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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Taani couldn't believe what she had seen. She should have known this was all too good to be true. Kriya was back and obviously Rey would pick her. Why would he want Taani? There was nothing special about her. She ran back to the gang with tears streaming down her face. When she got closer, she stopped reminding herself she couldn't ruin this weekend for the other. She wiped her tears, and plastered a huge smile on her face.

Swayam - Taani, agi tum? Rey aur Kriya kaha hai?

Taani winced at the mention of Rey and Kriya's name. They sounded so good together; Taani just didn't belong in this.

Taani - bas arehehai dono

Swayam nodded and everyone got back to their conversation.

Inside

Rey was dumbstruck. He couldn't move. His mind was working telling him to run after her but his body was just not responding. He already knew Taani had taken this the wrong way.

Kriya*thinking* - Yes, mujhe pata tha Rey aaj bhi mujse pyaar karte. Dekho kaise mujhe chor hi nahi reh hai.

Kriya - Rey, choriye na

Rey heard a voice and turned to face Kriya. The past few minutes came back to him and hit him hard. Instantly, he let go of Kriya dropping her on the ground and ran after Taani.

Kriya - Ouchhh

Rey ran outside and he saw Taani standing there quietly not talking. He walked up to her and stood beside her holding her hand. Taani looked at Rey and smiled but then what had just happened a few moments ago flashed in her head and her smile disappeared. Rey knew she was thinking about it.

Rey - Taani, kya mai tumse baat kar sakhta ho?

Taani - ha boliye

Rey looked around - uhm akele mai

Taani's heart broke into a million pieces. She knew what was coming next. Rey was going to tell her that this was just a big mistake and that he actually loved Kriya. Taani nodded and they quietly walked away.

Taani - pehle ki aap kuch bole, mujhe pata hai ki aapko kya bolna and all I want to say is that I understand. Who aapka pehla pyaar thi aur -

Rey - Taani, tum yeh bol kya rahiho?

Taani - mai bas yeh kahna chati hoon ki I understand agar aap abh mujse se break up karne wale hai.

Rey*shocked* - What? Mai kyun break up karonga?

Taani - Kyunki aap aaj bhi Kriya se pyaar karte. Maine sab dekha tha Rey. Kriya kaise aapki arms mai thi.

Rey - Taani, asa wasa kuch nahi, woh actually Kriya girne wali thi aur jaise I turned around, woh sida mere arms me girgi. Tumne asa socha bhi kasai, ki mai tumhe choronga? Aapni zindagi ko chorna possible hai kya?

Taani breathed a sigh of relief. She felt the storm in her belly calm down.

Taani - aap sach mai mujse break up nahi kar rehai?

Rey - nahi kar raha ho, sorry.

Taani felt the world around her stop. She felt the tears occurring in her eyes. Rey saw the tears and started to panic. He cupped her face and wiped them away.

Rey - arey Taani, I was joking, of course not. I love you

Taani stared at Rey before hitting his chest.

Taani - Asai drana zaroori hai kya? Meri to kismet hi khrab hai. Inte sare larke hai is world mai leykin mujhe to aapse hi pyaar hona tha.

Rey grabbed Taani by her waist and pulled her closer.

Rey - Ab pyaar hua hai to, you have to stick with me your whole life.

Taani blushed at Rey's comment and looked the other way. Rey grabbed her face and turned it to face him, planting a peck on her lips. Then, he held Taani's hand and walked towards the gang, not being able to wait for the fun time they were going to have. If only Rey could have seen the future, he would have never wanted to go. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I know I know, pehle to itna time aur upar se inta bakwas update ! sorry, I've been caught up with school and stuff. Anyways, comment/like.


Precap

"Rey choriye na, koi dekh layga"

Taani stopped dead in her tracks on hearing that voice.

Edited by TaareyFan23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
OH MY GOD!!! THE PRECAP!!! I love it so much <3
PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
(PS. FIRST COMMENT :D )
Edited by mymy_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
The update was awesome..
poor taani ..
Kriya >.<
the precap..
Was it kriya who said that? :OO
anyways please update asap!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Oh god pehle to i am happy for this update par last ki line and precap padhke i feel like killing you!! Yaar jada misunderstandings mat daliyo aur daliyo to khatam kar dio!!
Hehehe coz cant see our taarey in pain...
Update was awsome and amazing!! Thnx fr the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
This kriya need to get a damn life omg she is a desperate looser. Love Taarey making up moment and Rey telling Taani she is stuck with him for life is so.sweet. U did a fabulous job I love it plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
awsum update n kriya fell on the ground lol n preacp another mu's..update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awww, poor taani, she genuinely thought he was going to pick kriya, n rey was also a sweetheart! N omg the precap really has me worried, WTH!!! Is that kriya??!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Abbha... I m relifd nw taarey misundrstn got cleard...waitn for next part..do update and thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Awww Taani is sooo cute!!!!!!!! but precap looks scary plz dont seperate Taarey😭😭 waiting to read more thankz for the pm plz continue pming me!!!!!😊😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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update padkar jitna khus hui thi precap dek kar Saree khusi gayab ho gayee...😔 iss kriya kab jayegi taarey ki lyf se!!!! ...update soon yar can't wait to know age kya hone wala hai...

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