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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

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Posted: 12 years ago

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"You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you cannot fool all of the people all of the time." ~ Abraham Lincoln~

Raizada and Sons

This story showcases two areas of my interest, Politics and the serial IPKKND on Star Plus. The story bears some similarity to the serial and the due credit is extended, the rest I own, the content, premise and writing style.

I would love to read your comments and suggestions, I would not promise to include all in my writing and would like to add, constructive criticism is always welcome; it would greatly help the story and my effort to stay true to the concept. I am relatively new to writing and though I enjoy it immensely, my ability at writing regular updates is limited. The update soon comments, honestly cannot be honored as I mentioned earlier, cannot type that fast.

I request you not to copy/duplicate this work, it's petty to plagiarize and sincerely hope you enjoy my work, like and comment. In case you do find my work interesting enough to recommend to others, please direct them to this page. I strictly prohibit unauthorized use of this fan fiction in parts or whole.

Thank you for reading, please do hit the like and leave a comment if you found the update/story interesting enough. I do send out PMs to those who do so, as I would not want to flood anybody's inbox if they are not interested in reading or receiving PMs for this story. Alternatively, you can also block my name if you don't wish to receive PMs from me, I would not mind. I would want you to enjoy my writing and not like it to be forced.

Once again, thank you for reading

- Kalyaani

Thread One - Chapter 1 to 23

Thread Two - Chapter 24 to 37

Thread Three - Chapter 38 - 49

Thread Four - Chapter 50 - 60

Thread Five - Chapter 61 - 70

Thread Six

Chapter 71 - Stay happy (below) /Chapter 72 - No moss gathered /Chapter 73 - Ideal parent

Chapter 74 - Happy Birthday Meethi / Chapter 75 - A day of firsts / Chapter 76 - Ripple effect

Chapter 77 - Games people play / Chapter 78 - Desperate times

PLEASE DO NOT COPY UPDATES TO OTHER SITES, THIS UPDATE IS MEANT EXCLUSIVELY FOR INDIA FORUM MEMBERS.

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vgedin

@vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Eeeh the high on libido, insatiable Arnav is back! Oh I am so glad, cannot take Arnav in that much pain and anguish for too long.

KBV wasn't giving any money to the Party because Arjun didn't get the ticket. So that marriage - a big political alliance. And a mutual benefit scheme for the two families, including Viren & Sheetal. Damn, they make marriage sound like a cheap yet well schemed trick.

I loved that bit where Suraj spontaneously touched KBV's feet, I may not like the man but I cannot deny that fate has been very cruel to him right from the beginning, right from the time he was conceived. I still feel he has a shot at happiness with Lavanya, he'd be a fool to let go of that and continue complaining about his miserable fate.

This reminds me -when is Arjun coming back? And when will KBV tell Suraj that he did not have anything to do with Akhilendra's car crash?

Now I want to know about the big Raizada plan against the other Raizada clan and how it turns out, tell me K and tell me soon!

Thread 5 to Thread 6 took too long, K. Ab I am greedy, I want to see the story on its 7th Thread jaldi :P Greedy greedy Twiggy

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simran

@crazymg.04

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved to see a wild and passionate Arnav in action...this side of him suits him well 😳

Khushi even though hates getting late for all her work because of a demanding Arnav but I am sure she is not complaining...a jealous Khushi especially on that witch Sheetal is always very nice to see...😆

Loved the Suraj and KBV conversation...it was good that Suraj finally gets his answer as to why he was denied khushi hand in marriage...him taking KBV blessings was something out of the blue yet appealing...i hope he moves on from Khushi...Lavanya loves him dearly and i hope he finds happiness in her...I somehow have a soft corner for people whose love is unrequited hence i feel he deserves his share of happiness too...

Kalyani POL and Raizada and Sons are two brilliant FF...you have spoiled us with regular updates...hence when the regularity delays we get really tensed..sometimes i fear you will stop writing this altogether...god forbid...hence the entire stalking tendency day after day and hour after hour...i hope i am not overbearing i just feel so out of place when i dont get to see ur updates...just wanted you to know this😃

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

Bouhat shukriya, baari meherbaani.

Meri stalking mein hazoor break aap laye...

Qadam choum loon ya yeh ankehin bhicha doon.

Karoon kia yeh meri samajh mein na aaye...

uff, my fingers can relax now!

and am so glad that Suraj finally came to meet KBV. Now the games shall be fun!

and am kind of sure that Suraj would want Lavanya to be part of what Khushi is doing.

"My dream became a reality a long time ago darling"

i loved it!

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

Demanding Much !

Cocky Much !

Cheeky Much !

Arnav is back in form !!😆

Oh how he was missed not just by Khushi but also his virtual fan here !!😳

And jealous Khushi is so cute ... jealousy is a very strong and important emotion ..keeps the sparks alive if handled carefully !!

Viren and Sheetal just disgust me ,,, and now with this whole money angle to the marriage they just managed to stoop down even more lower which i thought was not possible cause they are already neck deep in shit !!

KBV gave Suraj his reasons for declining his hand in marriage for Khushi but i am not able to decipher what Suraj's present state of mind is !! He seems to be playing with both the parties here.

Also when he shared the information about the Tax raid i felt as though he already knew KBV knows about it and was trying to probably gain a bit of leverage !!

I dont know maybe my brain is working over time !!

Chapter 72 pray come early !!😃

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Congrats on the new thread

Never ever imagined being on the first page..so extremely excited...

As for the update I was thinking about the first chapter..what a journey Arnav and Khushi have completed so far..and you have developed their journey with such convictions and emotions that for me it has been more like watching than reading a story...glad that their psssionate encounters are back..even I have been missing it

Excellent chapter...loved Sooraj and KBV interactions..waiting eagerly for the story to unfold more

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anumadduri

@anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

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First of all congrats on the new thread , K :) Fantastic chapter . Just simply loved the banter between Khushi and Arnav . Their passionate sessions are back after a long time ... This vijayendra - viren business is to blame for this . You just gotta love a jealous Khushi . She is so fierce when she is jealous . The best part of this update was the interaction between Suraj and KBV . You have to give it to Suraj , he did not even hesitate taking blessings from KBV by touching his feet . It goes to prove that inherently suraj is not a bad guy ... It is just the company he keeps that is rotten . No wonder KBV was surprised as was not expecting this from suraj . You should never under estimate KBV , he is abreast of all that is going around him . Suraj should not have been surprised . And Vijayendra can stoop to any level to get funds for his party ...

Edited by anumadduri - 12 years ago