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I just read the entire story at one go and I must say I'm sitting in my room shaking at every little noise waiting for something scary to happen!
The story is wonderful, just the right amount of gore, blood and tainted pasts. Its amazing how you've captured that essence of Arnav and Khushi as being meant to be in a situation that is not ideal for romance.
And through a willing suspension of disbelief the psychology and connected consciousness makes for such an amzing story, its like you've turned the idea of Arnav and khushi being connected on its head. Her consciousness is connected but to someone who she is not in love with but is an extravagant serial killer.
Akash made a dramtic entry but I feel like he went down without a fight, after all his efforts he should have atleast tried to fight for Khushi?
And Mysore! COffee and Masala Dosa, I'm hungry now! (Yes, I'm from Mysore and totally love that its a part of your story!)
Khushi the Murder Mystery Writer and Arnav the ACP, brilliant story and one I'm not likely to forget anytime soon!
The story is wonderful, just the right amount of gore, blood and tainted pasts. Its amazing how you've captured that essence of Arnav and Khushi as being meant to be in a situation that is not ideal for romance.
And through a willing suspension of disbelief the psychology and connected consciousness makes for such an amzing story, its like you've turned the idea of Arnav and khushi being connected on its head. Her consciousness is connected but to someone who she is not in love with but is an extravagant serial killer.
Akash made a dramtic entry but I feel like he went down without a fight, after all his efforts he should have atleast tried to fight for Khushi?
And Mysore! COffee and Masala Dosa, I'm hungry now! (Yes, I'm from Mysore and totally love that its a part of your story!)
Khushi the Murder Mystery Writer and Arnav the ACP, brilliant story and one I'm not likely to forget anytime soon!
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