ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed]

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yush-swt

@yush-swt

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

wow...this was amazing...never imagined akash would do such a thing...and its always was about arnav because of khushi...wow...you are great...and this was one amazing ff...would be waiting for the epilogue...and pls do give one...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

Take a bow! This was such a unique twist on my fav. Couple. You never strayed from your storyline and made it very real - as if you are an expert on what you were writing about. Akash, I did not see that coming but it made sense that Arnav will take away the threat to their survival. Jealousy is a very strong emotion which when combined with the stuff they were being exposed to, took Akash over the edge. He was begging to be found with all the clues he was leaving for them. Will Arnav tell Kushi about this or will she sense it? Will they be together after this? I think you need the epilogue - at leat. Would like to read it please.

On a side note, I will miss your stories. Good luck with your studies. Hope you come back to write more afterwards as I absolutely love your writing! Great talent!

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

Amazing journey...hats off to you for writing such a awesome FF

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

Absolutely brilliant and mind blowing ending to this outstanding and phenomenal story, i cant believe the killer was Akash, that was a very shocking and unexpected twist, but none the less brilliant. Arnav finally managed to track him down by the diary that khushi had written and Akash had been expecting him and Akash admitted that the reason he was killing all the victims because he wanted Arnav's attention. From start to finish this story has been extraordinary, each update had been written to perfection and filled with suspense, thriller and action. Please write a epilogue, i would love to read khushi's reaction to finding out who the murderer was, thanks for the PM xx

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shaheen

@Shaheen17

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

Oh my god!
So they met earlier nd abt 20 feet of distance she actually noticed his slightly dimple on his cheek...
That was amazing!
And he actually doubted her...
Great update

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

Loved the end. You agzin sprung a surprise by making Aakash the murderer.

Hats off to you for the different subjects you have dealt with in your stories.

Also the amount of research and hard work that has gone into it.

Will miss your writing when you take time off for studies.

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Peda

@Peda

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

Thanks for writing this very entertaining story.

Good luck with your exams.I really will miss your writing.

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harsha

@harsha..

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1018

It was such an awesome story, so crisp and to the point.
I had fun reading it. The genre was so different as compared to other stories I have read on the forum.
You didn't write a word less or a word more. I truly loved this FF.
Please do write an epilogue.

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#1019

Akaash! WOW. I expected it to be Shyam, don't know why. But it's nice to have googlies thrown at me sometimes :P It was very disturbing the way he just sat there, discussing the weapon that would kill him and smiling, I can''t even think how detached he must be from himself to be able to do so.Arnav's detachment is understandable, because of his training in the police. All this, was for Khushi? Because she looked at the boy with sad eyes who sat in a corner by himself? We really want an epilogue RB. Really. Please please pleeease!
P.S. It's my 700th post. I really must get a life :P