Raizada and Sons [6] - Link to thread 7/Pg155 - Page 24

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'Raizada and Sons [6] - C72/Pg20/Apr02 - PMs Later'

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Originally posted by: shona136

Hi Kalyaani,

I am Shona, an ardent admirer and a new reader to your stories...I have just finishes two of your most beautiful creations, Raizada and Son's and Pursuit of Love...and have instantly fallen in love with both the stories and their author...😉

I took me three days in total two finish these two FF's and each of these three days that I was about to go to bed late after reading, my mind always used to remain within the realmso f your stories, wondering what would happen in the next chap that I would read the next day when i get up... I have my mid semester exams starting from day after tomorrow, and have not yet studied a single line of my studies, and all is your fault, you have kept me gripped to the stories till the last full stop of every update...its unfair that you write in such a powerful articulating way... ( i am glad that you wrote them 😉)

I first read R&S and my immediate reaction was " bas this is it she cannot get better than this, she has absolutely put her best in this story"...but when read POL, I took back my words and thought, she excels herself each time, no comparison...👏

I have only joined IF in Nov, last year as my favourite TV show was about to end and I was somehow, though i thought it to be silly, was devastatingly depressed and disheartened 😭. But then i found IF and discovered this magical world of fan fictions, and the wonders that it did to our imaginations... Since then i have read numerous no. of FF's and some of them have been truly heartening...like i passionately follow appy_indy, tina, varu, saucechips, charlotte, omoraboti, shikha, nidhi, vani, tia, sarunfanatic, krani,satina,...and now you have made my list of the most admirable authors of fanfictions of arnav and khushi... i only read arnav khushi FF'S, these two magical characters don't seem to get out of my mind, and i dont even intend to drive them away from me. i think they are one of the most celebrated characters in the history of love stories... I truly couldn't attempt to compare your work with any one else's, you have such a mature, exsperienced and responsible hand at writing...

For R&S i was thoroughly impressed the way you went out of the usual, arnav khushi tiff's and clashes and gave a new dimension to their relationship, and was also moved in the way you portrayed each and every character giving them equal importance rather than constantly focusing on arnav-khushi... i liked this very as the other incidents though have their own importance are still connecting arnav khushi intensely within them. i was awed at such concept of a story... the political background was truly well set...and as for arshi romance, it was simply over the moon...they seem be so much in love and cant get enough of each other, but still do have their own strong personalities and flaws as well...this greatly appealed to me...😃

And as for POL, I dont enough words to describe how i felt reading this wonderful piece of art...i consider it to be a piece of art bcs, you seem to be as talented as spider, easily and very intricately weaving the story into a strong and exquisite piece of writing. the threads of the story have fallen in their respective places with great precision...this time adored how their relation went ahead with such complexities present yet with great passion...the characters in this one too are acutely developed, i for one love Mahi and his relationship with both khushi and arnav...i am now so happy that finally arnav got to know khushi truth but had taken it in the most wonderful way to increase his love for her...

i wish i would have been with the journey of this two stories from the beginning so that i could have given my feed back and reaction to each and every wonderfully written update...i still have so much to say but cant seem to have enough words to get them out...

both the stories have reached their 7th threads and in the 70's, i hope you will not be finishing them soon. i demand ot more twists and turns, (though keeping arshi to gether, not separating them or distancing them), i want more...!!!! pls dont end it soon...i have just joined in this exciting journey of these two stories, and dnt want it to end soon...i will surely comment and give my opinions from now on...i have sent you a buddy request, i will be glad if you accept and pm me for the next updates, otherwise i will be ok to stalk...😃

kalyaani, tumhara kalyaan ho, god bless you...you truly are a gem of a writer...a master at playing with words...bravo...!!!! i feel proud to be a reader of your creations...👏

Originally posted by: lika63

exactly same wid me yar.u hav wonderful description talent.i would like to borrow ur words to express my gratitude to her if u dnt mind.

thanq kalyani tanq so much.

i dnt thnk she vl end in near future.der is lot more to say in both stories i think.

in pol dadi vl make a problm for arnav and kushi.it vl take time na.

in r&s suraj's plan shuld b knwn and vijeyendra must b killed like in rajneethi movie.

kalyani update r&s next chap yar.

Waiting for an update.😊

When are you updating Kalyaani...??????? waiting...

Quite an interesting movement in the update.

FINALLY an update...totally loved the update...im so glad it was only abt arnav and khushi...ive been missing them for so long now!!! update sooner!!!

wow what an update... amazing... love what arshi share in this story :D