ArHi SS! Escape Velocity [Completed] - Page 100

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sslmay11

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Posted: 12 years ago

Will miss reading ur work. All best for ur work in real life...eagerly waiting for an Epilogue...

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citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

Superb end...quick and crisp.

Thoroughly enjoyed the story.

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ILoveFF

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Posted: 12 years ago

Brilliant ff... I read this chapter at least 3 times. Reason: I loved the interaction between Arnav and Akash.

Your approach to a story is extremely refreshing

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divya

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Posted: 12 years ago

jealousy plays al d way

n akash name s quite a surprise

wud b waitng fr epi

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avni_barun

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Posted: 12 years ago

the was an interesting end...
loved it...
thanks for PM...

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gata

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Posted: 12 years ago

An epilogue to this story please

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varshapan

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Posted: 12 years ago

WOW!! just plain WOW!!

and thank god it was not Shyam. :) just joking.

but i loved the way you ended this too.. no stupid fights or trying to run or anything. as if every player in the story was now aware of their role and played their part smoothly.

and please to write an epilogue. would love to hear that arnav and khushi finally found their happy ending.

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Happytwinkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

Awesome update
thanx for the pm
Twinkle

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dis_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

that was superb

bravo👍🏼

u had done an amazing work..the end is unexpected... :)

actually noone ever come with something like this...so must appreciate u for such a superb story :)

it truly showed ur talent in writing👏

do pm me if u write a new one..becoz i will be irregular after this week

take care dear!!!!!!!!!!

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oceanssea

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Posted: 12 years ago

The last few lines were...simply brilliant.

Loved this story.

Do write an epilogue😳

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