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Alyaa_27

@Alyaa_27

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

awesome update..
the end was tooo gud!!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

Brilliant and fantastic update, it's written so perfectly and exceptionally well.

Love how you write with so much detail and explain every aspect of the honeymoon beautifully.

Khushi thinking about the incident when her parents got killed was so sad and heart breaking, I can't believe it was the Malik's that killed them, is it going to be Arnav's dad and uncle.

I can't believe Khushi even called Shyam a snake and Arnav is not catching on, but I'm glad there conversation got recorded, I hope Payal listens to it.

Loved the way Akash made Arnav hug and sit close to Khushi.

Loved the way Khushi told Arnav she he was sleeping on the couch and took the bed for herself.

Please continue soon xx

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sarthshru

@sarthshru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

great update...lovely dear...love the honeymoon..can see arnav changing..

i dont know what is gonna happen to the recording!!!!

hope it workds positively!!!

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ammini

@ArshiNmaNervs

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

so khushi's past related to arnav's father.thats good.nice update

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Ashavi

@Ashavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

hmm...i love this strong and bold Khushi...want Arnav 2 repent lik hell...how will Arnav react to the actual truth...Arnav will be shocked to know that Anjali knows it...i guess Amit and Anjali may hook up soon or s Anjali for Anish as he has already lost his wife...will Arnav's fathers truth effect Arshi's relation?wanna know when will Anish gv his grand entry...i guess he will cum after 6months 2 protect Khushi...want Khushi 2 gv a tough time 2 Arnav when he gets 2 know the truth...wanna know Khushi's past completely...

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Desiree Benoit

@crazyforsanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Oooh! i just looove this Kushi of yours. I'm sooo glad you didn't make her into a dithering idiot, like they did on the show when they ruined her character! I am loving the SS so much! Everytime, there is something different. And I love your detailed descriptions of the cruise ship as well as the Greek Islands! But mostly, I love this relationship between Kushi and Arnav, and even more, I looove the character of Kushi. I hope she doesn't change midway, and become an idiot, like they did to her in the show (yes, I know I keep repeating this, but they really ruined he show, didn't they??) I hope we see more of this stronger and self-sufficient Kushi. I just want her to ignore Arnav completely. I wish there was something to make him jealous and realize his feelings for her. I don't know what you have planned, but anyhow, I am loving this SS!

Thanks for the PM.

Waiting impatiently for more!

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arshi_arylie

@arshi_arylie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Lol khushi made him sleep on the couch.. She is back 2 her child self again! :D arnie is still not trying to seek the truth and he's not even trying to find puy who's 'ashu bhaiya' or maybe he just dowsn't want to... Anjali knows everything... I wish akaash consults anjali so she'll ne able to bring arshi closer!