Where my heart is! TaaRey ss *Completed* - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyc story dear... loved it... plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

pm me please!!!!!!!!!!
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Part 6: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

After about 2 hours of driving, everyone reached the farmhouse.

Vicky - ok toh sab log apne apne room partners ko chose karlo

Sharon - mai aur Taani

Neha - Me and Aashi

Simmi - Obviously Rinni man

Nil - Vicky as always

Amar - Bhalat (Bharat)

Swayam - Rey, aacha hai, ab tu raat ko Taani ke room nahi ja payega.

The whole gang started laughing while Taani blushed due to the fact that Rey had just winked at her

Kriya - uhm guys, mai kiske saat room share karongi ?

The whole gang awkwardly turned towards Kriya remembering she was also there.

Vicky - Uhm tum Sharon aur Taani kai sath room share karlo okay?

Sharon *thinking* - yeh hi ek way hai Kriya ko Rey se dur rakhneka

Sharon - Ok Done.

Rey looked towards Taani who had a bit of hesitation in her eyes but she sucked it up and nodded.

Nil - Okay everyone, go to your rooms and we'll meet back here in an hour

Everyone headed towards their rooms.

In Kritaaron's room

Sharon - I call the bed by the window

Taani - No bhab- I mean Sharon, I do.

Sharon - no mai

Taani - no mai

Sharon - no me

Taani - wow omg, dekho kya hai

As Sharon turned around to look at what Taani was talking about, Taani picked up her suitcase and jumped on the bed by the window. Sharon turned back around and was shocked

Sharon - hey no cheating hai yeh. Rey ke sath reh kar bilkul uski tarah ban gayi o

Taani - ab girlfriend kisiki ho?

Sharon and Taani burst out laughing. After a while, they calmed down and Taani looked towards the door where Kriya was standing awkwardly.

Taani - Come inside na Kriya. Sorry, woh bed ke liye fight karte karte, hum to tumhe pooch na bol hi gaye. Tume yeh wala bed chaiye?

Kriya *thinking* - Taani ke good books mai rehana ho ga.

Kriya - no no don't worry, you and Sharon can have that one.

Taani and Sharon nodded.

Sharon - Okay, girls, aj raat ko we're going out for dinner so time to pick outfits.

Taani - Me first. I think I'll wear my blue top.

Sharon - no no, aj tum pehle baar apne sasural aiye ho, to dress

Taani - sasural ?

Sharon - ha sasural, shaadi ke baad, rey ka farmhouse, tumhara farmhouse.

Taani blushed while Kriya who had been looking through her suitcase, shot up but then quickly looked back down.

Taani - laykin dress? Mai dress nahi payn(wear) sakte.

Sharon - of course tum payn sakte ho, aur tum payno gi. Am I clear?

Taani - yes ma'am.

Sharon - Good, ab dekte hai ki mere pass tumharai liya konse dress hai. Ah here we go, aur kiske saath perfect heels bhi hai mere pass

In the evening

Everyone had gotten dressed and were waiting downstairs.

Simmi - yeh Sharon aur Taani kaha reh gayi?

Bharat - Zaroor bhabhi aur nanand kuch batai kar rahe hongay.

Hearing this, Swayam turned a deep shade of pink

Nil - yeah right, they're girl, they take forever

Neha - what you mean take forever? Here hum hai. Only Sharon and Taani taking forever

Rey - No guys, Taani asi nahi hai, ati hi hogi

Vicky - ati nahi, agayi and omg

Rey looked and saw all the guys staring behind him with dreamy eyes. He turned around and there stood Taani looking like an angel.


Vicky - yaar, swayam tere behen kitne hot lag rahi hai

Nil - sach, agar Rey iske saath nahi hota hai, toh mai kab ka-

Rey *angry* - kab ka kya? Tu mere Taani ki taraf dekhe ga?

Nil *scared* - arey, no no, I was saying ki agar yeh tere sath nahi hoti, to mai kab ka isko isko you know.

Rey - no I don't know

Swayam - Rey chor na in sab ko. Sharon kaha hai?

Rey - yeh lo, doosre bhi aagi

Sharon stood at the top of the stairs, looking like she had just come down from heaven.

Sharon saw Taani move beside her uncomfortably, she obviously wasn't used to this attention. She held Taani hand and started to walk down the stairs. By the time, they got downstairs, everyone was in awe. Two people started walking towards them. Of course who else but our own Majnu and Prince Charming. In sync, they took their respective girls hand and kissed it. Our Prince Charming grabbed his princess's hand.

Rey - You look beautiful

Taani *blushing* - aap bhi ache lag rahe hai

Rey - ab tum hare saath khara hon ga, to I won't look nice at all.

Taani blushed a deeper shade of pink. Our Majnu had walked up to his Laila and put his hand infront of her. Sharon put her hand in his and he pulled her closer to him.

Swayam - You're looking gorgeous. Tumhe dekte dekte puri zaindagi gozarlon ga.

Sharon blushed - tumse kisne kaha ki mujhe tumhare saath shaadi karne hai?

Swayam - shaadi kisne kaha? Mai to tumhe dekhnai ki baath kar raha tha laykin agar tumhe shaadi karne hai, I don't mind.

Sharon looked away, wishing the ground would just swallow her. Why did she say that? Swayam put his head under her chin and turned her head to face him.

Swayam - Don't worry, I was joking.

Soon, Kriya came downstairs and everyone started walking outside.

Rey - Tonight's going to be a good night.

Nobody knows what it was. Maybe Rey had jinxed the night or something. But if only Rey had known what he was doing, he would have never said it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Okay guys, this was just a filler update, asli drama to abhi anay ko hai.Thinking about how this story is going, it's probably going to end in about 4 or 5 more parts.

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Precap

Rey sneaked into her room but everything was dark. He saw a figure by the window but he couldn't see her face. Slowly, he started walking towards her and grabbed her waist. As he turned her around, someone turned the lights on.

Edited by TaareyFan23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sharon's Outfit:


Girls Outfits: (Kriya, Neha, Simmi, Rinni, Aashi)

Edited by TaareyFan23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😃loved it soo much plz continue n thanks for the pm cant wait to read more loved ur choices for the dresses but just out of curiosity wouldnt Taani be way taller than Rey if she wore those lovely heels i mean i dont want to be mean n that outfitt is sooo beautiful but Taani n Rey wont be able to meet each others eyes😉anyways lovely update but ur precaps r scaring me!!!!😭😭😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: geshiga54

😃loved it soo much plz continue n thanks for the pm cant wait to read more loved ur choices for the dresses but just out of curiosity wouldnt Taani be way taller than Rey if she wore those lovely heels i mean i dont want to be mean n that outfitt is sooo beautiful but Taani n Rey wont be able to meet each others eyes😉anyways lovely update but ur precaps r scaring me!!!!😭😭😭


OMG, you killed me 🤣🤣
I guess I never thought about the height 😳
can you imagine that? Rey looking up at Taani :')
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
Mindblowing outfits were awsum n in precap she was I think so..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...and ohh noo...the precap seems scary yet again =(
please update soon and please PM me as well =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
It was very cute and nice update!!
The precap is very scary with ur end lines... Please update soon and thnx fr the pm... 😊 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome blossom chapter!! Loved Sharon-Taani bond!! And loved Taani's outfit!! I can easily imagine Rey reaction seeing her!! <3

But Gosh!! Precap!! *dara hua chehra*
Do update soon and do do do pm me!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing precap is also interesting so plz update sooon and pm me

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