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Posted: 12 years ago
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Filmy me hi toh mazaa hai, meri Zee!!

You broke my sister's heart; I am going to kill you! Hahah! Talk about irony :P

It is never too late, hai naa? Hopefully everyone will find their happy ending now.

Loved the Arnav-Payal scene; moral of the story - never underestimate Paayaliya! 😆
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

finally finally...i managed sumhow to be on first page on ur story,,,,,,feeling like i just climbed mount everest...lol😉... LATE is your first story which i started to read...silently ofcourse...but by the time i reach...at your service...it feels like that i had to make a comment...i cant stop my self from commenting,,stalking,,liking,,after that...!! i cant stop myself from sending u a request...!!aapne bohot tym k baad accept ki thi😉😉...!! well...this is the bestest story which depicts so many emotions...from teenage to adoloscence...from romance to love...from betrayal to sacrifices...ever character here possess such a strong image...no one is left beyond...!!!

love payal for her brains and skills...!!
love khushi for her cuteness and innocence..!!
love anjali for being strong..!!
love shyam for loving anji and khushi so much..!!
love akash for having such understanding with everyone..!!
AND FINALLY LOVE ARNAV SO MUCH FOR NOT BEING ASR SO MUCH...!! 😃

there is a feeling in my heart that arnav cant do this to HIS KHUSHI,,,but when i read breakup wala part again and again,,,i thought that he is obviously ASR...!!
when u depicted khushi's pain,,,,it feels like that nothing can be worse than this pain which he is giving her...!!!
but after reding arnav's condition...the heart breaks...!!
he has gone through so much...khushi knows arnav break up with her...left her...but didnt know the reasons..the ACTUAL reasons...the poor boy know everything..he is in such a situation where he cant do anything...he cant see his di's pain...he can never give his khushi pain...and in this process...in this whole MISUNDERSTANDING...he gives HIMSELF a lot of pain...!!!

this update seriously make me cry...i always read ur update two to three times...but this time i sachmuch dont have the heart of reading it again...!!
a BADAWALA thanx to payal for cuming and clearing everything...bhala ho bechari ladki ka...!!!

sacmuch dimmag me yai song chal raha tha...!!
tuje bhula diya ho...
tuje bhula diya ho...
phir kyun teri yaadon ne...
muje rula diya ho...muje rula diya...!!!

superest awesomestt update...!!!👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
All's well that ends well. Thank God for Payal and her understanding husband Aakash. They cut short their honeymoon to come back and put things right for their siblings. Love this Payal. She is not only intelligent but observant too and takes the initiative to try and put things right when faced with idiotic sacrificing people. Loved the fact that all the misunderstandings are gone . Loved the scene where Arnav and Khushi are kissing and their elder ister and brother arrive. Can imagine Khushi hiing behind Arnav.
Also thanks for the mention but you should know that your updates are much awaited and a pleasure to read. It is I who thanks you for writing such lovely stories for our reading pleasure.
Edited by 1chilly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hv early dinner today plz nd update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
the other two are resed, now only this one to go! 😆
il unres as soon as i can...lots of packing to do! :/

--editted--

"You give me the whole world and not him, I will die. You give me just him and nothing of the world and I can survive"


it must have been terrible for him to make a decision to distance himself from her...
hats off to Lavanya for guessing that...truly she knws ur Arnav...
All i wanted was a reason. A reason that could convince me that he as suffered
as much as Khushi - woh toh mil gaya :')
Now i can happily forgive Arnav babua, as easily as Khushi 🤗




who wouldnt want a friend like NK? I love him for doing what he did - really!
Khushi is indeed lucky to have a loving sister and brother and a friend <3
actually, Khushi shud knw what NK did...but i guess some things are better left unsaid

I love payal. bas!
she is just amazing! the way she handled everything, and made arnav realise
that she isnt blind was too good! 👏

...and finally both the couples got back together to live happily ever after
lol the last khushi-shyam part was cute yet hilarious at the same time 😆
Arnav had seen Payal and NK's wrath, now its time for bhaiyya - god save him! ;p

filmy? thats just the way i like it! ;)

lotsa hugs! 🤗

Edited by ipkknd_hazel - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asrcraze

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"> FIRST RES MERA THA !!!😔</font>



Sorry abt it jus got lucky 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
filmy updates pasand hai mujhe!!!!😃😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res

**UnRes**

Awesome update..

Arnav is so understanding, he left Khushi - his
love, his life just because Khushi cannot stay
without her brother 👏
I misunderstood him 😭 Thought he will say
something in his angry mode which will hurt her.
It turned out to be the opposite.

Payal the savior, the hero, the mastermind.
Like the Payal in each of your stories, she not only
has a backbone but is strong and intelligent too.

Shyam married Sheetal because of her lukemia and
Anjali misunderstood him 😲 It is never too late in
Love...

Edited by Skiran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res.


*EDIT*


the end was really funny, but after such heart-aching revelations, thora toh hansi mazaak banta hai boss ^_^

everyone misunderstood each other in this story

Anjali- because she thought, Shyam might not "love" her anymore if he got to know about her limp

Shyam- he thought, Anjali must have lost interest in him, or better worse, moved on in life with some else

Arnav- because he thought, Khushi might be happy without him and not her brother, which in turn hurt her and him

Khushi- because she thought Arnav might have lost interest in her now

i don't get it, why don't people just TALK, when come's to misunderstandings? you know it HELPS, if you are not aware about it -___-

Yaar, ek baat toh batayein, when Khushi kept on calling Arnav like a broken record repeating itself, tab Arnav ka phone kia dustbin mein tha? 😲 'cause i just read he slept holding his phone? Am i reading too much into it ya phir as always i am lost? i guess the latter would be right answer😆

Itni ironic statement end mein?😆

looking forward to WHO kills who😆

take care and update soon😃
Edited by smarty94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Self sacrificing Arnav!!!! I am glad payal was able to knock sense into the Raizada siblings!! I think she is my favorite character in this story.. The way she handles everyone, and she is not afraid to stand up for what is right is fabulous!!!

Great chapter!

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