be sooo loving and caring 😳
Plus a seducer that has all the control when related to kriya 😳



I just hope that they reunite as a family even though there will be troubles because of rey's movies...

But after a kid and the planning of another...they cant be "friends"

Waiting for the next update eagerly...but i have trust in your writing skills that the future story will be mindblowing 😊

hey can't go into detailed comments

amazing update...
Luvd it..
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon

Awsome Updt
Rivaan is very sweet
hope he gets both his
parents n kriyaansh r together forever